
Praise the Sun in the Paradise of Reincarnation
在轮回乐园赞美太阳
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- Ongoing
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- 454k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
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- Male
- Subgenre
- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 4y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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I always felt something was wrong while reading this book, but I never knew what was wrong. Until I stared at the words "Reincarnation Paradise" for a while, I wanted to say to the author, please change your writing to another paradise. "Reincarnation Paradise" is really not suitable for your style. You can go to another paradise. Samsara Paradise is a madman's paradise. The Samsara Paradise you describe is not "hard" at all, not "enhancing" at all and even a bit "simple". To be honest, your writing skills are not weak and you can "restrain", but Samsara Paradise does not suit your style, so try another paradise. The above are all personal opinions, and they only represent my personal views. I am not very good at it, I am a bit stupid, and I have offended many people.
Nicknamed Taiyi, its weapon is a small ball of light that can change its form. The ultimate system is the solar radiator, which is similar to a flare or the golden chicken's ray attack, or both.
Take a look at the complete list of Black Soul weapons. I personally feel that the weapons can be changed to liquid weapons that are a fusion of the power of the sun and special metals. They can be used as spears when riding mounts and in the form of whip swords when fighting. In mid-range and long-distance combat, the power of the sun is mainly highlighted. It is best to grow a weapon step by step. You can break the current sword and reforge it into a new weapon. However, it should be unbalanced (with high-grade materials such as sun debris, etc.) And grow into a multi-form weapon in the mid-term. Since the power of the sun is highlighted, the technical type should not be too prominent. The weapon can carry and extend the distance, and the short distance is not empty. Of course, in the middle and later stages, you must stack the status and devour the growth, and make arrangements for the later stages of weapon spirits and so on. Finally, I personally feel that the power of the sun should be a missionary (physical) legion style, with continuous output of ultra-high damage in the mid-range, ultimate range damage flare 6, and techniques that can entangle as long as it has ultra-high true damage and burn in melee. The enemy suddenly found himself cold
Character equipment building!
Because a person's brain is limited after all, so I want to brainstorm. If you have any original characters and equipment that you like, or come up with, or designed by yourself, you can write them down here. Maybe they can be used in the plot or appear in the book! Write down the equipment you designed, the character's name, personality, abilities, skills, or even special experiences in the past, etc. You can use your imagination as much as you want, thank you!
Nowadays, it is very popular in a certain type of fandom to transform the main character into a girl. I am just waiting for Su to be the heroine in a novel. 😏
Emmm, no internal smell! Although I'm talking about this fanfic, I can't help but think of Brother Xiao's early stage chops and bbs, and his inability to deal with charm in the middle stage to the point of breaking the pot! The contrast is still very strong. Xiao Ge killed so many female characters in the first world. When I saw it, I was shocked for the first time. What I thought was that someone finally killed the heroine!
Many of the settings were added by myself. The author said that it is okay to add some of his own settings to the fanfic, which is understandable. However, it is unacceptable that some of the original works in principle have very clear settings that are different. Especially, there is no penalty or attribute point reduction for mission failure. This is not possible in Samsara Paradise. Aren't the penalties for mission failure all execution? If the mission punishment was so light, it would be better to change it to another paradise from the beginning. The mission penalty is really unacceptable. After all, the protagonist's mission will not fail, so why not execute it.
It's boring to write about using a knife. I think Su Xiao's use of a knife is enough. I can't bring it in.
Maomao🙂
Author, is it possible that the protagonist is closer to the character of the sin of pride among the seven deadly sins? Among all the characters with the power of the sun, his character is the one I like the most. He is so arrogant that he has no enemies in his eyes, only pitied weaklings, no matter who they are.
In fact, I have never quite understood why lineage and profession are classified into one category. For example, the protagonist's bloodline is the Sun God clan, and then there is the sun sequence of the Sun Knight or the Lord of Mysteries. There is no problem at all and there is no conflict between any matching professions, but they are considered together.
I haven't read this book yet, but in terms of the Sun Sacred System in Reincarnation, I personally think it should be like this. First of all, what they worship is neither a conceptual god nor a real god. It should be simple nature, that is, the sun. Then I think their ability system should be based on the characteristics of the Sun. For example, the morning, noon and evening of the sun may not be visible in other places, but when seen on the earth, this shows that it has such characteristics. The light of morning softens the fiery bursts of midday and the twilight of evening. Their melee system is explosive and simple. Then the treatment should be in the morning. I think the source of their treatment should be the principle of purification, that is, when the sun rises in the morning, all the darkness is dispelled. It seems gentle, but it is very domineering. For the long-range system, you can refer to the legend of Hou Yi shooting the sun and the afternoon of the sun. It can be the feeling of confusion and suicide caused by twilight; it can also be burning, the energy in the enemy's body is burned to hurt yourself; or it can explode a storm hammer and throw it over, no matter who you are This is probably the feeling
A few suggestions... 1. Please refer to the original text of Mosquito for character value suggestions. The kid with 35 physical strength is too outrageous. If you want to show the difficulty of killing ghosts, you can use skills. The higher the stamina of Samsara Park, the greater the physical strength. If the value is set randomly, it will collapse 2. Write less about the worlds that Samsara Park has not written. It is too difficult to be as popular as the mosquitoes wrote, and they all came to Samsara Park. There is no need to avoid Brother Xiao. Samsara Park only has so many open worlds each time, so it is normal to bump into it a few times. It is recommended that Naruto Pirates walk more times in the early stage (after all, it spans so many levels of the world). There is Samsara Paradise, and you can reasonably avoid or encounter Brother Xiao. Later, I will write more about the original worlds of War World and Samsara Paradise, as well as the Void. In the original work, it is inconvenient for Brother Xiao to wander due to the law of destruction. You can write it in detail here. Finally, add the plot of inheritance in the real arena. Taken together, it is much better than your original work. Original It's easy to collapse. Once it collapses, its popularity will disappear. What does it have to do with you if you write more about the mosquitoes in the original work? 3. More contractors in the original work. They are reincarnations, and they look friendly. There are too many supporting characters in Reincarnation Paradise. Wouldn't it be useful to use those original works that don't have a lot of words? Looks friendly and won't get sprayed. 4. Develop charm and luck, you can persecute Su Xiao (cross out). It is interesting to develop the things that are not written in the original book, and it would be a pity that you are not destined to use charm 5. Consider an adventure group, don't forget it, it is fine whether you are alone or with a group It's interesting. For example, if you bring some plot characters into the group as contractors, you can also set up an organization like this. It's not like there is no such thing in the original work. You are a lone ranger who likes to run around alone. The zoo without Brother Xiao is very weak. Brother Xiao often cooperates in the later period. (And this is not good at word count) 6. The protagonist feels not very smart. For example, in this spin-off, he can bring a computer (Bubou Wang can connect with the earth in other worlds), or he can chase fans like Su Xiao (in fact, he also brought a computer). The protagonist has too few preparations, such as bringing enough water, a parachute (Brother Wu Umbrella is a lesson) and so on (it can also be a water word count... Bah)
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In my personal opinion, as a weapon, you can use a long-handled nail-head heavy hammer, combined with the sun's flames. One hammer blow will cause the earth to shatter and the earth will shatter. It is absolutely violent. If you use a knife, you can only use skills. I feel that the author's writing is still a little bit behind!
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... How should I put it? Let's not talk about the Reincarnation Paradise. Why didn't you take it away? Pipixiao got a world ring at the beginning. He can't leave until he turns it in. You are not much more powerful than the world ring. Moreover, I guess even the most powerful ones like you at a high level want it. How can a newbie get it? The author's original idea is very creative, but the location is wrong. This kind of thing should not be reduced to One Piece. It should be in the camp that believes in ancient dragons or the sun. Even if it is not good, it is also their allies. Moreover, when the protagonist is at level 5, he cannot go to the low-level world. This kind of top-level item that is at least level 9 or above must not crush him to death? Even if we don't talk about the ancient dragon, there are so many people who believe in the sun and can't use it, so they probably want to get it in their hands.