Hundreds of Magical Powers: Starting from the Chicken and the Rabbit in the Same Cage

Come on, the subject matter is good, go ahead, go ahead

Where is the poison? The era is not clearly explained, and there are some inexplicable narrations that are too watery. There is no explanation as to whether it is an overhead or time-travel experience, and the sense of immersion is extremely weak. The first one writes about magical powers. I don't think there's anything wrong with it. But the first one you wrote was from ancient times, but the magical power gave me a modern feeling. The characters are not explained clearly and the writing is not good enough for novices to read.

I read the news today and found that our country already has technology that can turn carbon dioxide in the air into starch. If the cost can be reduced and made popular, wouldn't we be able to eat enough by drinking the northwest wind? Isn't this technology more powerful than the so-called farmer's magical powers in this book? ?

Slow pace and lots of nonsense are two different concepts. It's too watery and boring. One thing is just a page or two away. Why talk so much? Do you treat readers as newbies who don't understand anything? The protagonist just does what he should do without having to explain it so carefully from the beginning to the end, from the inside to the outside, which seems very superficial. The pace is slow, and I usually fill it in by writing daily routines, rather than writing paragraphs of invalid chapters. This is such a loss of character!

This article is a different kind of farming article, which is about science and supernatural powers. The pace is very slow, so don't be surprised. To put it more simply, it is to guide science, use scientific methods to develop supernatural powers, and even study extraordinary powers. Also, the pace of farming articles is slow, right?

There are too many irrelevant things written, and I don't want to read them anymore.

I came here from the browser. I want to ask about the latest chapter, what is physical instinct, and what does it mean to be fine after passing this level. As a normal man, your actions were very abrupt, with no foreshadowing or explanation. Just a simple sentence. Where is your fiancée? ? ? I'm wondering if I can continue watching this

The emotional drama is very awkward. From beginning to end, only the author thought it was okay? Since I want to write about emotions, but I only write about the protagonist, the woman is just like a tool. They have always been controlled by the protagonist, they do not trust each other, and their status is not equal. Farming is not enough, it is not right to have fun. I know there are risks in doing things, and you don't have to reiterate that they are risky. If you don't say it, I can pretend it doesn't exist. You say it, point it out, and then do nothing. Lie down? Muddling along, right? Then don't say it!

Although I know that the protagonist is right to hide his behavior, I still feel aggrieved when I think about it. Others have developed powerful magical powers and become famous and respected. However, when it is the protagonist's turn, he has to hide and hide, like a wanted criminal. It feels aggrieved. Even though he knew that hiding his identity was the right choice for the protagonist, he still felt unhappy.

It's boring. The magical powers created by the human race are uploaded online and other races can learn them. What's the difference?

Are you writing daily prose? Professing to be a researcher, the whole article is about daily life in Luo Liba, speechless =_=

The idea is good, but the writing is poor. The Pacific Ocean doesn't have as much water as you

What a good electronic book. It's completely different from the Confucianism and Taoism. It's a pity that it has such an author. Is there any master who can imitate this book? Don't be stupid. The protagonist shouldn't be a coward or a love-minded person.

If the protagonist can't take advantage of Anonymous's luck points, then what's the point of getting this vest?

The water is too deliberate. It's not slow-paced and content, it's just for the sake of water.

Personally, I suggest that if you write it like this, the author might as well cut it. It's all water. Chapter sixty contains at least forty chapters of water. Anyway, I won't read it again in the future.

I just saw the place called Love at First Sight, and I feel like I can wait a little longer before watching it again. To summarize my feelings, it can be a reference for the author. It only represents my personal opinion. If you don't like it, don't criticize it. When I read it, I always felt that it felt rather fragmented and scattered. How should I put it, the novel mainly has two parts, one is about daily love, and the other is about creating supernatural powers. Although I have seen a lot of people saying that love is poisonous, I think it is acceptable, and the book about creating supernatural powers is actually okay. However, when I read it, I basically read it as two books, one part about creating supernatural powers and the other about daily love stories. I just thought about why there is such a scattered and fragmented feeling. As for the part I have read so far, I have not made a detailed comparison, but I feel that the novel's space about creating magical powers and daily love seems to occupy half and half. If it is wrong, I hope you won't criticize it. I am just talking about my subjective feelings after reading it. It's not that the content of the novel is divided into half and half, but because I saw the name of the novel coming in, my psychological tendency must be more focused on promoting technology, technological reform, farming and other content, but when I looked at it, I felt something was wrong. I can see that this is because of the occasional refreshment and expectations for subsequent technological reforms and the like. I think it is okay to write about daily love affairs, but I personally think that if it is a ratio of 5:1, I would be more acceptable. It is best to write more about creating supernatural powers. You can write about love, and you can intersperse it, but don't be too detailed. After all, I have what I should expect from the title of the book, right? The main reason that makes me feel separated is because compared to daily love, the part about creating magical powers is almost the same in length but has much less substantial content. Let me give you an easy-to-understand example🍐, that is, although the parts about daily love and creating magical powers are about half and half in content, daily love has already taken seven or eight steps on its own main line, but creating magical powers has only taken two or three steps on its own main line. To give an example that the author may understand better, it may be that Signals and Systems are already teaching you how to use Fourier transform to simplify the convolution process, but the advanced math courses in the class have not yet taught you trigonometric series. The advancement of the two main plots seems to have reversed the sense of progress. In addition, novels often use multiple different words to describe the same thing and there are a lot of inner dramas. It feels like the relevant content has been reduced, but maybe it's because I haven't seen the place where I fell in love at first sight. I guess there must be a lot of inner dramas in that place. I think this kind of thing can actually be reduced, and it is included in the content of daily love. The inner drama can be less. If you really can't bear it, you can write it in the extra chapter, not in the main text, because some people really don't like to read these. I am okay with reading these in the free chapters because of the title. After all, I have been reading online books for almost fifteen years, but I was a little hesitant when it came to subscribing to chapters, so I quickly stopped the car when I saw the love at first sight part. The above are just some of my personal opinions. They may not be correct. Just treat them rationally. If there are any problems, I can apologize and delete them. Thank you for your understanding. Long live your understanding! In addition, in fact, we should push forward a little more. If I remember correctly, it seems that "Kai Tian Wu Gong" already exists, which means that quaternary techniques, belt-open cubes and Qin Jiushao algorithm are all available (according to the time in Chinese history), and a chicken and a rabbit in the same cage are only two yuan and one. It's just a degree equation. Quaternion Technique can solve multivariate higher-order equations with four unknown variables: heaven, earth, people, and things. Qin Jiushao's algorithm can solve one-dimensional polynomial equations of any degree. Therefore, it is a bit outrageous that there are so many people in the novel that none of them has mastered Quaternion Technique, but it is still acceptable. Also, the seeds have already reached space. So if the world on the surface is a planetary system, then there should be a summary of the laws of planetary movement, such as Kepler's laws and so on? But it's also possible that this world is not a planetary system, emmmm, it's probably my own ideas.

1. It's a bit long-winded. 2. The title and introduction of the book indicate that the focus is on mathematics. However, in the end, I have been struggling with the problems of farmers.

If half of the content is deleted, it will not affect reading at all. These can all be compressed. I'm so sad, it looks uncomfortable

Emotional scenes are poisonous and increasingly poisonous. What kind of couple needs no privacy at all? ? ? ? Are there even a few cracks? It is recommended that the emotional scenes be deleted

The writing in the first 20 chapters was really good, but then it became crooked. I came to this book for the title, but why did the author go to write the emotional drama? I don't believe that the readers came to read this book for the emotional drama. Final guess: Did the author just fall in love?

The logic is not strict and there are many flaws. I wonder if things will get better in the future Abandoned

The creativity is good, and the writing can be said to be rigorous or verbose. Anyway, the creativity is not reflected, and I ran away after reading 40+; Secondly, daily life ≠ boring + running accounts ≠ slow pace, farming ≠ water injection, love + fantasy =? ? ? , In fact, there are too many elements in it, and the author's balance is not very good. Maybe the author wants to embody love in daily life, and analyze fantasy + science in the field, but love is not sweet, and fantasy is still unfinished, so everything is almost meaningless; In the end, the big framework is still okay, and I hope the next book will be better despite deletions, changes, and modifications.

The subject matter is good, but the author's writing style is very discouraging to old bookworms. Too wordy.

It's really not that the pace is slow, or it's just too dull. I basically skipped it when it came to falling in love. It's a very creative and interesting article.

I have read a novel that says that the protagonist travels to another world to create the Internet and becomes the God of the Internet. According to the setting of the novel, as long as the Internet Magic is used, the protagonist will be given Essence (Esence can make gods stronger and create magic; Divinity Gods create spells similar to spells, and the user will be watched by God and given the Essence) The source of essence is also the fundamental reason why that world accepts believers. Then other gods see the crazy spread of Internet magic in their mission areas. Gods with conditions create their own Internet magic, but without conditions, no matter how strong your divine power is and how many believers you have, you can't help but become an affiliated god of the god with the Internet. This becomes the Internet God System If this is the setting, then this inexplicable space and magical treasure house should be the world of a certain Internet god to develop magical powers. In this way, there is a source, instead of just being fooled by whatever the author said, and it is still an inexplicable space? Have you noticed that no one has a name for how many years? I'm really speechless😤. Judging from the popularity in 2021 and the number 365, it can be seen. The author, you think I am a fool and fool you! So careless😆

Reading half of it is so verbose. If you don't have a career, why should you have a sweet pet?

The idea is good, but it is just watery. There are too many love complexes. I subscribed to more than 20 chapters. After jumping for a while, I wanted to withdraw. Alas, I might as well switch to a female channel.

There is not so much water in the Pacific Ocean

I can't stand it anymore😱It's so grinding and annoying!