The Beginning of All Heavens Is Martial Arts

Fist of the North Star

Character Picture of the Strongest Disciple - Fenglin Temple. Miu

The world is so big and you stand so high, but you still can't see it all. Maybe, I'm not standing high enough

There is no theme, why is the obsessive desire to become stronger not reflected?

My evaluation of this book is that it can advance in the Tao and reach the peak of its skills. The only thing that is not good enough is that every time you leave the world, you should create a scene. The purpose of going to each world is to be magnanimous in the martial arts, to show yourself as a saint in front of others, and to establish martial arts for the world. It is also a feedback to the world. What's more, the final chapter of each world leaves a real myth and legend, which can be the finishing touch. It doesn't matter whether the author is a great person or not, I think the author writes well.

This protagonist is suitable for a book written ten years ago

I hate Ace, Luffy, Brooke, Usopp, Franky, Garp, Luffy's father, and Ace's biological father in One Piece

Martial arts... If you want to talk about martial arts, you have to read Hong Kong comics. If there are any good martial arts systems in Japanese anime, they are all based on bloodline.

The writing is quite good. Could it be possible to have more emotional scenes between Sakuya and the protagonist?

Sure enough, the beauty is in the bones but not in the skin, she is beautiful and sassy

They are all superficial, without their own ideological connotation, and they are just as worthless as water numbers. There is no depth.

For the sake of Fist of the North Star, I added it.

Why don't you go back to Beidou World?

I hope Lao Shuoye or Reina can become CP. These two are perfect for each other Don't let Rao fall in love with that Yulia.

If I want a perfect world, I can replace it with the God of War or the Mysterious Weapon.

The protagonist's personality changes too quickly, and it also gives people a pretentious feeling.

The writing is too remote and the world is introduced too little, leaving people confused about the description of the characters and story.

I hope this article can be completed soon. The mysterious weapon is still interesting.