As a Villain, I Captured the Heroine, Is That Okay?

The plot is very good, not cliche, far better than that pile of junk system text. The rhythm is also very good, there is no situation where one fight lasts for five or six chapters. In terms of character creation,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, No matter how good the author's plot is, his character creation is terrible. He talks wildly, his thinking process is like an old lady's foot binding, which makes people crazy, and his awkward exchanges are like watching the damn Canaan Chronicle. What luck brings wisdom, the words of the protagonist and the villain, no matter how embarrassing it is! When I read it, it sounded more like a board meeting of Sunshine Project than a stubborn male protagonist who traveled to another world and struggled to survive. It didn't feel like a fairy tale fantasy world. To put it mildly, if you replace your luck with the blessing of ancestors and your wisdom with youthful admiration or preconception, wouldn't the poison be gone!

Although the book is very enjoyable, it has several flaws: First: The protagonist's ability is too buggy. The immortality feature directly reduces the difficulty of the world to the novice tutorial. There is direct immortality protection, and you can't die even if you die. Although 486 has infinite resurrections, you have to start over every time you are revived, and you have to keep looking. How to clear the level, and the feeling of death is much more uncomfortable than simple pain, so the protagonist hides from the original protagonist, which feels funny. No matter how strong the protagonist's aura is, if he can't kill him, he will not kill him. Unless the original protagonist can ignore the protagonist's immortality and forcefully kill him, it's possible that I didn't see the setting. Anyway, this ability is buggy. Second: The protagonist directly cheats across stages to get late-stage resources. The heroine is used as a tool to provide corresponding resources for the protagonist's growth. The stronger the protagonist, the more will be given, but it will not be given out immediately. It is like playing a game to defeat the boss, and the boss will drop equipment for you. The equipment given will help you conquer the later levels, but it will not directly increase the combat power. The protagonist here is a direct game cheat, and the novice village will directly get late-stage equipment and massive resources. Third: Food is the one I want to complain about the most. What you traveled through was not a primitive society. It was a cultivation civilization that lasted tens of thousands, hundreds of thousands, millions of years, or even longer. China has produced so many delicacies in five thousand years. Your cultivation civilization has lasted for so many years, and mortals have lasted for so long, and you have so many more rare animals and more mana than in reality. How can you be no match for our real society? It's really like in the movie, it's so funny that the highly intelligent alien race that can make interstellar jumps can't beat the earth's technology, and then they are shocked by the earth's technology. And in the early stage, the protagonist's materials were all taken from the heroine's ring. You have all the preserved eggs, but no delicious food? Does your heroine go out with preserved eggs? Even if you say that the protagonist goes out to the wild to collect spices, and then picks up the preserved eggs by himself, it is much more reliable than taking the preserved eggs directly. It is really a great setting pit, because the male protagonist is the heroine who conquers the heroine with delicious food, and then treats the heroine tenderly, that's it? ? ? A person can prosper with these panels, right? This is the official health-locking hook + modification of the number of props, and then it also comes with an unstable instant kill hook. Are you telling me that this is still a minion? Are you afraid that you have misunderstood me? Then the whole story line is to prevent the original protagonist from rising. It has been said that the protagonist's aura reduces the intelligence, but the protagonist's aura reduces the intelligence. That is only required by individual novels, or the author thinks so. Whether it can be reduced or not depends on the author. It is all said to beware of the original protagonist's aura reducing the intelligence. Be careful, but as I read along, I feel that the whole book is too close to the protagonist. There are also emojis, complaints, and silly comments that are frequently used. The author is completely enjoying himself and does not consider the readers at all. If you only come here with two occasionally, it is enough. If you occasionally come with two official complaints, it is normal. It is normal to have fun. If you use them throughout the article, it will really give you a headache. Anyway, this book is mainly about the protagonist cheating the original protagonist, but the original protagonist is the most normal person, and the setting has many flaws. Now I see that alchemy has been added, and I don't want to read it. It's boring and uncomfortable to read. I hope the author will think carefully about how to supplement the setting and explain. After all, this is a book written by himself, so at least be serious, right?

This novel would be useless if it didn't have a single heroine, and don't be ambiguous, especially with Liu Ruoyan. If you are positioned as a demon general, then just take the position of the demon general and use your own fighting power. If you are a maid, then don't dream of flying up a branch and becoming a member of the harem. It's always ambiguous and she keeps wanting to have sex with the male protagonist. It's really disgusting. If the female protagonist can tolerate the male protagonist having a harem in the later stage, she will be speechless. That's it. I still like the novel so far, but I feel that Liu Ruoyan is a bit awkward after joining. I hope I can read it to the end with interest.

I feel that this book is really well-written to my liking. I guess it's because the author and I have similar personalities. I really like some of the famous jokes in the article and some things that only two-dimensional geeks can understand (funny). I spent two weeks reading carefully to catch up with the author's updates. Finally, I didn't realize until I finished reading that there was no more content at the end. When I saw that there was nothing to read at the end, I felt a sense of emptiness... (I thought it was because my network was not good, so I logged out and found out)... I really like this flesh-and-blood feeling, every time Each character is very vividly displayed in front of me. The author's portrayal of the characters is the most important reason why I like this book. As someone who also loves reading and hopes to write novels, this book is really like my ideal work. As a novice who dreams of writing a book, the author is the role model I should learn from! I hope that one day, the characters in my novels can also leave such a deep impression on readers. At least in my opinion, this book has left me with very deep memories... Finally, I wish the author all the best and become famous all over the world in the future! (Does the boss need thigh accessories?) By the way, there is one more thing, update soon! Update quickly! Update quickly!

A horse sowing seeds everywhere, a few acres of fields harvesting seeds everywhere, the horse tossing and turning over those acres of fields, those acres of fields are marked everywhere on the horse.

The first part of the story was okay, but later it was a bit weird when Lu Wan'er left Fengyou City. The content after this point is really not good to read, it's really nonsense, what about "future me", "evil character" and "demon energy"

This plot is so familiar, I think I've seen it before

This crappy book breaks through to the late stage of foundation building at chapter 61, and it's already at chapter 168! Can you believe it didn't even move? There are no opportunities or adventures in more than a hundred chapters, and there are about ten chapters of bullying the original protagonist. I don't know how the author wrote it down, and I don't know how I read it, so I gave up.

If there is a harem, the villain's character design will collapse, and looking at the author's previous works, it is 100% likely to be a harem, so I'd better not read it!

Chapter 299: Sleep as soon as you want. It's so disgusting. The heroine is still pregnant and has no responsibility at all. It's so disgusting. I'm going crazy thinking about a harem. And the time traveler is disgusting to death. All the foreshadowing is done, it's just the lower body of an animal. He also said that he is the protagonist. What is the difference between the male protagonist and the protagonist?

According to the routine, the female protagonist and the child should leave, and then the male protagonist pretends to be a slap in the face of the fake male protagonist, seizes opportunities to develop, and finally comes to take back the female protagonist, and the child is usually a girl 🤓 (general routine, don't criticize if it's wrong)

All I can say is that it was written in a mess. . . If you don't believe it, go check it out for yourself. If so, you can come back and tell me about it, so as to save other book friends from wasting their time.

This floor is dedicated to criticizing the author, operating officer, book, and criticizing the content of the book that needs to be revised. Please actively discuss it.

Since some people have taken advantage of it, I will say a few more words. If you don't want to see it, just go out and turn left. Everyone here is saying how poisonous it is. Why don't we feel it? Are you afraid that you haven't read enough dark literature? Sure enough, it's still too young. Go watch Long Ao Tianwen. The routine is straightforward and refreshing. The level is clearly explained to you at the beginning. Every one of them reads the words carefully. The author of the first ten or so pictures may not be that good because he is not a master, but did you read the words carefully? As it develops to the end, which is the anti-Long Ao Tianwen, you actually think you shouldn't explain it to the heroine? Funny? As a precious little female disciple of a big family, you were forced by the consciousness of Heaven to accompany the male protagonist Long Aotian when you left home. You really should have lost money and goods along the way! According to the writing of Long Aotian, she raised Long Aotian. The heroine will definitely be taken home later, and then Long Aotian will come to the door and be taken away. What a brainless move? The heroine may also be taken home later in the book, and the plot will be similar, but it will definitely not be written like a novel. The first few poison pictures are because he traveled through time and became a minion. There was an aphrodisiac floating in the room, and when the two of them rolled down, they both inhaled it, so that happened. Besides, some people must have thought that the protagonist was just sleeping, and he still pursued the heroine. You think that the woman who is the male protagonist should not be chased. Are you bringing yourselves into the opposite camp of the male protagonist Long Aotian as soon as you come in? If he beat the heroine to death with his backhand, maybe Long Aotian would appear directly on his head and slap him to death, and then the book would be over? ? If you can bear it, read two more to see if the author is really rubbish? What does he mean? Some people may think that Niutou, this heroine has nothing to do with Long Aotian, and nothing happened, so why Niutou? Besides, from the beginning, the author wrote her as a female villain and heroine. Why should she be brought into the aspect of decency? Besides, he's not writing other people's fan fiction. Do you really want to be like Long Aotian? Does the heroine owe the hero? Do you like him just by looking at him? Did you give him everything? The heroine is a living person and should not be deceived by heaven, so the villain hero is such a reverse script.

This book is just poisonous. A lot of people in the comment section are right in what they say, but it is just poisonous. Some people say that it can't handle the first few chapters. What kind of elementary school students are they? Do you know what the three golden chapters are? The writing in the front is not good, but I still hope that people will read it later. 👻Look, it is indeed a daily guide to poison.

I think it's pretty good, as long as you survive the first dozen chapters. I can only say that these people's ability to accept it is too poor now, or that many of them are just friends who have just read the novel! This kind of people are more suitable for Long Aotian when they first watch it, and it is more enjoyable to watch, but I think there is a little bit of anti-Long Aotian routines in it. Personally, I think it's okay,

I found it really amazing. It was kidnapped + raped, and she was pregnant. What kind of book is this? When did Qidian become so disgusting?

The tauren were ecstatic. It is strongly recommended that the pure love party evacuate, this book has fallen. ——The last message from a pure love party

Personally, I think the poisonous point is that the male protagonist criticizes the male protagonist in the harem at the beginning and favors the female protagonist. Then the author said that he wanted to write a story with two female protagonists. Although it seems that it hasn't been written yet, you are going to write about two female protagonists, and the male protagonist is as bad as the harem male protagonist 😅

The drug test is over. The main character of the book is a talker. He has the style of a male protagonist in a Japanese light novel. He is a bit nonsensical and funny. Personally, I feel it is a bit cliche. I can't read it. Please give it a look. Maybe you are right 🙂

Author, we won't comment on how well you write for now, but you, the operating officer, are probably a black fan, 2333333

There are a lot of narrations, few things are done, and there are problems with the narrative.

In my opinion, it's just the author's unique and out-of-the-box style, not poor writing, and shouldn't be confused. I personally quite like this style. As for the unfinished work in the later stage and the lack of self-restraint in the later stage, it is really a pity. But it's not entirely the author's fault. Seeing all the rumors, the author is under a lot of pressure, so there's nothing wrong with it being unfinished. If readers don't like it, they can give suggestions or leave, but please don't keep attacking. The author has not offended your life. It's a pity, but this is also reality. I hope the author will continue to work hard.

I haven't started watching it yet, but there is a critical building that is worth a watch

No, I'm retreating. I really can't bear it anymore.

Is Liu Ruoping dead? Remove the label of relaxed. It's not relaxed at all. Give it up.

I only saw sadness in this book, a novel that teaches people how to be a qualified provider.

I just chased it... And it's over...

Is it a matter of style? Why did someone say goodbye when I read the first chapter? I think it's pretty good, but I'll give it a try first.

Let me ask you briefly, does Senior Sister recycle it?