Rebirth Started from Educated Youth in 1977

This novel gave me the feeling that it was pretentious... The author also had some literary problems from time to time.

The writing is messy, often jumping around without any context, and it's all told in dialogue. It's not like a novel, but more like that kind of literature and art. How can I put it? I can't see it, and often I don't know what to do when something has no beginning or end. It feels like writing an electrical script. Unlike a novel

I read twenty or thirty chapters. I don't have any feelings, so I gave up. Let's watch it later when you have some leisure time. Let me give you some thoughts. One is that the writing is very messy, and the transitions are abrupt and sometimes confusing. The author also deliberately wrote some "naughty" words. The word naughty is the author's own words. . . . But I didn't find it interesting. I just felt that you were trying to limit the number of words, and your attitude seemed very casual, as if you were writing a third-rate comedy. Besides, you had too many naughty words, and you would say one every few paragraphs. For another example, sometimes the dialogues of the characters are written like Riddler dialogues. The author may think that writing like that is very convincing and shows that he is very knowledgeable. But it's just a sentence or two occasionally. It's really boring to write all the time. Since you write online articles, you should write in a more popular way, and the content you write is not some lofty article praising love and justice. Is it okay to get in touch with the ground? I think your writing style is pretty good. It wouldn't be embarrassing if you just wrote it in a normal way. Why would you write some messy metaphors? In addition, I feel that the author really wants to win the recognition of readers. He often appears in the comments and responds to some questioning voices. To be honest, it is better not to be affected by readers' comments when writing. As for replies, there is no need. We are all such grown-up people and have been thinking independently for more than ten years. How can you be so easily persuaded? Should I object or not? If there are too many doubts, you will have to fight intensively all day long. I say this because I feel that this book is well written, and I hope that the author will continue to work hard. If you think what I said doesn't make sense, then just give me a shit. You're right.

The writing is too scattered. One event is not over yet, and the next chapter is another event. You don't even have a transition, just cut it straight. As I read it, I felt like I missed a lot of chapters.

To be honest, the writing is good, but the author wants to write too much, giving people the feeling of clouds and mountains, and those who are used to a fast pace will definitely not appreciate it. I read it three times, and last time I read more than 800 chapters.

After reading the first few dozen chapters, I think the author is probably a novice. His writing is good but his narrative skills are poor. Especially since there are long dialogues to highlight the progress of the plot, he cannot describe what he is thinking. Basically, he has not made an outline of the story, so he cannot fill it in. He can only write wherever he can think of. The result of being unconstrained is that he can only use dialogue to fill in the words.

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Explain the matter clearly in one sentence, go on for most of the chapter, and keep explaining, what is this, what was it like at that time, etc., And you can read popular science in online articles?

The writing of this book is okay, the plot is acceptable, and it has a sense of time, but it is difficult to read and awkward! First, when writing novels, don't preach too much or preach. After reading dozens of pictures, your book covers everything from beginning to end. A little bit is fine, but a lot is disgusting. Secondly, when you write a novel, you don't need to explain it to the readers. You always explain this and that, which is very spoilerful. Thirdly, the plot is very scattered and there are no details. For example, the previous business with that trustworthy person was to produce teaching materials. This business can actually be written in detail. But once I mentioned it, the same goes for other businesses, including how it started. I have read dozens of chapters. Generally speaking, the author has ideas and writing style, but it is not very popular. Especially your business and family history, there are no details at all, which is quite fatal.

It has a sense of the times, and the writing is really good. What's even more rare is that it portrays the humanities and customs of Beijing, Guangdong, and Shanghai very well. What a great book! Come on, author👍🌹

After reading the book for the second time, I still couldn't read it. The protagonist in the book is written as a kind of person who is both responsible and established. He is reborn in that era and has the ability. He just wants to make money. As long as the money comes in the right way, he can directly integrate some sunshine industries that have developed better in the future, especially those that have been stuck in the modern era. He has made money and his personal achievements are also positive. Similar to today's Huawei, the development of the protagonist can be much better than Huawei, and directly compete with foreign companies. Also, those vague words are written in such a way that people can't stand them. They are pretending to be profound, but it's written anyway. If readers can't understand it, that's the reader's problem. What's the difference between this and those directors who make art films nowadays?

Helping others raise a daughter, while the biological father is busy picking up girls, this is a bit of a holy mother... At that time, half of the people in China did not have enough to eat, how many are you planning to adopt? Well written, keep it up

The protagonist wants to adopt several goddaughters as his younger sisters. I have read more than 80 chapters so far and have adopted two goddaughters and one goddaughter. There are 3 female partners who turned into heroines

It's well written, but one thing that makes me very confused is that you bought a house and there was a corpse in the well, and you didn't dispose of it. Do you want to keep it as a town house?

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Just writing nonsense, you said you can sit on the plane? There is no unit, no level, let alone county party secretary, even a status secretary will not sit down unless there is an emergency.

I don't understand why you are so nice to that Liu Zhen? For the time being, I only saw the front, and I still feel that the front does not match the rear.

The novel gives people the feeling that wars are everywhere in the late Qing Dynasty and the early Republic of China. The protagonist wants to quickly succeed in the revolution, build a strong country, and then resist the invasion of foreign powers... Take one step, look at three steps, count five steps, and establish secret fronts everywhere to win over revolutionary comrades... Is this necessary? Wanting to make money was not that scary during the changing times, right? You could just use the collective name of a commune or a brigade. There is nothing wrong with becoming bigger and stronger in a few years. Then think of ways to earn some foreign exchange for the country. You are the master. As long as you don't break the law, who will do to you and who can do to you? Also, brother, you want to be the richest man in the world. Then everyone will use a magnifying glass to look at every penny of your business. Don't make so many small moves. Be it assets or companies, the more upright the better. You have a vision that transcends the times for forty years, and you can be at the forefront of every step. Are you afraid of competition? Don't act like you are gathering strength to prepare for zaofan. Although the situation was chaotic at that time, the prospects were good. Also, the protagonist's handling of people and things is in one word, chaotic, and many places are incomprehensible. After reading nearly a hundred chapters, the summary is that the current situation is very strange, the world is also very bad, and I am the only good person. I will hide and protect myself, and I will save you by the way. You must know how to be grateful. Well, a psychopath who comes from later generations, is full of superiority, and is full of victim syndrome.

The male protagonist doesn't have a penis? Still no balls? Or a dead spirit?

This book is considered to be the best among its kind. The writing style and all aspects of the information are excellent. As long as you don't jump later, your results will definitely not be bad. In addition, plots about Hong Kong and Southeast Asia can be added in the later period. Although the rich people in Hong Kong have already gained momentum in the 1970s, there is still room for writing. According to the timeline, there are negotiations between China and Britain, so they can get a share of the pie. And based on what you describe as a consortium model, you can raise an armed group in Southeast Asia. After all, you don't panic if you have a gun in your hand.

What he said seemed awesome, but I've already read almost half of it, and I still haven't figured out his so-called business layout. It's a mess, and I don't even understand what he's doing. I just look like I'm awesome.

You could have taken the college entrance examination in 1978 or 1977, and you still wanted to be an educated youth. You must be sick, right? It would be okay if you went to become an educated youth in advance, so you still have to write a little.

Drive high and go low. The protagonist in the front solves things in a straight-forward manner, which is very consistent with the character of a trend-setting person. In the mid-term, the economy begins to collapse. The protagonist seems to have completely changed his mind. He has not created any decent industry. He has become the richest man and his temper is like a broker. Other people's face; another surprise, the harem was opened randomly, the piano teacher who originally had no space to describe was suddenly taken away, the heroine Liu Zhentong's adopted daughter-in-law was also controlled by the male protagonist, and she became more powerful and lost her affection. In short, the character design is broken. I hope the author will write better in the next book.

I just want to know: Why should you take over "Nine Pharmaceuticals"? Knowing that Pig's Feet has just returned to China, he should also know that Pig's Feet has its own power at home and abroad, but a district chief used "unfounded" trivial problems to trap him? Pig's feet are somewhat of a person, right? You were pushed into a corner by a few fluttering words, and you just accepted the mess obediently? When I was educating my two daughters, they sang so beautifully. How come I am now like this, so afraid of the country? Also, being suppressed like a grandson by a big boy who was just released from the courtyard, is the pig's foot really stupid? Pig's Foot himself is somewhat powerful in the capital. Even if there is a stalemate, what is Pig's Foot afraid of? Do pig's feet need to be so doggy? Also, isn't it too holy? Anyone can take advantage of pig's feet?

For an unmarried, single young man to take in his daughter, two of them, he must be perverted. I have so many shameful things, and I still act like a holy mother everywhere. I don't care about this or that. So poisonous!

You pretend too much and think you can control everything! Haha

It's poisonous! After being reborn, he didn't like women, but he liked to be a stepfather. In chapter 60, he became a stepfather to his two children, and both his parents were alive, so he withdrew!

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There is a book of the same type, which is roughly the same as yours. It has some superpowers and a space inside its head.

The writing is quite novel, I have invested in it, keep going