Cultivating Immortality with Game Templates

First: The pace of entry at the beginning is too slow. We only get to the family in Chapter 20. Those mundane things are a big failure. Second: Before and after Chapter 47, the plot of pretending to be cool with Master Fu was too awkward to write. Not only was it not fun, but it was also extremely awkward. It was particularly incapable of pretending. It was profit-driven. It would be much better if it was added in a tactful way to create a feeling that everything was under control. I haven't read the rest yet, but I made too many stupid mistakes in the first 100,000 words, which is why you can't start this book. The subject matter and golden fingers are quite attractive, and the writing method is also good. Currently, there are only 3,000 collections. According to the subscription ratio of 20:1, I estimate that this book will not exceed 500 subscriptions. The main reason is that the pacing in the early stage was slow and forced a wave of withdrawals, and later, the pretentiousness was too awkward to encourage a wave of withdrawals. After finishing the book, this book has gained a group of loyal book friends. I will sum up my experience in the next book and it will produce results. Come on!

This rubbish setting is too intellectually depressing. In order to improve his qualifications, the male protagonist actually became a beggar at the age of five or six! During this period, I actually didn't learn any skills. What kind of operation is this? Isn't it possible to improve one's qualifications just by practicing? The funniest thing is that he originally wanted to practice martial arts, but later he heard that he would have to practice for decades before giving up. It was too poisonous! How is your behavior worthy of your character? And you can't stop improving your qualifications every minute, 365 days a year? Otherwise, why would you be so busy? Have you only been a beggar for fifty or sixty years?

The subject matter is very good, but it feels like a failure to pretend to be a master. Maybe some people like to see it

Damn you. In the first ten chapters, I became a spiritual root and went to practice. This spiritual root is useless. It also overpowers the protagonist's strength. Dead on the street

Caring for seedlings starts with me

After reading the beginning, why doesn't the protagonist practice immortality first and then improve his qualifications?

You don't have to fight, but you must have it.

It's really a bit silly to spend 60 years to gain qualifications. Why can't I practice first if I have a golden finger? The qualifications must be met, is it because you can't add more after practicing? Also, although qualifications are important, lifespan is obviously more important. Lifespan is originally limited, only 63, which is 60 years wasted. If you use 40 years to practice, you might be able to upgrade. This time is purely wasted. It can be said that it is too desperate. It is really a bit of a start to persuade me to quit. It should be better if I change it.

What I wrote at the beginning is, to be honest, it feels pretty good. But as I looked at it, I noticed one thing that kept repeating itself: pretending to defraud and being hated, and then continuing to pretend to defraud and being hated. After reading about 50 chapters, I repeated this routine several times. Anyway, it's all about showing off, and then being hated for various reasons. In short, he was showing off in various ways in front of people whose strength and status were higher than his. Those who are slightly weak will eventually discover his deception, and then want to take revenge on him. Then there is the matter of showing off in front of those with higher status and using it to avoid pursuit. Then continue to show off and continue to provoke. 90% Of the readers who ran away were because of this, I'm sure. I have to say that the author's plot concept is not generally bad.

The beginning was too toxic. I worked as a beggar for sixty years to earn my qualifications and traveled everywhere. Who is stupid?

Author, why did you delete my post? ? ? Your post was blocked by the system!

It has been repeated over and over again. I don't know whether the author is trying to trick him or the author is asking the protagonist to trick him 😒. I gave up.

It's really poisonous. A mortal snatched away the male protagonist's golden opportunity, and then turned around to kill the protagonist and scold him. He was not dead yet. I vomited 😰😰

I have written more than 90 chapters and am still in the Qi training period. I can't do anything except pretending and attracting hatred.

To be honest, I was poisoned. What the hell is he doing if he doesn't start practicing first and then go out to travel? Were your parents happy when they died? Even the parents of the original owner should show basic respect. Is the family bloodline very fragile? Let me ask you this: You and your parents have no food to eat. Who will they give it to when they find it? ! ? I gave up this eye-catching book!

I can't stand it anymore, just be a beggar for 60 years, then start pretending to be a slap in the face, and start beating when you are still incapable.

Sure enough, Daodu would send me some really poisonous things every day.

After reading Chapter 60, it turns out that the protagonist has actually died and was forcibly renewed by the author. The protagonist entered the sect and accepted a few people, and his character gradually changed. The protagonist was still measured and measured before he became an immortal. After cultivating, his character gradually drifted away. He forgot that he was still a rice shrimp. He should take whatever he wants and where he should go. He was stubborn when things went wrong. This was an early routine used in writing articles about cultivating immortals 🙂

Identified, junk book, huge poison!

I was almost poisoned to death. Come here and scold me.

The funniest thing is that even if you practice Tianlinggen too much every day, you still get aura.

The biggest failure was that the seven or eight foundation-building casual cultivators wanted to fight with the golden elixir cultivators from the cultivating family!

This book has been reviewed and it is not worth wasting your time.

Goodbye, I haven't finished watching it all. I didn't want to watch it after seeing the protagonist and other casual cultivators killing Jin Dan.

. . . In a world where there are immortals and demons, who may disappear one day, the protagonist still travels around to peek at baths to improve his qualifications? I was afraid of being beaten to death countless times.

I can't handle it in the first chapter, you are so awesome

Read, very inappropriate for me to read

It's really too abrasive and poisonous

Chapter 125: Foundation building successful? Is there anything slower?

Pure garbage with all kinds of poisonous spots.