Kill the Next Tenant

Golden Chapter Three, not very good. In this fast-paced market, if you are not one of those writers who already have a relatively solid fan base, you cannot be like them and write the first three chapters randomly. As a newcomer, you have to attract readers. Nowadays, there are just a few ways to attract readers. 1 The first three chapters introduce the protagonist's golden fingers. If the reader's interest is piqued, he will continue reading. 2 The first few chapters show your superb writing style. Many readers have very strict requirements on writing. If you meet their requirements, they will continue reading 3 The first few chapters create the image of the protagonist. Moreover, the image must be attractive and the protagonist must have his own qualities. The character of the protagonist who is currently popular at the starting point is low-key and decisive in killing. 4 Even if you can't do the first three points, you can still do the fourth point. That is, you are a great author. You have already gained some fans through your last book, and these fans are quite patient with you. Let me talk about your chapters. Generally speaking, they are cumbersome and unnecessary. You should get straight to the point and use it to develop the story. Then there's the characterization, which is a complete mess. Let me put it this way, before you have fans, ordinary readers are not willing to slowly watch the growth of a protagonist. They hope that the protagonist will have a relatively high personality charm and charisma from the beginning. We can't tolerate a cowardly and useless protagonist for more than ten chapters. I feel like you don't have much experience writing male videos, so you are a newbie. You must understand that male videos are about personal heroism, and readers come in just to see the protagonist sweep across all directions. The dormant, low-key and cowardly attitude in the early stage is actually just another form of sweeping across all directions. Therefore, the creation of the male protagonist is a top priority. Keep working hard and keep training. To be honest, the writing is pretty good, with some small advantages. In this case, let's write while utilizing our strengths and avoiding our weaknesses. Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

I was not satisfied with what I wrote at the beginning, so keep working hard.

This is my first time reading a male novel, so I think your subject matter is very good, because I have never seen it before. . . To be honest, I think your writing is really good, the sentences are fluent, the characters are very distinct, and the plot is not cliché. Looking back, I think my writing is really not as good as yours, so I'm sorry that I can't make any suggestions 😟

It's a pity that my level is not high enough and I don't have recommendation tickets, otherwise I would give them all to you 🙄