National Awakening: Mumu Fruit Is the Strongest

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Why doesn't the protagonist eat the fruit after awakening, or uses the fruit immediately after discovering that he failed to awaken? Isn't it possible that there are two powers? Is the protagonist stupid?

Author, please revise Chapter 4. It's impossible that there hasn't been an A-level genius in a hundred years. It's about the same in a few years. A city that is the main force in resisting monsters on the frontier hasn't even had an A-level genius in a hundred years. It has been destroyed long ago. Moreover, the probability of geniuses in such dangerous cities is often higher.

I have a sister, but the scenes in the book where we get along are so awkward that I live in the same place with three rooms and one living room.

It is not easy to write a book part-time. I have very little time and I have to rack my brains for each chapter. If you have any recommendation votes, please vote a little to give my work some exposure. The data is really bad and my mentality is a bit broken. Please help me. Thank you.

I think it's better to change the role of Lin Jing's brother-supporting demon to the sister-supporting demon. Apart from causing trouble, I don't see the elder sister's use.

Starting with a sister is too cliche. My sister's talent is more cliched.

I can barely read this book without my sister.

What a great book, if the main character didn't have this sister, this book would be a hit.

The setting is good, but there is always a kind of power between the words that I can't stand. In fact, the orphan is very good and easy to operate. How can I create a sister who is in the same class to restrict the development?

The book is very good, I could endure reading more than 2 chapters

Chapter 3 says that the two siblings have lived together for more than ten years, which is okay, but haven't you only traveled through time for three months? I didn't mention inheriting memories before, so how do you know what habits you have? You have to write that you discovered through observation that this habit is okay, and it hasn't changed for more than ten years. It's really amazing.

I simply don't like Japanese novels

It's not the book I want to read. I've read less than two chapters.

What the hell is a car with a fuel consumption of at least RMB 100,000 per 100 kilometers? The chapter where the protagonist buys a car says that the car costs more than one million and consumes one silver-level core for 1,000 kilometers. However, the previous purchases of silver-level cores cost more than 1 million, so the fuel consumption of this car is at least 100,000 per 100 kilometers. Driving 1,000 kilometers is equivalent to losing a car. The fuel consumption of your car is higher than that of an aircraft carrier. The fuel consumption of an aircraft carrier is about 150,000 per 100 kilometers.

It makes sense that it's not popular. The biggest feature of the book is that it's chaotic, with bits and pieces here and there. It's hard to read.

I don't know why, but it looks weird, but doesn't feel real.

If it is true that children can throw stones weighing more than a hundred kilograms, it would be completely inappropriate for the author to use a modern background. What do you think it is for someone with hundreds of pounds of strength to grow food? Refer to Dragon Ball, what kind of social form will it be if the force is high? Although it is impossible for everyone to fight like the Saiyans. But copying modern society really doesn't work. When writing a good novel, the outline is really important.

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