Narration System Starting from Konoha

This narration is so buggy, everyone can see it, all the secrets are known to each other, there will be no reasonable conflicts between people, and the story will not continue. . . . The hanging range is not suitable.

It's quite interesting, it's a kind of spoiler article. But unlike some Q&A and live broadcasts that are very thorough and prone to aesthetic fatigue, the narration is quite enjoyable. But with the presence of narration, there may not be much combat description. As for the protagonist being Sasuke's younger brother, it's actually not bad. After all, it's interesting to see the tsundere Erzhu show off in front of his younger brother.

The writing is very interesting, and I laughed out loud just reading it. The creativity is really good, but I personally feel that the entry point of the protagonist's identity is not very good. Sasuke's twin brother Sora is too bad. I really hope the author can maintain the level he started at. Many books that rely half on creativity are at their peak in the first fifty chapters, then start to weaken after a hundred chapters, and then there is no more 🤔... Come on, author!

This book does not change the plot, the author is pure water, there is one more person, the whole world has a narration, such a big change, the plot remains the same, the author at least has some creative ability, I came to read the novel, not to see the Naruto anime, in short, it is an ordinary book

To be honest, the protagonist is useless. After the narration in the ninja world, nothing has changed except for revealing some secrets. Li's fracture is still broken, and Hayate is dead as well. Team 7 is still following the original trajectory, not much has changed. Sasuke is also cursed. The existence of the protagonist is the same as the narration, just a few words, except for the addition of some disgusting enemies.

Aren't you tired of having to poop and pee again and again with smoke bombs?

This kind of book is just fresh to read at the beginning. Without any changes, readers will get tired after reading dozens of chapters. The author seems to regard this kind of alternative spoilers as the only highlight of the whole novel, but readers will not feel any pleasure after reading the whole novel. But the essence of Naruto fandom is that strength is king. The Hatake Yasuo allocated the words very well and used gags as spices. The results of this novel are basically the same. .

It felt okay in the beginning, but when I read Chapter 16, I felt like it wasn't quite so good. The Third Generation conspiracy theory should really be written in every fanfic. After watching the anime a few times, I felt that the Third Generation was a little ineffective in dealing with Naruto's problem. What other problems are there?

This book was a hit. . . . Not saved

After reading a few chapters, I suddenly realized that this narration system is the pursuit of mutual understanding between people in comics. Isn't this more awesome than Eye of the Moon?

It was quite interesting to watch at the beginning, but the further you look at it, the less interesting it becomes. The protagonist is no different from trash. He is also a dignified Uchiha clan after all. If you don't give him a Sharingan and don't let him master ninjutsu, you let him make smoke bombs. Tell me, you are in the ninja world. If you throw a smoke bomb, can you blow up a Jonin? In the later stage, how do you write it? Just those photo albums from the later period that were all over the place and six paths flying all over the sky? Not to mention throwing smoke bombs, if the other party wants to, they can kill you as soon as they meet.

This book. . How do you feel about it? When I first started reading it, I felt it was quite novel and interesting, but after about 20 chapters, I felt that there were too many narrations throughout the book, which made it a bit boring to read. Personally, the Naruto fanfics I like to read are basically cheating, training, becoming stronger, cultivating companions or subordinates, and combat descriptions. This book basically does not find any of these things.

It's because I haven't put enough effort into writing a book. Can you give the protagonist some positive feedback? It's sixty chapters, and the protagonist's strength is unclear. He uses small tricks to fight whoever he fights. Sasuke is a genius who took down two chuunin in his first mission outside the village. Zabuza assassinated the Mizukage and escaped unharmed. Orochimaru's murderous aura shocked Hayate Kakashi. These people were all killed by your protagonist using smoke bombs, gas bombs, and crotch picking? If it were that easy, Chiyo or Sanshouyu would have already unified the ninja world. The development of the plot has not changed. Zabuza knows the news and returns to the village. Will Kirigakure ask Konoha for an explanation? Or simply forget about this plot. What you call narration now is to reveal your inner thoughts and some irrelevant information? If you really want to write a narration, it should be: Kakashi looked at Naruto and thought of his teacher, the Fourth Hokage, who died protecting the village. Unfortunately, he didn't know that it was his classmate Uchiha Obito who killed the teacher. The Third Hokage looked at Sasuke and Sora and thought of Uchiha Itachi who massacred his clan for the sake of the village. Is the Uchiha clan really inherently evil as the second generation teacher said? Why don't you come up with some big news to shock the world?

I failed after three chapters. The so-called narration is too disturbing to read. I think this book is a hit on the street.

The protagonist is quite redundant, there is no difference between having it and not having it

Are Naruto fandoms as incapable of conspiracy theories as prehistoric novels? There are conspiracy theories every day, which makes me sick.

The narration is full of spoilers, but in the end nothing changes and the author only copies the plot.

If it's an everyday world, then this book is fine. If it's in the world of Naruto, it's just empty talk if you don't improve your strength. Without strength, you're like a grasshopper in a pot, the difference between dying early and dying late.

Many people have written about the salted fish setting before. Later, fewer people watched it, and I always felt that those who aimed at salted fish were basically just showing off. Originally, salted fish was a derogatory term, commonly known as trash. I don't know why many protagonists are proud of salted fish. The protagonist and Shikamaru are a duo. Shikamaru has an IQ of 200. He is a real fish, while the protagonist is pretending to be a fish and working hard behind the scenes.

This novel was interesting when I first started reading it, but I don't know why I got tired of it. I can't stand it anymore, chapter 37 is over, goodbye👋🏻

Boring, awkward, the plot remains the same, and the protagonist is redundant. It was refreshing and entertaining at the beginning, but became more and more boring as it went on.

One word, cloud, and forceful and brainless suppression of strength

This novel is just enjoyable to read through the narration, and the plot doesn't change much. The only bad thing for me is that it ended too hastily. Not to mention Hagoromo and Hamura Kaguya, I didn't even mention other Otsutsuki Wen in the ninja world.

Good guy, just by looking at the title of this book, you can tell that it's the kind of book you'll enjoy reading. I haven't seen so many trolls in the comment section in a month.

The plot is pretty good, but the details of the fight include wearing a mask and throwing smoke bombs. This kind of fight is so boring every time.

Why are there so few reviews for this book? I feel that this book is the best among the best, while there are so many reviews for novels that I regard as ljs.

This book can be said to be one of the rare masterpieces among Naruto fans. It took me two days to read it, which is enough to show my love for this book.

The author's writing is good. I would like to recommend the book he wrote. Friends who are book-hungry can take a look. Just click on the avatar. It is non-toxic.

It's just that the finale gave me the feeling that it wasn't finished.

This novel is one of my favorites