Volleyball Boy: Black Feather Legend

I, first

Many people have similar issues. For those who watch volleyball, it's right to like Kisuko-senpai, and it's right to hope Karasuno wins the championship. But what we like more is every plump and real character in it. The protagonist's setting is really not suitable for small volleyball. There is no perfect person in the original work. They all have their own flaws, but the ones that moved us the most were the moment when the butterfly broke out of the cocoon Yue's trembling hands The moment when the dragon crossed the cliff The moment when Hinata opened her eyes in the sky Volleyball never loses points The perfect protagonist makes us honestly not have too many expectations for the subsequent plot. A game is interesting when it comes back and forth. A one-sided game means everyone is sleeping. Even if novices peck each other

Are you writing a romance novel? How about writing it on a female channel?

Why do you have to join the protagonist's team? I admit that the protagonist team is very passionate and passionate, but don't the other teams need help? Qingcheng Xiye is the worst, right?

I think it's best to open 46 for daily games and games respectively. Too frequent games can easily lead to aesthetic fatigue. This is not an anime, and the gap in expressiveness between text and images cannot be made up. Let me just say this to the authors who write fan fiction at Qidian. Not all words and vocabulary, at least 98% or more of them are not enough. After all, it is an online novel, and it is still a fan. The writing threshold is too low, and it is not that Infinite Stream can change the world to give readers a fresh feeling, so Infinite Stream's writing style and vocabulary are almost okay. Therefore, if this type of fan fiction does not change the world, it will be very easy to get boring if it is a competition. For example, there are a lot of fandoms next door. They are all games, almost no daily life. One game contains dozens or hundreds of chapters, so forget it. Every time a pitcher pitches a ball, he describes the speed of the ball by saying "the ball jumps from the fingertips and flies as fast as lightning." Don't ask me what the novel is called, lest there be any suspicion of slander, I can only tell you that the title of the Diamond A novel is 4 characters long. The author, even if he is not a young author, has such a small vocabulary. You can judge it yourself.                ，，

It's good to be a street artist. If you want to write love stories, go to the female channel.

Let me first state that I haven't read the VIP chapter yet. The author probably has too many love plots. I think a large part of the people who read the article are people who like volleyball. Forgive me, when I watch anime, most of my attention is on the passion and competition of young people. The author, you don't write about volleyball in the key chapters in front of you. Do you write about love? ? ? Of course, you are the author and you have the final say. It's not a writing guide, it's just your personal opinion.

I am really speechless for you. . . . It has been repeated for several chapters. Didn't you read it before posting? You are the only one who can prevent theft like this. Others who are anti-theft can at least see something, but you don't show anything, and you are saying that you think highly of yourself. Indeed, this is the truth No one objects to you wanting to prevent theft, but you have some content for them to steal, and there is no content. Readers can only look at it with a hammer. . . After reading the discussion forum and seeing that you had replied to others, I decided to leave a comment in this chapter. I am not a black man, and I will not become a black man. If someone wants to scold me, first go to the recent chapters to see if what I said is right Reading a novel is just to find stability and end up making you mad. ╰（‵□′）╯

Just by looking at the table of contents, you will know that this is a love story wrapped in a volleyball jacket. There is no priority. No wonder the results are so poor.

It's not easy to meet a volleyball fan, the author is great, please do your best! Hold on o(*≧▽≦)ツ Whether it's a nanny-invincible flow or a hot-blooded, slow-burning flow, writing about volleyball fans is a good thing

Sports writing. . Not suitable for writing emotional dramas. . , We are here to see the passion and emotion 😥

I hope there can be more competition content. It can be included in daily life on campus but not too much.

Does this book have too much daily life? 😅 I want to see the male protagonist use various super powers to defeat everyone. As a result, the content of the competition was a bit lacking and not exciting enough 😭

I only read this book because of the emotional drama! Come on, author! Dog food makes me full

72W words. Since I've written so much, let's finish it. No matter whether it's good or bad, a book should have an ending.

I'm here to complain →_→, it's a bad ending. I think this is the best ending for this novel. There are many problems. First, many people complained that the male protagonist's emotional life is too rich. It's not that it can't be written, but in sports and competitive articles, writing too much about emotional life is boring and no one reads it. Moreover, sometimes the emotional life is written in several consecutive chapters. I doubt the author, are you deliberately short of word count? This kind of emotional life appears at the beginning of the book and appears in large numbers within 100 chapters. It is really discouraging. Who the hell wants to read about falling in love in a sports and competitive article? In reality, everyone is full of dog food. The fierce confrontations in training and competition in sports and competitive articles are the real attraction. And secondly, the protagonist is too Weak. Although there is no system or other problems, the protagonist played volleyball for ten years in his previous life, and he also became the main attacker and captain of the provincial team. Not to mention the top in the world, at least after being reborn, he must be able to be the top in the country as a high school student. But even his physical fitness is weakened because he is a high school student, but It's a little too weak, isn't it? The experience and skills in the previous life were all for nothing. He is 1.91 Meters tall and his physical fitness is not weak. He trained hard before the qualifiers and was able to use 70% to 80% of the advanced skills and experience. He can also be regarded as one of the best in high school. As a result, the qualifiers started, facing the four fans, why? Schools like Jiunan can't crush it. I think it's outrageous. It's outrageous to open the door for outrageous things. Thirdly, there are some setting issues with the protagonist. It is written as the childhood sweetheart of Shimizu Kiyoko. It would be enough to just write that the two are the same age. Then when they are in the first or third year of high school, they directly transfer to the school and write it as one year younger. What's the point? It was purely for the love between brother and sister, and then I traveled back to my original life. I played volleyball for one year in the second grade of junior high school, and then transferred to the basketball club for two years. This setting is also quite strange. Moreover, you haven't played volleyball for two years, and you are so strong as soon as you enter school. Even a fool can see that there is something wrong. Okay, fourth, this is it. The more I read this book, the more I feel like watching the text version of the anime. Since I decided to make changes, I made the changes a little bigger. Many places still follow the feeling of the anime, so I have the feeling of reading the text version. If the writing is similar to the anime, then I might as well watch the anime. Why should I read the text version?

He's alive, he's alive, brothers, the author is alive

There was a million-word article about Baseball King Ace before, and it also wrote about feelings. . However, after I wrote it, I no longer knew where my girlfriend went. I guess the author realized that he had gone astray and corrected himself 😏

After reading dozens of chapters, aside from the emotional drama, I thought it was well written. However, after discovering the eunuch, I no longer had the desire to continue reading. I will finish this book anyway.

Come on, come on, I finally have a nice little volleyball story. I must give it a good ending. It doesn't matter if it's slower.

Author, I beg you to come back. I think the relationship drama is okay. Although I jumped right into it, it's not a harem story that I can accept. Besides, it's not normal for the protagonist to have a girlfriend🌝🌝

The writing is okay, it has a sense of instant animation, you need to read it slowly

It's pretty good, but it feels too slow. It's good to watch 🤭

Wow, is this ready to be written? Come on

It's not that you're writing about Jiezi-senpai who can't even understand how to speak, so don't write about it. When did she ever speak with modal particles in high school? As soon as you come up, you should start with "ah" and use "oh" at the end of the sentence. Isn't it funny? Her straightforward personality in high school was still hidden.

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