A Mysterious Journey Through the Pirate World

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The idea is good, but the writing is not very good and does not create a sense of mystery. Although the combat power of the five paths of God is not strong in the early stage, it is not weak in other aspects. Not to mention the five paths, even the "audience" can play with the Celestial Dragons. Moreover, the audience is more arrogant than the Celestial Dragons. He regards everyone else as a dramatic actor. How could the protagonist, who was almost tamed by the Celestial Dragons, be regarded by the audience as a theatrical clown performing for him as his master?

How should I put it? It feels like the protagonist can be easily brainwashed by empathy. The Draco at the beginning and the Murlocs at the end all gave me the feeling that I forgot who I was as I was doing it. I would say he was acting, but it did not meet the first rule of acting, "Always remember that you are just acting."

You can use your imagination. No one has written about the path in Lord of Mysteries, but you are too greedy. The end of the complete path of Mystery is the fingers opened by the gods. It is too big, too many, too empty! The most suitable thing for pirates is sailors, one piece is enough. Write each stage of the path in detail, write down the characteristics, and use your imagination to play with it! It's a great book! There is also a big problem with the way you write the plot. In the first chapter, the protagonist knows the world of One Piece and its secrets, but why does he seem to become a native in the later chapters? And his character is really servile! Nausea! The author will revise it or rewrite it, and it will be a good book!

When I was in junior high school, I was dragged into the anime pit. When I was in college, I discussed the three major comics with my classmates. You, the Death God, are too open-minded. You might as well end it with Aizen. You Hokage can't escape the bloodline and talk about fatalism. There are only a few people and a few things coming and going. Look at how well our pirate rubber fruit has been developed. One person My friends who are going overseas are all on the way, and now you tell me that this thing is [Renren Fruit-Phantom Beast Species-Nika Form]. Now when I answer calls from my classmates, I hope they are asking me to borrow money. Sure enough, all efforts, struggles, victories, and passion are all lies. Cheating, blood, and destiny are all small🇯🇵He can't write anything else!

Maybe for the sake of fun, the author felt that a single path was not satisfying enough, so he added five paths to the protagonist. Later, I still felt a little unhappy, so I castrated all the unfavorable negative things in the path, such as losing control, digestion potions, and promotion rituals. But I still don't think it's fun enough, so I incorporated the pirate's Devil Fruit. And to make it even more fun, I may see multiple Devil Fruits incorporated later in the plot. Then, it became what it is now. For some popular science, Lord of Mysteries has a total of 22 paths to God, and the setting is the best I have seen in the past few years. Drink the magic potion, enter the extraordinary sequence, digest the magic potion using the acting method, and after digestion is completed, you can drink the next sequence of magic potion. Starting from the middle and high sequences, in order to increase the probability of success in promotion and reduce the risk of losing control, a promotion ritual has been introduced. As the sequence increases, the promotion ceremony will become more demanding. In low-sequence, if you master the acting method, you can quickly achieve promotion. The purpose of the role-playing method is to speed up the digestion of magic potions, and since this book castrates the magic potion, the role of the role-playing method is unknown. It is only known that the protagonist can use the role-playing method to advance, but it is not clear how to advance. At the same time, the subsequent high-sequence promotion rituals will most likely be omitted. The combat power in Mystery, if there are no sealed objects in the low sequence, it is basically difficult to fight against the pirate world. For details, you can look at Zhou Mingrui's performance in the low sequence 😏. Starting from the middle sequence, the combat power displayed by various channels of Mystery has essentially changed. At the high sequence of demigods, angels, etc., They begin to play with concepts and basically crush pirates. As far as the audience path is concerned, low-sequence battles basically rely on weapons. Starting from the middle sequence, since the pirate world has almost no resistance to psychic abilities, the protagonist can use the ability of the audience path unscrupulously to tamper with the thoughts of the Celestial Dragons, and later modify their consciousness, from slaves to the masters of the Celestial Dragons in just one thought. Even at high sequences, tampering with the entire world government and even world consciousness is just like playing games. We must know that the audience is a Sequence 0 dreamer, and everything he dreams of will come true. Under this premise, if the author does not reduce the mysterious combat effectiveness, this book will be out of control from the beginning. This is still a single path, five paths will be even more explosive. Faced with such a situation, it is easy to understand that the author must greatly weaken the capabilities of these paths, otherwise there will be no way to play at all. Even since there is no magic potion and no digestion, the author has the final say on how to advance. The author can limit the protagonist's path to a low sequence to act as an auxiliary for the sake of reasonableness. The battle still relies on the local strength of the pirates, such as devil fruits, knowledge, color, and armed color. So don't complain about why the author wrote it this way. This is for the sake of reasonableness and can only be written this way. Otherwise, the path is still so strong and there is no risk of losing control. After staying with the Tianlong people for a few years, the protagonist will become a god. Can we still fight a war on top? It is not certain whether there is a world government or not.

The protagonist awakened Goldfinger and was trained to be a dog. He was almost castrated before he woke up. It would be better if you deleted this diary. It is extremely poisonous.

Except for the mystery, this book is not much better than other pirate novels, and is even worse in some aspects. At least the other heroines in One Piece fanfiction are pretty, what the hell is this Bellemel?

It is tasteless to eat and a pity to throw away. The plot is redundant, and the protagonist has no ambition and just goes with the flow. Either being a slave or on the way to being a slave, no one with a little bit of fame can defeat him. The Overlord Peach Rabbit is trying to persuade him to quit, the redhead is trying to quit after eating a Devil Fruit, and the protagonist is trying to quit by eating a Prison Fruit. There are already 5 paths of omniscience and omnipotence, but the skills are messy and a bunch of fruits have been added, and no one is specialized. He was beaten by Kizaru after escaping from the slaves, and then by Kaido, Whitebeard, and Big Mom. He joined the red-haired ship as a navigator and ended up spending so little time on the ship. He often walked alone on the ship. What's the point of getting on the ship. Forget it, no more complaints, I have high poison resistance. The ideas in this book are quite good.

The writing is very messy, for example, the performance of the singer, because the world of Pirates cannot be completed without the Sequence 0 Sun. Can't we directly praise the real sun in the physical sense? It is not necessary to praise the Sequence 0 Sun. The acting method is not dead, and everyone's summary of the key points of the performance may be different.