My Holy Lord, I Don't Want to Be a Working Dragon.

The explanation of things is a bit unclear, and the writing technique is... Very green. Read more other novels of the same type and learn a little bit. The idea is good, but the beginning of the story is not very clear. Logically speaking, just the time travel to become a saint and focus on the Eight Immortals. It can be filled with more than ten chapters. It will pave the way in the early stage, and then come back to find the scene in the later stage, which is several chapters. If the author does not expand the plot... The novel cannot be written for hundreds of thousands of words, and even the next few hundred thousand words will reach the ceiling. I feel uninspired, and then it will be eunuchs, or the power system is chaotic, and bullshit, ghosts and snake gods are flying all over the sky, and it will die soon. I have read novels for so many years, and I am looking for seedlings every month. Most of them are like this. The ideas are good and creative, but it is a pity that not many of these novels can survive. The final suggestion is to create an outline as early as possible. Even if you think about what to write next

To be honest, the subject matter is good, but the author's writing is too funny and the character creation is not good. The eight demons don't feel like the eight demons to me, and the feeling of turning into a human form is not to my personal taste.

There are people who have transformed into human beings, and those who watch the strange beasts can be withdrawn.

Eight Demons➕Little Dragon Very handsome

The protagonist, the Holy Lord, licks the dog? Wow, oh crap, I added a dog-licking label to the Holy Lord. Although it is not the original Holy Lord, the Holy Lord and Bazaar are really confused. The Holy Lord has become Bazaar's licking-dog. Forgive me, it was beyond my expectation!

The author, Ximu created the black devil energy together with the Holy Lord, and as soon as Ximu came out, he wanted to liberate the other brothers and sisters. Ximu regards wisdom as the best, and is the most inferior in terms of wisdom, but he was reduced to a mentally retarded child. There is basically no difference between the wisdom of other demons. It is a miserable comparison. After all, the best thing is wisdom, and it is gone.

Originally I thought this book would be a big hit, but I underestimated the author, and I didn't understand why he wanted to lick dogs. A good novel is not about dog licking. I hate the Virgin Mary's dog licking and eunuchs the most when reading novels.

🤫

The author is great. Personally, I think it's better not to go to the Prehistoric World. These time-travel novels are basically finished as soon as they arrive in the Prehistoric World... I have never seen anyone who finished writing the Prehistoric World and continued writing about other worlds...

Da Luo, who is sitting in the ancient world, is really weird. You can write traditional myths. To be honest, the Great Buddha is a fellow Taoist, and most of those who write about it are just sorting out myths. Even though they have a prehistoric name, they actually have little to do with the prehistoric flow. Even Pangu is just a minor god in mythology, the only founding god who died because of the creation of time. At his highest status, he was the incarnation of the original king. As for Hongjun, he only appeared in "The Romance of the Gods", and other times he was in novels. There is no such thing as him in the myth.

The Holy Lord who has the Black Qi is the Holy Lord! The Holy Lord who does not have the Black Qi is called the Lizard Man. The Holy Lord, like the legendary Godzilla, is a part of the earth's environmental recovery mechanism. Without this title, the Holy Lord may have degenerated.

The author is great. Is the protagonist's ranking of the eight demons' strength (here we are talking about strength, not age ranking, if the age number one is Curse Blue, right) wrong? The first one should be the protagonist (Holy Lord). Whether it is anime or fan fiction, the Holy Lord's strength will always be the first among the eight demons (of course it must refer to the 12-talisman state). After all, the eight demons have no actual strength ranking. Apart from the recognized Holy Master (who can be understood by searching on Baidu, don't take advantage of any loopholes if there are dedicated videos) and west Mu, who seems to be the weakest. The remaining strengths are probably about the same, but because Curse Lan is recognized as the oldest, he is the eldest brother. Why did he become the most powerful in the novel? Don't say it's because of the powerful gravity. None of the eight demons have the strongest abilities. Each has its own strengths. Curse Blue's field control, Bo Gang's defense, Ximu's air speed, Zhongsu's thunder range Holy Lord's comprehensiveness (single-range dragon blast, high attack speed pig spell, undead dog, horse that recovers faster than other demons, low-match Curse Blue Chicken, high-altitude flying rabbit chicken, transformation monkey, etc.), Etc. In the individual spells of Holy Lord, the various abilities combined are equivalent to one or two demons. In addition, the gravity of the Chicken Talisman offsets part of the Curse Blue Qi. No matter how you look at it, it is impossible for Curse Blue to be stronger than the Holy Ancestor! It is possible to say that he is second only to the Holy Lord, but it is also impossible to say that he is better than the Holy Lord! Unless it's age, there's really nothing to say. I hope the author can change it later, and the holy master of the family ranking is also the smallest except Ximu 😁

You may not believe it, but my employer sent me to support Africa. QAQ, China's railways are number one in the world!

The basis for saying that Holy Lord is the strongest person is that a fully equipped demon dragon cannot defeat Holy Lord. First, all Xiaolong possesses is the demonic energy of other demons, and the unit is still a wisp of what they were in their heyday, which doesn't mean much. Second, all demons can do magic, even Bo Gang. Dad said at the beginning that the eight demons are all demon wizards. When the Holy Lord came out of hell, other demons cast spells together, including Bo Gang. When the Holy Lord returned to hell, other demons put curses on him, including Bo Gang.

The Yankees reversed the divination of Bazaar and Mantra. Kan matches water, and Kan should be Basha rather than Dui. When paired with Ze, it should be Curranium instead of Kan.

I think the author can take a look at some of the settings in "Abyssal Demons of All Realms". The abyssal novels are better written, and there are many settings that can be used for reference.

It's been 20 days. If you still haven't updated it, don't delete it from me.

Do you have to become a human? 😒

In fact, you don't have to go to the Marvel world so quickly. You can go to the Diablo world first to hang out. The rules there are appropriate, not to mention all kinds of legendary equipment and ancient equipment.

The author must not make the Holy Lord ambiguous or anything else. I think you can't control it, and the character of the Holy Lord... Anyone who has watched the anime has the impression that it is not suitable for CP.