The Junior Disciple of Master Deyun

I recommend you check out FeiLu's book next door, "Entertainment, Me, the Great Master of Deyun," to see what he writes about crosstalk. Although the later parts turn into everyday life in the entertainment industry, the beginning parts are really good.

Well, to be honest, I listen to a lot of crosstalk, and I haven't read the latest chapters at all; I basically just skimmed through them. I have a small suggestion: I understand that crosstalk performances are inevitable, but could you please be a little more concise? Goodness, five or six chapters are filled with crosstalk routines I've already seen.

Let's play a word chain game! I'll go first. Do whatever you want, then.

Author, you keep copying entire paragraphs of dialogue, just changing the names. It's unbearable to read. Most people reading this book are big fans of Deyun Club crosstalk; they know the jokes by heart. You haven't made many changes, and the performance chapters are easily skipped. What's the point? You might as well have come up with your own plot.

Li Dan is talented but lacks morals. He and his wife are both pro-Japanese, and when no one sold their products during their live-streaming sales, they scolded their fans. Their advertisements also insulted women.

That's hilarious! You think celebrities are all idiots? Live-streaming e-commerce is more profitable than you can imagine. Viya earns nearly 10 billion yuan a year, and this tax penalty shows it. Is being a celebrity really that lucrative?

Author, you're not from the North at all! Do you even know what "" means? It means either two people are from different generations or are a generation apart in age. My goodness, Zhang Er and the young master call each other ""—who's the ""? They're like brothers; that's how it's said in Northern dialect. Don't make this kind of basic mistake.

This is a huge improvement over the previous book on crosstalk, especially the character descriptions—they're amazing!

What kind of poisonous herb is this? 😅 The protagonist, a rich second-generation heir, has to fawn over Guo Degang; he only mentors his fellow apprentices through things he figures out on his own later; his creative talent relies entirely on plagiarism; his acting skills are lacking as he doesn't act in movies; and he wants to find an innocent girlfriend but ends up having sex with a prostitute...

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