Start with Loki

The Infinity Stones in the Authority. You can think of it as a large toy, which has no power. When you take it away from the timeline, the gem still exists in the world, and you are equivalent to taking away a shadow.

The time management section was originally well written. I thought this section of the plot would be long enough and I thought I could see how the Lokis stabbed Fang Jue in the back, or Fang Jue unexpectedly cooperated with the Lokis openly and they stopped backstabbing Fang Jue, and it was a win-win situation for both parties. As a result, the author suddenly changed the picture and cut the plot in half. The interruption in this section is actually understandable, after all, the plot has not advanced to the exciting plot. But what is written about DC later is very ugly. The first reason is that a large number of new settings are introduced, such as God's game, Fang Jue's life experience, the bet between the Goddess of Death and Lucifer, all laid out directly in less than twenty chapters, making this paragraph like an explanatory text. When I saw this, I went directly to WeChat to read. I didn't want to waste the Qidian coins I bought in RMB. The second is to bring in some dispensable tool people to promote the development of the plot. The appearance of characters such as Nightmare, the Goddess of Death, and Lucifer basically has no effect other than acting as a walkie-talkie to tell the readers the settings. They also pretend to be mysterious and act as the Riddler. In addition to ruling Krypton and killing the God of War, what is the role of abducting Diana, meeting Lucifer, and opening a lux bar in this DC plot? It's neither interesting nor does it serve as a plot point of conflict. There are also places that could have been written in detail in about 10,000 words, and could be made into a highlight of the book, but the author actually skipped a few sentences. It's the part where Fang Jue directs the script in the world of Black Robe Pickets. This part of the plot obviously fits the title of this novel. From this mischievous acting, it begins to move towards the multiverse of American comics and American dramas. This has a lot of symbolic meaning. Furthermore, Loki, the god of mischief, stepped out of the Temple of Lies and used lies to play with the fate of the world, which suddenly raised his level of composure. If this was written, it would be a huge attraction, but the author directly skipped to write about DC, which is really a waste of watermelon. Now that I'm writing about the Evil God stage, I'm still trying to find weaknesses for the protagonist, giving Batman and others the opportunity to beat the protagonist violently. The subsequent plot is not difficult to guess. Either Fang Jue was beaten badly and finally ran away, but was seriously injured and became much weaker. He went to another world to show off and rise again, or the protagonist killed them and reaped the value of this plot in a wave of fun. Before writing DC, the perspective of the novel basically followed the protagonist. After coming to DC, the protagonist began to disappear for at least two consecutive chapters, focusing on the settings of people who like to tell riddles, how people are trying to show off to readers, and how Batman "we need to talk" like the American TV series "The Flash". Can you take a look at it and see if it really looks good?

To tell a joke, Loki, the number one mage in the nine realms, can only cast one illusion spell.

I finally understand why no one has read this book. Summarize the biggest poisonous points. As an infinite stream protagonist who doesn't know the plot, what's there to watch? It seems that there is a patch in the back, and I know it again, and there are still a few people who can persist to the back after doing this at the front.

I have read a few volumes 1. The protagonist is by no means a good person, and conscience does not exist 2. The enemy sometimes suddenly changes his mind for the sake of the plot 3. The protagonist helps the protagonist purely for profit. If the profit is exhausted, he will betray him 4. The protagonist is the kind of person who lies and does not draft br>5. The plot of the battle of wits in the book is average. The protagonist does not have a plan to achieve the goal. He usually finds the protagonist of the plot and fools him, real or fake, to get something 6. The supporting characters have no brains and mainly serve the plot To sum up, if you don't look at it too harshly, you can still read it.

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You can mention here the world you want to see, movies, TV, animation, comics, novels, preferably movies (cheat movies to watch)

The protagonist is contradicting himself. He doesn't even know what to write.

My imagination is very clear, but there are too many things I want, skills, and items. There are only two worlds, dozens of chapters, and I feel confused. There are countless skills, complicated instructions, and various items. It goes too fast, and I feel invincible.

I have read it. The protagonist is a moron who is always betraying and seeking death. I don't feel as if I am immersed in it. It feels like I only taste one bite of each dish. How can I describe it?

I never borrow money. After reading just a few chapters, I was inexplicably using my abilities beyond my ability. As a result, my attributes were deducted several times, which made me feel very uncomfortable.

If you want to write beautiful comics, write beautiful comics; if you want to write fantasy, write fantasy. Write a DC Green Snake Fahai and come out. You can make a blind man even read out the skills of the protagonist for you. China and the United States are blooming in neither fish nor fowl.

Big Brother Black Robe Patrol is owned by DC. It was suspended for ruining Superman's image. It doesn't make sense for you to just place him in Marvel.

The protagonist's ability is more like Loki than Loki. 🙂 Why do we need to create a system and data flow? This system is really disgusting.

What a mess! Goldfinger is a universal wishing machine!

The protagonist should be able to use Yanye Wuwu to remove the kryptonite curse or change it to an amplified state.

Although Yan Ye's ability to bully this thing is good, it is too unreliable. . . The principle of the ability is unclear, and the language used to activate this ability is instantly reversed. It is really neither logical nor smooth.

The chapters where you meet the Time Guardian are exactly the same as the plot of the TV series... This feels a bit boring

Kang is a loser in Marvel

Is Fang Jue a native or a time traveler? It makes me so unhappy

The description in Chapter 72 is very similar to the plot of the TV series...

Death

When writing Immortal Kang, didn't you include cosmic gods like eternal death and annihilation? They are also at the multiverse level. Is it just up to the protagonist to protect the Marvel multiverse? Judging from the performance, it feels a bit joking.

Isn't Fang Jue the only one in the world? How to kill him in the past!