Start by Training Slime

Overall, it's pretty good. The biggest problem is that there are too many branch lines and basically none of them are recycled. It feels like one comes out one after another, especially the "Flame Milk Powder" at the beginning, which has not been followed up at all. The other thing is that the positioning of this book is a bit vague. I am not sure whether it is more of a daily novel or a novel. It's a darker article. After all, two groups of people want to kill the protagonist based on pure speculation, and there are even other people staring at him from behind. Finally, it's the protagonist's mentality. I'm not sure if the author has any plans for the follow-up, but now the protagonist's mentality is still as if he is playing a game, which is more likely to become a poisonous point.

Writing a book without putting emotion into it will always be a scumbag. If you think the results are not good, then the book will be unfinished. If you think the audience likes it, then imitate it. If so, how can you write a good book? Writers need to eat, but they only know how to eat and don't know how to put in the work from beginning to end. How you treat the book and the audience will also be how they treat you.

The beginning is a little bit poisonous, probably because I wanted to write a foreshadowing or something, but I didn't get it right. The protagonist's contract with the skeleton gradually got better. When he went to college, there was basically no poison. The contract with the skeleton was because the author had improved. From then on, it was quite smooth, and it was well received. However, it also feels a bit unstable. The protagonist has such high-potential partners in the early stage, and in a society with advanced information, how can he get by without opening a few more vests? Maybe the author can try the multi-vest route in the middle and later stages. After all, the talent, potential, and luck are really amazing (especially the five-core development, others have failed, how come you succeeded? And anyone with some authority can check it out, the secrets are very coveted)

After reading Chapter 44, I don't understand what kind of world this is. If it were the same as the real world, and the government's credibility and control were online, there would be no forced undercovers, and there would be no such thing as Little Bird and the vice president of the Guild Association. The protagonist would not dare to make it public when there is substantial evidence to prove that the vice president has violated the law! But if that kind of government is just a name, it doesn't look like the various forces oppress ordinary people until they have nowhere to complain, because if that were the case, the protagonist would not be so eager to be a salty fish in peace of mind or to be unmotivated and contract a slime with an unknown future! So what kind of world is this? It just feels weird...

Do you want me to complain about this introduction? Let me tell you a joke. Top hackers have no money. They can't even make money playing games 😁. As long as you are the top group of people in any industry, how can you have no money?

I have read more than 90 chapters, and I can't stand it anymore. I hate this kind of book where the main character of a pet novel is being plotted by world-class bosses before he leaves the novice village. I don't understand why he is just an ordinary person. I don't see any abnormal behavior in the main character. He is just developing well. Where can such an awesome character appear to be paying attention? How can he be in a region, a small city, and a bad school? There will be two anti-terrorist bosses, who didn't know the protagonist before, but they just happened to have an undercover plan. They fell in love with the protagonist in a school with 2 to 3 thousand people. When they found out about the protagonist's extraordinary qualities, they had to make him an undercover. What kind of beads were used to test and found that the protagonist had extraordinary qualifications and was not suitable to be an undercover and he had to be killed immediately. It's really outrageous. Although the author is already rounding up this matter, I think There is something wrong with the core of the book here. It can be written like Pokémon. The protagonist takes his childhood sweetheart and his deskmate to adventure in the vast elf world and becomes the strongest book in the world. However, it is written in a world where terrorist organizations are everywhere. The upper echelons of the alliance are plotting. The world's largest group decided to kill the protagonist because the protagonist saved their little princess. Someone is looking for the protagonist's father. A relic left by the mother, a novel in which the protagonist is the enemy of the whole world. Nothing happened for 16 years. As soon as Goldfinger came out, all kinds of coincidences came. And it has been 16 years. How did the protagonist come here? Did he live as a fool before? Even if it is, I have to explain it. It will be better if I just awakened the past life memory recently. It doesn't look good. I won't read it. I'm gone.

It's pretty good, but the pace is a bit slow. And the undercover plot was a bit disgusting. Obviously I just want to read a relaxing pet book, but I have to deal with it. It also made me abandon a lot of books

I really wanted to give up the book after reading that idiot. Did the protagonist go to a military academy, Officer Reserve? Or have you already joined the relevant departments? Otherwise, why would an ordinary student be an undercover agent? Is his psychological quality up to standard? Then who is Old Man Li? Can you actually decide on life and death based solely on your imagination? What qualifies him to be above the law?

After reading Chapter 22, my parents died inexplicably, I was targeted inexplicably, and I was almost assigned as an undercover agent. The inspiration was very good, and it was interesting, but the plot was really inexplicable, especially the female teacher and the uncle in the monitoring room, who clicked on investment, and it was so rash 🙂 Can it be changed drastically? I still hope I can write well.

If you say you'll kill me, you'll kill me. If you say you'll be undercover, you'll be undercover. Isn't that so imprudent? This federation has not been overthrown?

It turns out that the upper echelons of Pig's Feet are all idiots. What kind of undercover plot is so baffling and IQ is tested. Only Pig's Feet is a black light. It's extremely smart. But the rest are all wise? Laughed at this plot

? Why does it need to be finished? I feel like I haven't even written half of it.

As for the undercover book you wrote, I suspect that you wrote this book to gang up on the government.

This is the first time I heard that top hackers are still poor. Basically, they all have small villas and luxury cars in second-tier cities. They don't have two or three million plus equity dividends at the end of the year. Don't call yourself a computer expert. It is normal to have top-level computer technology and tens of millions plus equity dividends in major domestic companies. It's not enough to write a book. There is no such thing as talent failure these days, only infertility.

Just a few suggestions for modification. It is outrageous to have a negative status after completing the achievement of killing monsters. There is a plot that is poisonous. Killing thousands of sunflowers and a king of sunflowers directly reduces the favorability of all rangers, firefighters and all kings to negative numbers. What about the water system? (Killing thousands of grass-type ones, the favorability of the grass-type ones was not lost, but the water-type ones were lost. This is true.) Moreover, I almost killed the protagonist in the Sunflower King. The protagonist took revenge, so I killed him. At this pace, I went to the wild for a while and became the public enemy of all pet beasts. I also cultivated a fur 😅😅😅😅

An official organization wants to kill people at every turn. This world feels so twisted. It's so fucking disgusting.

I don't really like the plot written by the author. I see that Chapter 24 has a lot of flaws, so I will give my personal evaluation. The plot is hard to recommend. It starts with rescuing people. It can be seen that it is a prepared villain conflict, especially the misunderstanding that almost kills the kitten. But then there is a main line of searching for relics. After that, a Cub Cup is added. It is not over yet, and the entire organization is undercover. To be honest, the connection between these paragraphs is very hard. There are four tasks in Chapter 24 that seem to be the main line. Can't we arrange them in one line? It's enough to put the undercover agent behind the Cub Cup, put the relic search behind the Cub Cup, and then put it in front of the Cub Cup to allow the kitten enemies to casually assassinate and cultivate slimes. But your plot advancement is too nonsense. What police officer would kill a suspected suspect without thinking? Which police department arranges an undercover agent and doesn't check his background? And the plot is obviously not grasped. The people behind me come to the door to offer rewards, but they refuse, hoping that they will come to the door more often without payment. It is a good name to hug someone. With all due respect, most people will call the police when they encounter such people, right? Not to mention hugging your thighs, you act like you're too young. It's okay if people don't hate you.

I'm still so poor after 16 years of time travel. I was lucky that I was a top hacker in my previous life. Isn't there a panel where I can check the pet's talent attributes? Isn't it possible to go to the black market to pick it up?

The anti-theft chapter, anti-theft, I couldn't watch the original version all day long.

Let's talk about it objectively after reading Chapter 108 1. The protagonist's character is more realistic and a bit too conceited 2. The author's handling of the plot is slightly poor (the little bird and the protection association and the undercover incident) 3. The writing style of this book should be more warm and interspersed with a bit of reality and darkness (a common phenomenon in online books is reality and darkness) It should be considered a good source of information. The author should be a newcomer, so he is good~

One hundred chapters in, the highest number of likes for the characters is still 90+, and there are still many people praising it, saying that they understand everything. However, if the people who comment on this book give it a few likes, the data is not like this.

This book is very good, author, don't listen to the trolls, come on! Never be a eunuch! Maybe it's too for my taste. I think this book is much better than the Unscientific Beast Control.

The introduction is so confusing. Top hackers have no money to earn money.

Dear author, I read your book a long time ago. I came back and took another look. Why did you even cancel your account?

Are you keeping it or not?

Sorry. I can't keep up the repetition. Just keep it. Let's talk about it after it's over.

What a perfunctory ending indeed. It feels like it could be written but the author has no inspiration. I can't write anymore. This ending is okay.

Sure enough, the original game books are all useless. After all, how can one person's ideas be better than a team's? Chapter 44 left me speechless. Along the way, half of it was basically explaining the background setting of the game. For a pet fan, I really feel that this game is full of copycat style. Not interesting

Why did it end so quickly, woo woo woo

It's a pity because the undercover job at the beginning made many people leave, but later on it was actually pretty good.