Start Your Adventure in the World of Pirates

This is a novel that is updated randomly, and it seems that it will be placed on the monthly bookshelf.

There are some unfinished ideas. Is this a novel based on the world of pirates? It feels very good at the moment, it feels a bit flowing, and it is very comfortable to read. I have been reading pirate fan fiction recently, and this one gives me the best feeling. New readers must come in and read it. It is really good. I have only read more than 40 chapters so far. This is the first time I have not seen the follow-up content. I ordered all the books. I read the previous books chapter by chapter and I didn't feel that they were good so I pulled them out. The plot of this book is really clean. Some book friends said that the emotional scenes are not very good, but I feel that it is just right as it is now. It is much better than the sweet and greasy ones I read on Pineapple. I am looking forward to having a single female lead! ! ! There are too many female protagonists and it feels so confusing. The bloody Shura Field and Harem made me want to vomit before. I honestly feel a little nauseous when I read some of them now. I am currently looking for books with only one female protagonist. Can any book friends recommend some books? Rou Rou's nameless yyds

Write well, work well, become bigger and stronger and create greater glory.

I don't understand the significance of adding the Iron City, the strength gap is too big. Lost dozens of chapters

Failure: The protagonist of the time traveler knows the world of One Piece, but does not know the Kabaneri of the Iron Fortress. This leads to a dungeon-like plot. Except for too many protagonists, it is exactly the same as the anime. What is the purpose of writing this? Might as well rewatch the anime.

If you have any questions about the world you want to see the protagonist go to, you can post it in the comment area for discussion. I will consider it as appropriate 😁

Although the author's writing is good, I have no idea to continue reading after reaching chapter 48. He takes a little girl whom he has known for less than a month to travel with him. The golden finger no longer belongs to the protagonist alone. Then there is also the zombie virus problem that has not been solved. Taking people to travel casually will not be of any help to the protagonist. It is just a drag...

🤔       24， It is said that the number of follow-up readers must reach a certain number before the first test push will be released (I said that I had been waiting for a long time before and didn't come. I thought it would be available after signing the contract, and I laughed to death 😂). So, for those who are keeping books, if you can, update the table of contents every day and pull it to the latest chapter (I don't know if this counts 😁, give it a try) If it is true, as soon as the test water is pushed, the collection will increase, the recommendation positions will come one after another, and Wuhu will take off! So please, everyone! Trouble! (🙏🏻Earth Explosion Star!)

There is no such thing as a gathering of book friends in a sentimental gathering place. I hope the author will not do so.

The author is not serious about watching the anime. I won't comment on the Pirates' Revolutionary Army. Zhan Tong's Revolutionary Army is a group of southern nobles. They collude with foreigners to carve up the empire, waste agriculture, and make women sell during night raids to earn mission funds. The revolutionary army in Zhan Tong is darker than the Empire. They are just garbage trying to seize power from each other.

The writing of Traveling to the Iron Armored City is really bad, it's all nonsense, and it has dozens of chapters.

Introduction and explanation of nouns: Fc [(non-first love) now often refers to: non-place (人qi)] Double FC (non-first love, non-chu (人qi)) WRQ (bus) yw (yangwei) Shendiao [Other couples (the woman's appearance can reach the level of the heroine or the heroine)] qcqc [Collect everything] cc [First love, first love] There are only five points that can be unified: dead daughter, gifted daughter, LV hat, betrayal, and extremely abusive master. Depressed plots can be explained: plots that make readers feel uncomfortable... For example: leaking girls, prostitutes, divine sculptures, mask flow, clones, pimps, etc. Defense level classification: Ultimate negative defense: die if you are bored, crazy brainstorming. Negative defense: Death when struck by lightning, heavy suffocation is not enough (including double FC). Light armor: Can't withstand green, obscenity, gift, leakage, meaningless double FC, WRQ. Cloth armor: More resistant to double FC, WRQ than light armor, slightly resistant to obscenity, leakage, and mild abuse. Heavy Armor: Basically resistant to everything except green, and resistant to moderate abuse. Divine Defense: He has no scruples, and may not be able to withstand a severe abuser. Pervert: Likes being subjected to green darkness, NTR, severe abuse and all other factors. Sneak defense: high or low, depending on your preference, the upper limit of defense is heavy armor, and the lower limit is negative defense. Restricted special defense: extreme negative defense against a certain thing, other defenses are normal or super high. Look for recommended books and scanned books (a brief or partial summary of the novel) You can go to Baidu Tieba to find it --- Sad Xueren Bar or YY Novel Bar

I originally came here to take a look at One Piece, but after looking at the introduction, I saw the Iron Castle ~ I haven't seen it, and I lost the desire to see it. You should write about something familiar 😒

Author, don't be influenced by the readers. I think the Iron City you wrote is quite good. Just follow your own example. Trust yourself! Don't be led astray.

It is relatively rare to lead people to stream. I collected it first. The writing is not bad. It conveys the feeling of the protagonist becoming stronger at will, but there is a problem with the rhythm of the world. I probably want to pave the way for emotions to make it reasonable to lead people, but the dungeon world is too long for the Pirate World, and the rhythm is a bit interrupted. If there are still people to lead, I hope there will be an organization to place them in the Pirate World. It is best not to bring them. If you want to play the collision of systems, you should also think about the candidates. Unless you want to write a story about bringing partners across various worlds, otherwise don't If there are many characters that are taken to other worlds together, you can occasionally describe it and play with it. But if you show one character throughout the story like this, when there are more characters, the length will definitely be long and watery, and the rhythm will cause problems. I hope the author can control it well and don't make the plot of One Piece too divisive. Some readers will definitely come in for the pirates.

I can't stand it anymore after seeing Time Travel. I've never seen Time Travel and Sharing Golden Finger written well. I don't like the emotional drama either.

The nameless plot is too awkward. If you don't like it very much, I suggest you skip it.

The author will tell you this, the reason why your results are like this is very simple, it is the problem of your update volume. Look at the time when you and he had a cultivating family who just updated 200,000 words in the same period, they updated it twice a day. There were only about 200 people who voted, and the monthly votes were even less than 100. But later it became three updates a day, and sometimes there were four updates. So far, it has more than 400,000 words, and the number of readers has exceeded 2,000, and the monthly ticket has exceeded 1,000. Author, your writing style is really not bad. No matter in terms of character setting or plot, there are no major shortcomings. As long as your update speed increases, your results will not be like this. Anyway, I have already said that I have no idea how to fix it. After all, you can only support your updates.

Jiatiecheng was a burden and had to be bled every day. The author who turned the Hot-Blooded Pirates manga into a romance novel is also a talent and deserves to be thrown into the street

Isn't this a pigeon? ? After all, it's still pretty good-looking. It doesn't have the messy settings of other systems. It's good to use the One Piece system. At most, it's a Devil Fruit. I think the Thunder Fruit is pretty good!

Is the author still alive? (Bushi)