Begin the Holy Grail War with the Black Shadow Corps

It's a headache. The subject matter is very good, but it's too watery. It uses a lot of space to install 13, and there are obviously better and more efficient methods in terms of early intelligence. It's written too much and it's not foreshadowing and long-winded. There are also many obvious loopholes in the setting. After reading several chapters in a row, I don't have any wonderful impression at all. I'm also tired. After a certain number of chapters, my abilities are messed up, and I have a headache.

It's very interesting. Come on, author.

Don't make the villain not like the villain or the upright person, but often act like an ignorant child on both sides. Villains don't necessarily have to kill people randomly and continue to do bad things. Aizen, Uchiha and Madara are not just killing people indiscriminately when they have nothing to do, right? The people they kill are basically the strong ones they are targeting, otherwise they are too lazy to get their hands dirty. Moreover, one is for the sake of becoming stronger and the other is for peace. Madara was deceived into taking the wrong path, otherwise he would not be a villain at all. Aizen is actually pursuing power and wanting to be king, but he only touches the rule of the protagonist group. An arrogant person like Aizen wouldn't even bother killing the weak. Becoming stronger is his ultimate interest.

There are too many moon blows. There are only a few surface levels, which are called multiverse levels. The multiverses are all the five creation gods of Marvel and prehistoric times. DC monitor, at this level, why is Zhu Yue's ability to project the moon, and pull the moon with the curse blue, not his own ability? There are many planets and meteorites outside the moon that can be pulled over. Please, its ability is gravity, which is the four basic forces of the universe. Gravity magic and the like are the weapon abilities of these characters. If you remove this and talk about combat power, I am not a fan of Jackie Chan Adventures. I only watched it when I was a child. I am Heroes of the Century. But it is not that exaggerated. The multiverse, the basic story is only on one planet. The biggest event that happened was the destruction of the earth's surface. Even if we talk about time travel, it means traveling to a parallel world or playing on the earth. Jackie Chan also has these things. There may not be parallel world settings such as spell travel, but the two works basically cause trouble on the earth. There has never been a galaxy or star cluster incident, and the combat power of a single universe is empty. Where did the multiverse come from? The omnipotent universe

The best tool man in the world, the Black Shadow Corps

I forced myself to finish reading the Holy Grail Volume, but I couldn't hold on any longer. I felt that there was too much nonsense in the whole story, and the writing style also had a pretentious feeling, and there was a suspicion of water. For some reason, I just couldn't read it. I didn't understand the character of the protagonist. It was just contradictory and strange. The whole character of the protagonist still didn't feel established, which was hard to stand. If I really want to find one advantage of this book, it is that the changes to the original plot have a greater impact on the plot. This is something I appreciate more. However, I really couldn't stand it anymore and it was tiring. To summarize two points: 1. The author's writing is full of nonsense and pretentious. It feels very watery. It feels like you haven't read it before. 2. The character of the protagonist is so fucking weird, it feels like he has no self. Calling him a psycho is flattering him, but he is not a normal person either. I cannot understand or sympathize with him.

Study, when I was practicing painting today, I suddenly thought of this newly updated content (from the beginning of Chapter 59). I felt that this scene was very graphic, and I had a wave of explosions of the second soul. Ps: It's all based on impressions, light spray. Jpg Inspiration clip: With his feet dangling in the air, leaning on the throne, he is the master of the black shadow. The darkness behind him is like a hanging eye/Pile under the throne are treasures that look like dust.

To be honest, the author, if you want to write about Jackie Chan's Adventures and Xingyue's fanfic, you might as well use qi magic. That thing is much more powerful than magic, and it is basically the same as Xingyue's fifth magic.

Hodgepodge. . Ghost Blade. . Add in that too. Ghost Blade is considered useless in FGO

It's a good book, there are not many bbs to kill decisively, the author of the blood book is overdrafted and updates 10,000 words every day

Become the biggest villain and kill all the little Japanese devils

I haven't read it yet, but I have a question after reading the title: Why is it the Black Shadow Mercenary Group and not the Black Beast Mercenary Group? My Big Black Beast Mercenary Group also wants to be the protagonist for once.

Stop arguing about combat power. It was decreed by Mushroom. The first generation Ultraman killed Xingyue. Do you understand?

One said it and the other was a little confused. Before I read the book, I saw the comment section talking about Xingyue's combat power. Regarding Xingyue, I have only watched a little bit about the Holy Grail War, which seems to be the one with King Arthur and the Golden Sparkle. The destructive power is only average, so how come the multiverse and the world-destroying star came out?

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I came here to read it after reading the author's new book. Although the opening routine is similar, I feel that the new book is better than the old book. The old book always feels unnatural, too deliberate and artificial, and it always seems a bit irritating.

Okay, I looked back and saw that the protagonist is really, originally morality was a constraint given to himself, and this is a proof of being a human being. However, the protagonist thinks that these things are shackles given to him by humans. Okay, just think of it as the individual protagonist who wants to break away from the human race. But, I really can't stand it. After all, I really think I'm a good person. According to this book, this means that I have put a yoke on myself, but I feel that having such a yoke can better restrict what I do. I want to be a good person and do good things to help others. This satisfaction cannot be satisfied by other things. But the protagonist of this book is no longer about good and evil, but the opposite of everything I know. Of course, this is not the author's fault, but that your writing is really good. At least in this new book, there is no one who is more profound than the protagonist you describe.

Just a self-heating pot, the water is not good

There are so many illicit stories in the story that I didn't even get to the point when my eyes hurt. The plot progress is too slow. I don't feel it if I want to be cool, and it's not funny if I want to be funny. It's very boring. I can only say that it's not poisonous. It's a good book to read.

Isn't this too much to boast about Little Sun? The King of Knights in full armor and with the main demon sacrifice is like this. The Little Sun without golden armor is about 50-50 against Gawain, and the little Sun with armor is about 60-50 against Siegfried. Siegfried is only as strong as the one without a scabbard. The King of Knights is almost the same, but it turns out that the author just wrote that it was a crushing game. It is impossible for the complete King of Knights to be crushed in a hand-to-hand combat with Uncle Hai. It is really crazy that this kind of complete body and full equipment can achieve this kind of virtue.

The ink is really good. I have read more than 70 chapters, but I haven't yet summoned the heroic spirits. I feel that it is not a problem to write 500 chapters in four battles at this speed...

I haven't read the original work, so it's so wordy that I really can't read it.

I feel like the protagonist is just a kid who is brainwashed by Pluto's vulgar words. He is more like a hungry wolf who thinks I am handsome when he does bad things. However, the protagonist's portrayal is not as good as that of a hungry wolf. So, I personally feel like it is a novel written by a hungry wolf.

Too much nonsense, too much nonsense, too much nonsense, too much nonsense, too much nonsense, too much nonsense, too much nonsense, too much nonsense, too much nonsense, too much nonsense, too much nonsense.

1: This book is a bit rubbish. You can skip reading it. I don't recommend subscribing. It's too dumb, too dumb, too dumb 2: The more I read this book, the more I lose my desire to read. It's not as good as the comment section. Anyway, I read all the comments in the comment section. I'm much happier reading the chat posts than the main text 3: The protagonist is a naughty person, and the author's portrayal is too deliberate. He is full of middle-schoolers and a pure naughty kid 4: It's a bit of nonsense and the author has a few hundred words. This author can give you 50 chapters of Chelulu talk.

There are a lot of psychological descriptions, battles, plots, and character descriptions that are all covered in one go. It would be better to read this novel instead.

The first few pictures at the beginning looked very cool, but in the next few chapters, he went to find trouble with the little gangster, and he kept nagging, there is no point in pretending to be cool with the little gangster.

The first ten chapters are all water, and there is not a single mention of the Holy Grail War.

Great book! I have to say that the most interesting thing is to read the book reviews written by netizens of genuine sand sculptures. It makes me happier especially when I play with various jokes.

Author, I suggest you write about the plot of Steins; Gate in your next book.