Stop Chatting, Everyone, Hurry up and Save the World

Author, to be honest, your book is definitely ranked in the top three among the dozens of chat group novels I have read, but the content is a bit lacking, otherwise it can still be ranked first according to the current situation (do you understand what I mean?) Next, I will talk about a few places that I personally feel are more toxic in this type of novels. I hope you, the author, can try your best to avoid them and have some suggestions. 1. Brainless dog licking This is the most poisonous point in my opinion. If the character appears has no moral integrity, I think it is good to lick the protagonist in moderation. But I can't accept the characters in some novels that turn into lickers. For example, Tony (this one is really awesome, they all have him, similar to the father-in-law. The father-in-law is the editor of Liushui, the iron-beater father-in-law, iron-beater is the verb here. Tony is the protagonist of Liushui, the iron-beater) Tony, but the iron word here is an adjective. Although I quite like it, I still can't help but complain), Thanos, Captain America, Madara, Whitebeard, etc. Even if I don't like some characters, or even hate them, it doesn't mean that I'm happy to see them being licking dogs. This author is doing very well so far, just keep it up. 2. Brainless harem Nowadays, many readers think that harem is a poisonous point. In fact, I think this is caused by too many brainless harem stories. In some novels, the female characters in the chat group no longer like the male protagonists in the series. I don't think there is anything wrong with that. After all, from God's perspective, some male protagonists have no other advantages except Asasi. But after chatting with the group a few times, I fell in love with the protagonist. What the hell, I ** you **. The author has handled this point very well. It is up to the author whether to have a harem or not, as long as it is not brainless. 3. Brainless bragging about combat power This type of novel cannot avoid the problem of comparing combat power in different worlds. Pirates and Naruto, One Punch and Dragon Ball are all hardest hit areas. I think it's okay to brag in moderation. After all, it's normal to have biases in the works you like. But author, can you imagine how I felt as a Pirates fan when I saw the protagonist with the strength of a Jonin go to the pirate world to defeat a general. Similarly, Naruto's current highest combat power is indeed higher than that of Pirates. As a fan of Pirates, I don't deny it, so I can't stand it when I see some generals who are powerful enough to compete in the Sixth Level of Hokage. I don't know if any Naruto fans will say that I'm exaggerating about the pirate's combat prowess when I say this. I personally don't like to compare and brag about combat power. After all, worldviews are different, but there is still a way to judge the combat power of different worlds. I think those people who brag about their prowess without thinking are actually high-level gangsters, and they do it on purpose. So in terms of combat power, I hope the author will think about it carefully. This may cause the comment area to explode. I have seen several comment areas with two groups scolding each other. Author, your comment area is the most harmonious I have seen so far. I hope it can stay like this. 4. Points and Mall I don't think you need to write this, author. Most of the books written like this have the protagonist being a loser at the beginning. Otherwise, there is no way to improve the protagonist's strength. But now that Shengyi can improve his strength and is still very strong, there should be no need to write about that. In this type of story, I personally feel that the protagonist does not need to be the most powerful group. Author, I think what you need to do is to make the protagonist Shengyi look handsome. After all, strength is temporary and handsomeness is lifelong. Handsomeness doesn't matter, because of the relationship between a certain naval admiral and Shengyi's personality. When he asked, "Have you ever been kicked at the speed of light", that wretched face appeared in front of my eyes. So no matter how handsome you describe the protagonist, I guess I can't change it. I forgot to mention why it is so poisonous. The most important thing is that points and shopping malls are only for the protagonist. Don't tell me that other people can also use such words. This is how most chat group works give people the feeling. The protagonist always gets the big points, or the mall has a discount for the protagonist. There is almost no difference between the other characters being used and not being used. Without the protagonist's participation, they still have to die. 5. Crisis in the character world How do I put this? In fact, I don't think it is poisonous if it is not combined with points and the mall, but once it is combined with those, I feel poisonous. The characters that appear are there because of the points. Especially when there is a crisis in the character world, a mission with high points appears, and then the protagonist and others see who wants to participate in the high points. This feeling is even deeper. 6. The content of the chat group is too much or too little As a novel of this type, such content can be said to be natural, but it is wrong to pour the Pacific Ocean into the book (not talking about you). I think some authors also want to raise a Kun. I personally think it's okay for the author to write a moderate number of words. After all, writing a book is not easy, and it's impossible to always have good inspiration. But too much is too much. As for too little, people will temporarily forget what type of novel this is. Don't doubt the author, it's you. I saw that I quit halfway through and looked at the title of the book. Well, it was a chat group type. Otherwise, I would have felt like a simple novel with unlimited flow. Of course, this is a personal opinion. From now on, you can do whatever you want to write, and don't worry about me. There are too few good fan fictions nowadays. I don't want a good book to disappear because of my personal thoughts. I basically don't choose. It doesn't matter whether it's unlimited streaming or comprehensive comics, as long as it suits your appetite. It's good to write like this now. Finally, the author wants to say, update! Renew! Update: Have you seen the ticket in my hand? If you don't update it, it won't be yours. In addition, my student party hasn't made any money myself, so I can only give a little reward, don't mind it.

Because of that incident, there has been no update for a year. Although I know the hope is slim, I still hope that the author can see it. There are still some readers waiting for your update.

The author is probably a newcomer. As a twelve-year old bookworm, there are a few parts that I can't stand, so I would like to make a few suggestions. They are just suggestions, don't criticize. First of all, the most serious part is that the whole book is filled with dialogues, which account for more than 60% of the articles. This is a fatal flaw for online articles and even ordinary articles. It's okay to read the first few chapters, but the later chapters become more difficult to read. This is hard for old bookworms. But the material selection is novel, so I can write about this aspect.

Do you dare to write about a boring world without pornographic jokes (●—●)

Very pretty (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡! I hope the author can include the sergeant. Of course, this is just my selfish intention.

The chapters are in the wrong order, the author has a look

I saw the first appearance of the enemy alliance. To be honest, in our drama, when the protagonist showed that he has the power to suppress everything at the beginning, it is best not to follow the plot and leave, otherwise it will collapse. At the rescue site, the protagonist already has the power to suppress the black mist. I haven't watched the follow-up. If the enemy still runs away, it will collapse without a reasonable explanation. After all, the opponent's strength is really not strong in front of the protagonist. Let the opponent upgrade? For the sake of water plot, water is the most intolerable thing.

Let's talk about it. So far, it's not a big problem. However, I always feel like I am being raised to death. (Actually, it's not really cool, but it still makes me feel tired.) The author's characters are well captured (characters I know well) The dialogue, writing, and ideas are all good. But generally speaking, I think so. There are two points worthy of criticism. One is the update time. One update a day can easily lead to death. Two, plot control. It is very fatal, because it itself and the update time are slow, there is no excitement, and there is no climax. It is very easy to make you look tired as I said before. Personally recommend, you can try to add more new characters. More tasks and the like. I hope the author will get better and better.

Tiga has joined the group. Will the protagonist become Ultraman and fight the little monsters?

It turns out that the title of the book can be so long!

This novel is one of the best among the many chat groups I have seen. Others join the group and then become the group leader or administrator. Then they recruit people. When they send out the work, they say that you are all characters in anime novels and movies. I feel that the protagonist is the kind of person who is not on the same level and gives people a feeling of superiority. There are also various ways to pick up girls. This is not impossible. But it's the kind of girl that you capture within three pages or you haven't even met before, and you fall in love with it just because you posted a work. This type is like the divorce break-up stream, and it becomes boring if you read it too much, and it may even become a poisonous point. I think this book is quite good now. I didn't just post it directly by saying that you are anime characters and I know your future. And the people added are not added all at once. I think this is very good. Every character has been shaped. I won't let some people just travel through time to help beat people up and then be trolled in the group. In the end, I personally feel that it's better not to bring in martial arts type people. I personally feel that it feels very inconsistent and the ancient people's speech style does not feel suitable for this type of novel. The above

Suddenly I discovered that most of the people in this book are not the kind who hate evil and have shadows in their hearts. In terms of personality, he is relatively easy to talk to. For example, the leader of Marvel's Novice Village, a deceived young man who the gods encounter every day, Tony Stark. In the future, might we consider joining Zoro in One Piece, Gintoki Sakata in Gintama, and Captain Dragonfly in Iron Armor? I feel that these people are very suitable for this kind of daily plot, and the related interactions are quite good, not to mention their world is also quite good. I wonder if the author has thought about it.

Let me make it clear this time, as long as you are writing a story, climax is essential. Novels are also stories, and climax is indispensable. The author has almost no feeling when writing climax. It's a cool battle, and it's easy to write about, but it doesn't feel like it. I haven't seen the latest one, so I asked the author how many climaxes (emotional outbursts, mobilizing readers' emotions) there are from the first chapter to the latest chapter, and in which chapters? A book without a climax can attract readers with its good plot, characterization and setting, but it will not last long. The beginning of this book is good, so although there is no climax (climax) However, after writing the book, the readers will get tired and feel that the plot is bland, and then they will leave. Some will criticize the book in the comment area when they leave, saying that the book is clearly written well but they can't read it. Some authors will feel that there is really a problem with the plot, and feel that they have really written it well, and then change it over and over. Trendy problems, this book is all like this Your book has already shown signs. Readers of a book can be roughly divided into passers-by and fans. The problems of a book are first exposed by passers-by's comments, but passers-by's comments will not point them out directly, they will directly express their feelings. This means there is a problem with the manual, and the real problem is hidden under these comments, and you need to find it out. As for fans, because fans are more tolerant of books, when fans start to say in the comment area that the book is not good, the book is seriously ill Some passers-by have already said in the comment area that this book is boring, which is a sign. If we continue like this, with four hundred and five hundred chapters, fans of this book will also comment on it or say that the plot is dull There are also daily climaxes, but it is more difficult to write than battles.

I usually like to read it after a week. I hope this book won't die after I read it. Why do I feel that the author is so cute and new, and definitely not a fancier. I think about why chat groups are so popular, from the semi-yellow urban underworld, officialdom, and special forces to the fantasy waste material of time travel and rebirth, industrial history, infinite heavens, immortals and treasure hunts, to the end of the world, interstellar, games, ** systems, and finally to sand sculpture aura, invincible boss, chat groups and the like. The chat group is like a fusion of infinity, time travel and rebirth, light novels, etc.

After reading Chapter 7, I remembered something. If Tony could find a reasonable explanation for snapping his fingers - first, the Hulk took off his gloves after snapping his fingers. They didn't know that Nebula had brought Thanos, and then there was a chaos to snatch the Infinity Gauntlet. There was no hope when there was still hope. People would make a desperate move and snap their fingers, but they could only run away with gloves and batons. Finally, Thanos grabbed the gloves and put on the gloves, and everyone else was dragged down. Team Shock grabbed the gloves and was knocked away by the power stone. The gloves couldn't be taken off. Tony came up with an idea-button off the gems! After buckling it down, Tony found that he couldn't beat it. Dragging it down would cause too much damage to the earth, and the failure scene five years ago was still vivid in his mind, so he might as well use the Infinity Stones to solve everything. The glove was in Thanos's hands, and it was impossible to build the Infinity Gauntlet in such a short time, so he asked Tony's nano-suit formed an Infinity Gauntlet, let alone taking it off to give it to Team Shock. When it was formed, the energy surged into Tony's body, and it was like a pineapple. It's all like this, so just snap your fingers... The above is my personal opinion, and I help Marvel, DC, Toei, Tsuburaya, etc. Find reasonable solutions on a daily basis.

Personally, I think the author's daily sand sculptures look much better, but his skills in describing battles are still lacking. I would like to recommend a few copies for the author's reference, you can consider using them Kamen Rider Wang Xiaoming, having fun with Emperor Qi Brother One Punch Man Saitama Teacher Shayue World Holy Grail War DC can also make a mess Gundam can also have a hand, seed, 00, there are many in the UC world that can write Macross You can also do it Pokemon can also do it Even daily life such as Conan is not impossible In addition to Ultraman and One Piece Naruto, as well as a lot of follow-up plots from Marvel, this book can really be written to 3 million words Maybe we can also have a young boss fighting against the spirit of aphrodisiac I think there is a lot more that can be written

I found that I couldn't find this book on the website at all... I only found it by searching directly, alas:-( It's so amazing, I don't know what this operation is. Then how did everyone find this book? 😅

Tiga: Height Micro-53 meters-120 meters Weight 0-44,000 tons-100,000 tons Birthplace Unknown Activity time 3 minutes (Shine type unlimited) Flying speed Mach 3-10 Running speed Mach 1-5 Speed in water Mach 1-Mach 5 Speed in the ground Mach 1-Mach 5 Jumping power 400 meters-1500 meters Grip strength 30,000 tons-100,000 tons Form Complex type, powerful type, air type, shining type Dark form Dark type, tornado type, explosion type

So far, it's very comfortable to watch, especially the setting where others know the protagonist's future, which is great! And now the group members are added one by one, which is also very comfortable for me. The first few chapters with Tony gave me the feeling of truly making friends. I don't know about Erina Nakiri, but Kusuo Saiki fits the original character very well. I hope there won't be shopping malls and points tasks. There must be no situation like this (the world of group members is in danger, and the chat group releases tasks.) This kind of scenario personally feels very poisonous. Be sure to remain friends with the group members! It's a friendship! ! It's a friendship! ! ! The last little wish is to save the fourth generation couple without affecting the outline! !         ，！

Nowadays, things like Little Hero... Are making fan authors very uncomfortable.

Does the author know? My Hero Academia is now an insult to China

In fact, before the incident of humiliating China, this book had been interrupted frequently. Although the time was not long, this incident just gave the author a reason to be an upright eunuch!

Hey, how come such a setting is included in such a good article? 😭 Is it a pity that the three views are very correct?

The author, I see that the analysis of the poisonous points in the comments is very accurate. There must be no problem with lightning protection. When I was taking a shower, it suddenly occurred to me that in a chat room, the collision of values ​​is inevitable, and it can even be the hidden main thread of the chat room. Looking at it now, this novel is more quotidian than passionate. The exchange of ideas can enrich the content, that is, it is not too watery. I don't know if you, the author, have thought of this. When I saw Seiichi explaining this responsibility to Erina, it felt very fresh and correct. This has not been seen in other chat room novels. Here I would like to say that the persona of Sheng Yi, who initially prefers to be a 'life coach', is more in line with the needs. People with different worldviews may have disputes or even fights after joining the chat room, and finally reach a reconciliation with everyone's persuasion (this scenario seems very interesting). This is what the room director is used for. After all, there are too many people, and it is impossible to be harmonious all the time (Kusuo Saiki thinks that the protagonist wants to take advantage from the beginning), and I think we need one or two pairs of characters who often quarrel with each other on the surface but actually understand each other, and the funny ones in the group. These plots can be developed in the early or mid-term. After talking so much, the truth is actually Exchange of ideas is very important Hey, just listen to the plot I told you and treat it as fake

If you keep it, it will die. It's understandable that you don't want to hit a thunderstorm, but there is no need to enter the palace... Come with an indescribable, alien god, Cthulhu or the like to destroy the world that was destroyed by a certain wand-making creation god. Then the protagonist can travel back to the original world or a similar parallel world, and then he can renew his life... I think the main reason is that you, the author, don't love your work enough.

I brought a logician First of all, when the characters see the future, the future also changes (isn't this a butt?) And the chat group wants to save them, but is afraid of dying, so there is a group leader, (but Chen Laomo's similar words are regarded as my fart), and the chat group is afraid that the support will not be timely, so the creation It doesn't require points to break through the world wall, but if you have the strength to break through, what is there to do? So Chen Laomo's hypothesis is not valid, but considering that the reincarnation paradise is similar, let's discuss in groups, one is willing and unable, but why is it not like the reincarnation paradise, so we exclude it, but we also consider that the economy is not enough. The previous ones may also need to be discussed in groups. Wait a moment and wait until the author pins them to the top before posting. I'll give you a little hint.

Let's continue writing this book, just marginalize the character Ying.

If the author can't find a hot spot in the "invincible" Seiichi, he can put some effort into other supporting characters. After all, "My Hero Academia" is the best hot-blooded comic after "Sea of ​​Fire" And (●°u°●)​" Come on, author (ง •̀_•́)ง

I only paid attention to your novel a few days ago. Overall, it feels pretty good, at least from my perspective, it's a great novel. I just feel that there are still a few people. Since it is a chat room, there should be fewer characters in the little hero world (unless the author plans to create a heroine or a villain in the little hero world). Since it is a chat room, try to finish most of the world as quickly as possible and then add a few more people and go to other worlds to play or something.

What the hell is this novel? Why don't you just stop writing it?