The Rules of Time Travel

What I wrote before was pretty good, really not bad. But when you wrote that 5kw is a dry hammer? 50 Million plus extra space? Is the protagonist stupid? Yes, one hundred square meters is a lot, but your main world has no connection with the government. What's the use of this hundred? No matter how much you pretend to be, what can you pretend to be? If you go to the Jurassic to get drunk, don't you know how to add some physical value? Seriously, even if you only use 1kw of the 5kw to add body or spirit, I will think that you, the protagonist, have some brains. 5Kw can add space 😡

I feel that the quality gets worse the more I write, falling into the same cliche content of this type of novel; and it is also too politically correct, resulting in the same content no matter where I am in the world, and I have no expectations, so it just slipped away.

I can't even figure it out. 50 Million points add up to space. The last reason I gave is that now I can finally install more life-saving resources. Isn't it funny? 10,000 Points is close to Captain America. You can't defeat the whole world with 50 million points. In this world, you can't save your life. Take 10,000 steps back. Don't you want me to use 10 million to strengthen your body?

It makes me really uncomfortable. You can go to the future. Why did you learn the ancient sword skills? Put a triangular military spur on your body, and go to the future to find a way to build a miniature military drone. If you can't get one, just use a pistol with a silencer. Why do you learn sword skills? For what? If you are a cultivator, I can still understand. If you practice swordsmanship to fight zombies like Doomsday, who can respond to a hundred calls and always maintain their physical strength to the limit, no matter how good your swordsmanship is, you can't stop your claws from scratching.

Let me first explain that I have only read about a hundred chapters, which gives me the feeling that I am as anxious as a dog after traveling back through time, and I don't know how many months have passed! I watched the protagonist become as anxious as a dog because of the disaster four months later. He said that he was patriotic and concerned about the people, but he slowly gave out information to the country. He even gave it a try first! Since the protagonist is afraid that the country will find out about the trouble, regardless of how many people will die, don't make the protagonist so worried about the country and the people! As a university graduate, you wouldn't think that the country only has one scientific research team, right? Don't you know what is demonstration~test model~test~finalization~raw material procurement~parts production~assembly~distribution, transportation and distribution~don't you know that soldiers still need to be familiar with new equipment, officers also need to prepare new tactics for new equipment, and soldiers also need to practice sword and boxing! The country also needs to make various plans to prepare various supplies. How long will this take? ? Does the protagonist think he is smarter than all the talented people in the country? A person relies on his limited wisdom, knowledge, and cognition to go out and collect technology that he thinks is useful? This is a bit weird to read!

I have ordered them all, but I have to give up the book. The more I read, the more wrong it feels! I want points, but I won't do anything in other worlds! The main world didn't communicate with Guo Jia, and it forced him to make amends because of his own mistakes! If you force yourself to be a personal hero, your personal power will never be as powerful as the collective power of the masses!

It has always been level 7 before, but after getting the 500 million interference points in 278, it was forcibly reduced to level 6. I'm afraid it would be crazy to just lower the protagonist's strength without anything happening.

The plot of selling pills doesn't work well, but the rest is pretty good.

The subject matter is okay. If the space is small, I can get a hard drive to download various scientific papers and literature. What's the point of getting pills? How much are they worth?

The author writes well at first, but what happens next? From the second time I went to the apocalyptic world, I felt that it was tasteless. Especially in the world of dinosaurs, there is a problem. 50 Million is used directly on space. How can you say that the body can also reach the fourth stage? The space for earning points is increased to 10 square meters. Save it to see if you need more points.