Junior Sister, Please Listen to My Explanation

The emotional drama and details can be said to be the richest among all the books I have read (including but not limited to romance novels), and the language is also the most beautifully written I have ever read. Why doesn't such good writing become popular?

Let me say it again, the author is faster

Open the character bar, holy shit! Collect now!

Maybe I have a slight masochistic tendency, I just like the feeling of grievance, the slight pain in my heart, the kind of feeling of being misunderstood and then enduring it silently, and then the heroine feels so relieved when she learns the truth hehehe

It looks good. I remember I told my classmates that love is always the same. No matter how many people you love, love will always be the same in the end. Because the experience of love is all love, it is one.

Starting from about chapter 60, I felt a particularly strong sense of fragmentation later on, and this feeling occurred more than once. It's like watching and missing a few chapters. Also, it is completely inexplicable that the male protagonist has to return to Earth life or death, and there is no explanation at all why he has to go back. Is it just because he does not have a computer or mobile phone? . . . Are all the ties in so many lives just paper? . . The male protagonist is not liked from beginning to end, and some of the female protagonists are also disliked. I really liked the beginning and the middle part, I couldn't put it down. There is also the latest male protagonist who was killed and reborn. It is estimated that the female protagonists will continue to receive good reviews.

The front part is pretty good, but is the author in a hurry? The back part falls apart, especially the mask flow after rebirth, the same master plot, and the ntr plot, which is simply disgusting. Although I know he is the protagonist, he is just disgusting. Those who have read the first chapter of Qiongming Goddess Record should understand that it is exactly the same. The disgusting mother opens the door to nausea. The whole psychological journey in the back, everything is startled and pretending to be literary. After reading it, I feel like I have been cheated.

，，，🙏🙏                   ， The water ripples caress you gently, and the smoke and willows dance in the wind. The houses in the small courtyard are built with new eaves. The sky is foggy, the fireflies are swiping, and the fragrance of white peach remains as before.

Update, it will be popular, at least like this🔥🔥🔥🔥💦💦💦💦

I hope it's not one of those partisan fights, where a bunch of heroines only end up with one in the end. If you want to write a single heroine, write a single heroine well. If you have to come up with a whole bunch of heroines, if you want to write multiple heroines, write a harem story well, and don't write a stud story (see the previous one). Can the author guarantee this?

After reading more than 60 chapters, I couldn't stand it any longer, so I ordered one chapter to say that it was well written, so I guess I got good grades, and then someone's literary youth syndrome started to set in. When writing online articles, how can you move yourself?

Please write it well. Although I copied "This Heroine I'm Familiar", that book fell apart. It was completely unfinished. Please don't write it down for me. This genre is inexplicably annoying to me, but there are not many novels with this theme. Don't be as bad as that novel. Give this genre a good ending.

This is bad, right? This must be a mess! ! !

I have to say that the author really treats readers as fools. Instead of writing good sweet articles, he insists on using knives, and also created a story about amnesia. No wonder you jumped on the street, you deserve it!

I said that harem stories are all rubbish, are you not dissatisfied? If you are not convinced, use the title of the book to argue!

Instead of writing a new book, I might as well continue writing this one.

It feels good. Because it is the author's debut novel, it feels very simple. There won't be so many messy things. It's good to read as a light novel.

Well written, but the ending is rushed but incomplete

The male protagonist was fine before he lost his memory, but he always felt off afterward

What the hell. Also did a set of amnesia ntr

It was fine at first, but then it started to get sick.

The first 60 chapters are invincible, based on my reading career of more than 7 years. Maybe it's the settings and descriptions. There are always contradictions. The first part was very good and all the bonuses were used up, but the later settings must be in conflict. Chapter 60 felt wrong. Looking at the finale, I was speechless. One of them died. Where were the others? Don't know either. It would be great if it could be expanded and the settings changed. What a pity, how can a good book appear so easily?

Just copy and paste that one

I remember there were hundreds of pictures in this book, right? Have you seen it on other platforms before? I want to look back and see why there are only 100 pictures now? I haven't finished reading it before, but I have seen more than 200 chapters. Does anyone know how to search for this book on other platforms? Or is there any place I can look at?

When I read it for the second time, I realized that it was less than 500,000 words. When I read it before, I felt it was quite a lot.

I read this book for the first time. I read fifty-seven chapters late at night. I liked it so much that I subscribed to it all. I like the author's writing style very much.

Not bad, it would be nice if the ending wasn't so rushed

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I want to ask, did Mu Xiaoke not explain the ending until the end? In the forest, Mu Xiaoke was lost. The protagonist comforted himself that she was lucky and must be fine. Then he turned around and flirted with his apprentice. This is the first time. I understand. I can bear it. On the Tangshan Bridge, Mu Xiaoke was going to set off a fireworks for the protagonist. Then the protagonist was taken away by Zhong Lixue, and he never found Mu Xiaoke again. , Of course, the protagonist is still in a state of amnesia at this time, I will bear with it for the third time. The protagonist is on his way to find his senior sister the day before his wedding. Mu Xiaoke comes to the door by himself. When it is obvious that something is wrong with Mu Xiaoke, he actually comforts himself that Mu Xiaoke is unlucky and will be fine. Then Mu Xiaoke lives up to expectations and becomes an extraterrestrial demon. . . ••••••

Come visit me with your work "The Witcher Begins in America" ​​and thank you! Added to favorites, great imagination, and the author's writing style is very good.