Cultivation: Starting as a Medicine Boy

It seemed good at first, but Murong Wanwan was immediately persuaded to quit by forcing dual cultivation! Why do those who want to cultivate immortality find a Taoist companion and even cultivate together! How could a cautious character be taken advantage of? When I saved her and gave her a precious elixir, I could still say that she was young and ignorant. What a waste of these two cultivations! The product of love brain + brainless!!! Bad review

I don't know since when, from Qi training to foundation building, foundation building pills are required. Without them, foundation building can't be done.

The male protagonist is devoted to the truth, while the female protagonist is holding back in various ways. She only wants to give birth to a boy, and she is completely bewildered! Sister! This is the world of cultivating immortals! Are you thinking that the protagonist is too strong, so you deliberately created a weakness for the protagonist by giving birth to a child? The protagonist is about to ascend. If you give birth to a child in the lower world without the protection of the male protagonist, do you want the protagonist's child to be bullied to death? Think about that Chu, even if he dies, the wife and daughter left behind will have such a miserable life! In order to protect his daughter, his wife also died! The girl named Chu is left alone in the world!!! Housewife, if you get into trouble, just let the protagonist wipe your ass! She doesn't share the male protagonist's worries, and even thinks about having children obsessively. Having children is useless! It will only bring countless sufferings to the children! It also seriously affects the male protagonist's upgrade and makes him have to be distracted! The heroine only has two things on her mind! Apart from having children, I just think about how to control the male protagonist. Why don't you become the protagonist?! I seriously suspect that the author has changed! Written by a different woman! This book makes me more and more angry! The more I look at the heroine, the more angry I get!! I will never read this book again! Look at me again, I'm a dog! If you look at me again, I will be a dog that can eat the author's shi!!! If you look at me again, I will kill you all!!!

Things changed after the heroine was introduced. Originally, I practiced alone, but now I have to support my family. I have to pay the price of regressing in Taoism to shape my son's spiritual roots. The whole family is a drag, and it all depends on the protagonist's investment of various resources. I don't understand what I want to write. You can turn the whole family into immortals. Cultivation is a one-person affair. You, the one who only supports your family, are a bastard.

Author, you are really awesome. You have written thousands of chapters in the mortal world. Those who know that you are in the water character, but those who don't know think that you want to surpass the mortals to become immortals, become bigger and stronger, and create greater glory. It's been four years, boss. You've been writing Cangyu Realm for four whole years. I'm just asking you to write novels, not make animations. I've already graduated from high school to college. When will you be promoted to the spirit world? Even if the five elements are short of water, we can't do this. We're not short. Water, can you please stop adding more water? What kind of bicycle do you need to become an immortal? The description in that chapter is 90% nonsense. How could I not know that the environment at that time and the fighting scene were grand, and my brain can't help but imagine it.

I finally reached level 3 of refining my Qi. When I went back, I found that others were also at level 3. 😃

It's a little bit toxic but you can still watch it. If you insist on writing a female protagonist, it will be extremely toxic. It's not that you hate writing female protagonists, it's that if you can't write the emotional line well, don't touch it. Otherwise, it's extremely toxic... You can see for yourself what everyone says.

Let me tell you something that you may not believe. I have read more than 700 chapters of this book. The protagonist did not even make a single move with all his strength. He raised some kind of thunder beast and raised it to the late stage of Golden Core! I have never fought once, and all my magical powers have been cultivated to the extreme, and then upgraded and discarded. I am deducing! Then it will be of no use wherever you leave it to eat dust. It really takes the obscenity to the extreme!

The protagonist is described as selfish and callous. Not stable, Gou. I was convinced when I saw the protagonist kill his wife's suitor. You two are in love underground. Others don't know that if you pursue a woman, you are afraid that something will happen to her, so you act like a protector, and you are killed without doing anything. And the sect raised you. You think about leaving the sect every day. How can this be stable? You are more selfish and heartless than the devil.

Advantages: 1. The protagonist is very cautious and not cowardly. Even without Golden Finger, he can probably get to the very back 2. Golden Finger Xiaodie can deduce exercises, secrets, magical powers, and immortal cultivation skills, but they must be deduced reasonably and make new deductions based on existing theories. They cannot have a lifetime, nor can they speed up their cultivation. The main thing is that cultivation is a must On my own, I think the author has a good grasp of this degree 3. The worldview of the lower world is much larger than other immortality novels. The world landscape is very vast and the upper limit of inheritance is also very high (Langya Secret Realm and Purgatory Continent have sixth-level inheritance), so there are many places to play 4. Most immortality novels only have single digits of gods, and the person who transforms into gods in this book is , demons and monsters together are in double digits, and the Purgatory clan is similar. The main thing that locks the development of the lower realm is resources (so the highest state of the lower realm is currently the middle stage of god transformation, and there are only 5 human-monster purgatory in total). In the future, if the author is willing, these characters can have more plots to make the world view of the entire lower realm more complete 5. Although the upper limit of inheritance is high, there are also many shortcomings. Seriously, many ancient secrets, skills, and inherited skills have been lost, so many plots have the feeling of opening a blind box (Xianyang Secret Realm, the place where Master Yuan Mo is seated, spiritual world inheritance, Gujue Secret Realm). For the plot, there is a lot of room for development Poisonous points: 1. The plot is too watery, as for how watery it is? I am currently following up to chapter 1678, but I think without adding water, the actual content is only about 1200 chapters (maybe less). Especially after the protagonist becomes a god, the author becomes more watered down. Plots that can be expressed clearly in one page often take two or three pages to write, and then he likes to write the inner story of the character repeatedly, and he repeats it over and over again. What's even more exaggerated is that the chapter title is the progress of the plot. You can get a rough idea without even looking at it 2. The character's character problem is serious. Many people may think that the character's character does not affect the plot. After all, the world of immortality is just a bunch of monks with incorrect views, but at least it should be more shaped and not everyone's. The characters are all carved out by the same Mouzi as the protagonist, and even the inner thoughts are very different (in the early stage, at least Jiang Siling, Shangguan and other monks could see the characteristics of the characters, but in the later stage, the characteristics of the monks were similar). The difference is that there is no golden finger and no aura of the protagonist, which is completely unacceptable. It is also cautious, but in different environments, different sects and different families, their behaviors and considerations will be different, so the character characteristics will also be different. The author needs to strengthen this aspect, otherwise it will be a pity to create so many characters 3. There are also problems with the protagonist's character (the protagonist is too licky to the heroine). This is the same as the previous character problem, but because he is the protagonist, I wrote it separately. The protagonist is too bitchy, and the heroine is too silly. If it were an urban fairy novel, I wouldn't be strong enough to accept it. But you are a traditional fairy, and the protagonist is as cautious and obsessive. I think it's too weird for the bitch protagonist and the love-minded heroine to appear in this novel. 4. The heroine Jin Danhou has no chance of her own, and all her cultivation depends on the protagonist, which makes the protagonist's cultivation like a joke. The protagonist can cultivate to the point of becoming a god, and goes through all kinds of hardships to adventure in Langya Secret Realm, Xianyang Secret Realm, Leiyuan Adventure, and pretend to be a Yuanying monk of the Immortal Alliance. The heroine has nothing, so she easily cultivates to the point where she has all the resources of a semi-immortal. Later, the protagonist takes an adventure to fight the Purgatory clan and obtains magical objects. The heroine even has the resources to become a god (Chapter 1678). Comparing the heroine's cultivation with the hero, this makes the protagonist completely like a joke 5. The heroine's brain circuit is very strange, and she is afraid that she will not be able to ascend with the leader. After the protagonist ascends, he will have no concern for the lower world, so she has always wanted to have sex with the protagonist. The child makes the protagonist care (I am confused, what kind of brain circuits are there, aren't they all serious cultivation and soaring together?), In order to give birth to a child, you need to get the Heavenly Pregnancy Stone, but the Heavenly Pregnancy Stone is only available in the Immortal Alliance, so you have to go to the battlefield and exchange it with meritorious deeds (and then commit various suicide attempts on the battlefield). After finally giving birth to a son, he has no spiritual roots to cultivate. I saw this whole confusion, two Nascent Souls gave birth to a child without spiritual roots!? I'm speechless at this... Then I finally got the legal spiritual object, but in the end, it gave his son spiritual roots??? Then why didn't the author just give his son the spiritual root from the beginning, and then why did he go around a circle? 6. The author is writing about the crazy suppression of the protagonist's state of becoming a god, and the protagonist's state keeps upgrading and downgrading (it is difficult to comprehend the second realm of Thunder Law, but it is consumed by his son, and it is difficult for Mu Law to comprehend the second realm, and is beaten back by the ancestor of Purgatory). There is no progress at all, and it is very annoying to read The above is for reference only, just my personal thoughts, I will only talk about some of the advantages and serious poisons that I think are better, and I will not comment on some details