The Immortal Cultivating Family with the Gate of Time and Space

Until now, I don't know what the protagonist's golden finger is for.

Creativity and literary talent, if the rhythm of this book is grasped, it can be a high-quality book. After all, it is a novel about cultivating immortals. It looks like this when writing about promotion and breakthrough. After all, it is a family novel. Few people will definitely make a man. Don't write another 5 or 6 hundred chapters and you will not have any children. When you are done, you still ask the tribesmen to marry more and have one of your own. It feels baffling to read it. After all, it works well. Don't blame the author for complaining!

The only uncomfortable thing is when I see a woman, that's all. Anyway, I feel a little uncomfortable.

I don't know how to say that the subject matter is particularly good, but this subject matter does not seem to have much to do with the protagonist 🤫 And as soon as the Wan family brother and sister came out, it felt instantly bloody. At the beginning, they said they were going to get married, but then a heroine started to appear, who seemed to be someone from the previous life. This was a direct collapse.

This book has many good ideas, but the author is not strong enough, the writing style is not good, the writing is very dragging, and the protagonist seems childish. I can read the book, but I can't stand it anymore because I'm very tired from reading. Of course, if you don't have any brains, you can still watch it.

The subject matter is great! It's just that the author's writing is a bit unsatisfactory. After all, everyone is here to read the novel. The protagonist you wrote is of no use at all. After all, everyone is here to read the novel and enjoy it. The protagonist you wrote has no advantages at all.

There is nothing to say about the setting. The key is whether it can be stable. The focus of family novels is to reflect the family. Now it is basically just the rise of an individual. When it is over, the family is basically a burden. The most important thing is that other ancestors do not run around, pig feet can run around, many things have become the default settings. I hope this novel will get better and better as it is written.

The idea is good, but the writing is extremely toxic, which is a pity 😐

The protagonist is nothing like a time traveler. After experiencing the bombardment of modern information society, the protagonist is still so naive and novice? It's not like I just traveled through time, but I just passed through the womb.

Everything else is pretty good, but I feel like the protagonist is very softly portrayed in every aspect.

The setting is good and the plot is good, but it would be better without the Harpy protagonist.

Just click on the main character and write it to death, then search for "I am God" and write it like that. Otherwise, change the character of the main character quickly, otherwise 90% of the time you will attack.

Just write him as an aborigine. He doesn't look like a modern person at all.

What does the protagonist's golden finger mean? It feels like it has no sense of existence!

Caring for seedlings starts with me

It's a good idea, but it feels better without the main character.

The setting is good, but the plot is not good, it is very poisonous,

The subject matter is good, but the writing style is not very good.

Wow, such a good subject, you have been exposed to all kinds of poisonous points in turn. I have been poisoned since I met the brother and sister. I really can't bear it.

The pace is too slow, and the beginning is not very exciting. After reading more than ten chapters, it is still mediocre. Well, the introduction to this book is well written.

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I feel that the creativity is very good, but it is all supported by creativity. The author's writing style was a bit difficult in the early stage, but until recently, I feel that it is okay. I want to write well and don't waste such good creativity.

In the original setting, Wan Dongling and Meng Ximing were husband and wife in their previous life. They accidentally obtained two books (the soul book and the body book) and came to this world unexpectedly. Originally, I wanted to develop the relationship between the two bit by bit, but I didn't expect that everyone didn't like it and was scolded as a licker. Of course, it is probably due to my own fault. I am not strong enough to write with that kind of effect. I would like to apologize to everyone again. To avoid the embarrassment of writing in the future, I will reduce the plot of Wandong Ling. It is my fault that everyone is unhappy with it. I will pay attention to it in the future. At the same time, this book is not a stud book, not a stud book. The reason why Meng Ximing licked Wan Dongling was not love at first sight or brainlessness. There was a reason. They were husband and wife in their previous life.

Wan Dong Ling

The subject matter of this novel is very good, but there are too many poisonous points. The author re-opened a book called Don't Lick the Dog.

It's creative, I like it very much, it would be nice if it could be faster ٩(♡㉨♡ )۶

A heroine who only appears in a few chapters? There are not as many as this elf, so why not an elf heroine?

The subject matter is okay, but the protagonist is a bit stupid

I don't understand, it's already 2021, why there are still so many novels about cultivating immortals that use the number of spiritual roots to determine qualifications. If I have more spiritual roots, I can practice multi-attribute techniques. As long as every spiritual root is utilized, wouldn't the cultivation speed be faster? As for the qualifications for cultivating immortals, they can be determined by points. For example, if you have less than 20 points, you can only practice until the Qi training period, and you cannot build a foundation. It is possible to build a foundation below 40 points, but the success rate is only 20 to 30%. If you have points below 60 points, you have a high probability of building a foundation, and there is a 20-30% chance of forming a core. It is basically possible to form elixirs with points below 80, and there is a 20% to 30% chance of becoming a baby. If it exceeds 80 points, the greater the number, the higher the chance of becoming a baby. As for the realm above Nascent Soul, it has nothing to do with spiritual root qualifications.

Didn't I, the author, say that you will fight to death and refuse to change? If you don't believe it, just ask us readers whether the two brothers and sisters are poisonous.