The First Cause of All Worlds

It's time to make some progress, brother. It's still the same routine 10 years ago. Anyway, I have been working hard, every time, how many lives does your protagonist have? Can't we improve our thinking a little bit? Ah, just stick to this point, and I won't write anything other than this. I think about suppressing my fighting power every day, and then I know how to fight when something happens. People can't go smoothly, but they don't have to fight for everything big or small. It's normal for you to fight for big things. When you meet someone, you have to fight for your life and work hard all day long. Doesn't that mean he is a waste? Not low? With such a big golden finger, you have to fight hard when something happens, and you have to fight an infinite number of times all day long. This is your writing habit. Why do you still get good results in the early stage of your book? The early and middle stages are also very good. Fighting once, twice or three times is very passionate and beautiful. If you fight too much, it becomes a disgusting routine. After growing up with such a big golden finger for so long, it is still stuck in the routine of fighting with others. Isn't your protagonist unable to progress? How many lives does he have? 100 Items? After fighting for his life so many times and suffering so many losses, he should have a longer memory. You should be able to strategize a little bit. Don't just go for it every time when a crisis comes. Do you think it's better after seeing this routine too many times? It is indeed a cool point to fight hard to overcome the enemy, but you can't just have this fun point? Is there more strategizing in your book? This is also a very comfortable point, especially after working hard for a long time, why don't you know how to adapt it? Besides, even if you just want to be reckless, you have to have some brains to be reckless from beginning to end. It feels like you can just read the book and go away. Many of his protagonists are just muscles and recklessness. But you won't have this feeling when you read his book. Reading from beginning to end, you won't feel more and more frustrated as you read. The fragrance of plum blossoms comes from the bitter cold, but you can't keep bitter cold, bitter cold, bitter cold, endlessly, the fragrance of flowers is there! Although reality does not necessarily mean that hard work will definitely lead to rewards, but you are still cheating, and Goldfinger is still the protagonist? Anyway, it feels like your protagonist only looks at the present, without any mid-term or long-term considerations. Every time something happens, he just resists and fights for his life.

The structure of this article is reasonable, the logic is rigorous, the plot description and foreshadowing are eloquent, and the characters are full and lifelike. As if in front of you, the article of less than a million words has created a number of memorable characters, especially the great scholar Xu Wenji. Judging from this person's courage of Zhang Juzheng, Hai Rui's incorruptibility, and Yu Qian's help to the world, he can be called the three immortal Wang Shouren of another world. I feel that the author has portrayed Xu Wenji as Wang Yangming. The plot description of this article is fascinating, and there is always suspense at the end of the chapter. It makes people unable to put it down, and it is extremely sticky to read. Looking at the context of this article, it is good at connecting the ancient historical events and mythological stories we are familiar with with the martial arts fantasy of the other world, creating a sense of mystery that is both familiar and unfamiliar. It is quite a legacy of the Zhou royal family. The protagonist Yang Yu It is also quite similar to Fang Yun, the protagonist of Da Zhou. He adheres to the bottom line and is upright, but he is also tactful and adaptable. He is decisive in killing without losing the idea of benefiting the people. He has great perseverance, great courage, great tenacity, and great luck. He always practices the belief that a man should do something and not do something. Just as the protagonist Yang Yu said: It is better to be crazy than to care for the country! To sum up, this article is an excellent work of traditional fantasy literature, with a final score of 90 points. Readers who like traditional fantasy literature and Eastern fantasy can read it with confidence.

Leave a comment Due to the author's update issues, I subscribed intermittently. After the plot of the old demon, I probably won't follow it anymore.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                             Coming to the topic, many people say that the author suppresses the protagonist's level. The author gave the protagonist a lot of plug-ins to make the protagonist show off and attract readers, without considering rationality at all. Therefore, there was a big gap between the performance of these plug-ins and the protagonist later, and he had to suppress the protagonist.                                                                                                             Let's talk about the plot of this article, so many martial saints have fought against the old demon, but they still don't understand the details of the old demon, Bodhidharma, Sloppy, Mad Monk, Zhang Yuanzhu, Xuan Ba, are all these people fools? The old demon's nature has not broken through Jiuyao, but he has many Taoist skills. These martial saints tried little by little and cracked the old demon's Taoist skills bit by bit, and they have already succeeded. As for now, do you still know nothing about the old demon? Knowing that part of Lao Yao's Taoism comes from incense, why didn't he eradicate the Liansheng Cult? The Fool Among Fools Let's talk about the protagonist again. He has occupied so many chassis, the territory has been built so well, and the protagonist's talent is so high that he even killed Fan Wuyi. Who is the main enemy of the protagonist at this time? Who does the protagonist need to worry about? Only the old witch! The protagonist gets to know the old witch a little bit, and then breaks through the supernatural power in a targeted manner. Why is she so miserable now? Even if someone is sent to keep an eye on the old witch, she still doesn't know anything about being taken away from the rear? Especially since Yang Jian is such a great tonic, if the old witch had eaten Yang Jian at that time, it would have highlighted that the protagonist is a fool. If the author had brought his family to the place covered by the book of Hades, played steadily, occupied the base while breaking through in cultivation, he would have been in an invincible position long ago! Let's talk about the old witch's seal. The martial saints of all ages have used martial arts to seal. For thousands of years, everyone has used Taoist seals as a double insurance? As a result, Lu Chen suddenly unblocked her and the old witch came out, but no one knew about it. If it is normal logic, Bodhidharma, Sloppy, etc., While constantly hitting the old witch, constantly trying to find out the old witch's true identity, and eradicating the Liansheng Cult, cracking the old witch's Taoism, while strengthening the seal, building cities, magic circles, and sending people Keep an eye on the old witch, this has 4 functions: 1. Break the old witch's Taoism; 2. Prevent others from rescuing the old witch; 3. Even if others rescue the old witch, they still have time to call someone; 4. If you can't stop her, you can give others an early warning. Even if you can't do them all, you can't do none of them!      Finally, to summarize this book, there are serious problems with the plot and logic of this book. The author lacks writing skills and can only rely on cheating for the protagonist to attract readers. As a result, the protagonist has to be suppressed in the later stage. Many climaxes are suppressed by the author before they start. The plot at the climax of the plot is still stuck... Many readers who have opinions about the author will not follow up after the old witch plot. In the end, this article is unfinished.

I started reading it the day before yesterday saying I didn't want to read it, so it doesn't affect my comments. Can't you tell that this book has collapsed? Now it's just a matter of word count, and I'll write down whatever comes to mind. A few questions: 1. The Taoist ghosts in the book often use the great gods of the 8th and 9th tribulations, and then use Yang Jian, Nezha, and other characters, and these characters often last for 480 million years, but there are no characters or signs of the 6th or 7th tribulation until now. I don't know who knows this era, time and historical line of the story. 2. Most of the character lines in the early chapters of the book, Mountain and Sea Realm, have been abandoned, including Lu Chen, the heroine, Yang Ni, not to mention White Dog with Dao Fruit, and it is estimated that it will be unfinished in the end. 3. The immortal god promotion ceremony is actually very similar to the Eastern version of the Lord of Mysteries, but it is clearly introduced repeatedly in every article. Up to now, few readers understand this promotion ceremony. The required Dao Fruit is always in the weapon. It is mentioned in the previous article and can be used in the following article. Now the Dao Fruit involves the Dao Ghost. The complexity is multiplied by 2. The Dao Ghost involves which calamity or the great god at the end of the calamity. The complexity is multiplied by 2. A very simple point, after 1000 chapters, neither the author nor the readers can come up with something similar to a promotion system table.          4. This is the only book that I have read to 1000 chapters, but the title does not match the content, or it is mentioned in one sentence!                   ，！                                                                                                                                                                                              ，2，，，，， So I decided to go to 88 the day before yesterday. This is the first time I have read a book and there are so many comments. I really have to pay attention to the quality, otherwise I really want to scold what a piece of rubbish I paid to read. 🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭🤭

Let me give a brief review of this book. In summary, it is tasteless and a pity to discard. The author's overall thinking and level are quite online. But there are three biggest problems. First, there is no outline, just write wherever you think. There is no archive of manuscripts. How many chapters I can write every day depends on my status that day. It's okay, but there is not a single card. Even if there are two chapters, the level is still uneven. Overall lack of planning. Secondly, from a micro perspective, the writing is like prose, and often the logic is incoherent. Who is hitting whom, who is talking, who is answering, where does a person come from, and where is he going. Some of the content is basically guesswork and the structure is loose. There seems to be a feeling that the author understands it in his heart, just types the meaning of a few words, and hopes that the readers will figure it out on their own. Thirdly, the author is obviously not very good at controlling the world view and group portraits, and the whole novel tends to be in the style of a small garden. The grasp of local scenes is okay, but not when it comes to large scenes. Regarding time, space, information transmission, etc., They are basically extremely casual. As long as there is a need, people seem to be able to appear suddenly anywhere, and some information is inexplicably known to the world. The author is like setting up a small garden, just putting all the materials in it. It doesn't matter how the materials come from. In general, there is something, but not much. In other words, the author really does not have enough energy and time to put into this book to truly perfect it.

The author has read both books, and his writing skills are at the upper-middle level among the writers at the starting point. Now he is probably stuck at a bottleneck. I think the author's biggest problem is the overall layout and rhythm. To put it simply, it's top-heavy. I subscribed to these two books in the first and mid-term, but I basically stopped reading them in the later stages. Why don't I read them in the later stages? Two words are useless and boring. The author has the ability to enter the ranks of great gods, the premise is to break through himself. Don't be in a hurry to start a new book, read more and settle down!

Please remember this day, July 1st. On June 28th, author pua, everyone said that he would work hard to write, but yesterday there was no one, not even a chapter. The promised three chapters ended up being three chapters in two days. I will never make up for it if I say it will be corrected. If it can't be completed, the author will never mention making up for it in the future. I don't have the face to do so. Really, I regret it. I voted for the monthly vote in the last few minutes. It was my fault. I should have let the vote rot in my hands. I feel sorry for Gouzi. I shouldn't. It's my fault. I won't vote next time. Normal subscription is already selling feelings. This book is too careless, and this person is too careless.

1. I have read about 700 chapters so far, and I am not ready to read any more. But of course, after reading it for so long, this book must have merits. The early plot and some settings are quite good and have highlights. 2. But after the 100th chapter, the author made at least 10 typos in one chapter, and sometimes the names of people were written wrong, and they were never corrected. Typos are nothing, but this is the attitude of writing a book. With this attitude, the author will never become a first-class author. 3. It can be seen from the attitude of typos that the author writes in a hurry and writes wherever he thinks. He has not thought clearly about what kind of story he wants to write. It is no wonder that the setting and plot in the middle and later stages are getting worse and worse, and he has to set his own settings. 4. As a cool novel, it severely suppresses the protagonist and positive supporting characters. There is also a lot of ink and ink used to describe the disgusting supporting character Hua, and she is very angry. For example, the disgusting villain plague kills millions of people, but it is destroyed by the protagonist and is gone. . I can't say that it's wrong to write this way, but it's not that enjoyable to write a novel. (This book is still a bit of a brainless novel in my definition, and the pictures are cool) 5. The world view is very large, and the setting is pretty good. There are highlights, but the author did not grasp it well in the later stage 6. From the world view to the many supporting characters, the author has a relatively high ambition and imagination, but as I said before, he is not willing to correct even typos and relies on his own settings, just like a high-rise building without a foundation. It is impossible for such an author to grasp such a large setting. 7. The summary is that the book is worth reading, but be prepared to feel uncomfortable halfway through it.

Is this author deliberately disgusting readers?

I don't even dare to read this guy's new book for fear of being tricked.

This post was created on June 2, 2023. Seeing that the spiritual world is still the same, I am stuck in Bengbu, and it is gathering dust on the bookshelf. I feel so unhappy that I go crazy. This book is dead "A book can die in three ways. The first is that the author commits suicide, the second is that the book is completed, and the third is that it is put on the bookshelf to gather dust." In my opinion, other worlds are just repetitions of the first world! The same frustration and depression, the same confusion and stress. We no longer know what the author is writing, or even what the author originally wanted to write. The shining point of the entire book has been completely wiped out, leaving me with the feeling that the author may have jade syndrome. The author doesn't write according to the outline, and he doesn't even have an outline. We also don't know the original story in the author's mind. [Reconstructing the Story] Connect three elements and run them through the whole text: heaven and earth, Tao, Fruit, Ding, Mind, Dharma, and its rituals. ...... "Tripod" The entire universe is layered with oppression from top to bottom, and the protagonist Yang Yao has always had only one identity: "the fish on the chopping board". At the end of the ten tribulations, the Tao ghosts from the previous tribulation were reborn, hoping to restore the order of their lifetimes to all realms. Our protagonist comes into being, and the tone of this story is either a puppet lackey of the old order, or a reform and reform of the new order. The most distinctive point of this book is that it proposes the Tao and Fruit system. But why is the protagonist's golden finger not a Dao fruit? ? Why not Daoguo! ? Why not Daoguo! ? I have to create a cheat that I don't know what the power of the system is, and it's a bad writing method of deus ex machina. The tripod should fit its theme of Tao and Fruit, not just a decoration. The tripod is the only fruit of heaven and earth, the embodiment of law and order. The rolling years shape civilization, and all living beings go from disorder to order, establishing a legal order to restrain all living beings from misbehaving and promote the good development of the world as a whole. However, order will also decay. The order that was originally beneficial to all living beings has also become a weapon used by the upper class to enslave all living beings to maintain their own selfish interests. This is Jie Qi. As the aura of calamity deepens, the countermeasure of heaven and earth is to strand the aura. "When a whale falls, all things come to life." Let the immortals and Buddhas occupying the upper levels die one after another, and re-open the upward and downward flow. This is the means of countering the collapse of the order of heaven and earth. However, as calamities rise and fall, immortals and Buddhas have mastered more and more ways to avoid calamities, such as Dongtian, Taoist ghosts, and reincarnation. The means of heaven and earth gradually fail, and the calamity becomes deeper and deeper. Finally, at the end of the ten tribulations, the heaven and earth sacrificed the "Tripod of Heaven and Earth's Dao Fruit", Looking for a person with a great mind, walking for the tribulation energy, reforming the old and reforming the old, establishing a new order, and restoring the purity and turbidity of heaven and earth. "Character·Dharma" The biggest failure has always been that people who are driven away by the environment, how can they express their own characteristics. I can't understand the character of the protagonist, and I can't write about it, so I can't write the protagonist's own main plot. This is why TM always jumps to other places halfway through the writing, crazy about the description of the group portraits, and it seems that there is too much to write and there is no space, so the protagonist's part is skipped hastily. ...... Fa is the protagonist's original identity as a law student, the split between Yang Yu and Yang Ni, the protagonist's knot in the feudal dynasty of the first world: "If you don't obey the king's law, the peasants will revolt", and it is also the immortal Dharma in other immortal and Buddhist worlds. The identity of a law student explains why Ding chose him. Without him, his understanding of the Dharma surpasses everyone in all realms. This is also in line with the following "Why the protagonist uses the Dharma as a precept", but it is a pity that it is not clearly written. I only wrote "self-denial and abide by the law" and hesitated, but did not write "Whose Dharma is this Dharma?" Write down the various methods of seeing people from all walks of life. When writing about the corrupt laws, pig and dog emperors are superior, just because they sit on the throne created by the dynasty's justice, and use this method to control and annex the world; when writing about Xu Wenji, a positive figure, his laws are to maintain the dynasty's laws and the emperor's laws, not the laws of the people; when writing about the laws of gods and Buddhas in the sky, it is like enfeoffing princes. The land is divided into prisons and all walks of life are divided into pastures for incense and rituals... The reason why the protagonist has no courage is that he cannot write "After experiencing so much, what does the protagonist understand?" I wrote as much as I wanted. In the end, I realized that all laws are illegal and are actually prisons, and then they cannot be broken or erected. Write about the protagonist's change in observing the precepts. So Yang Yu and Yang Ni, one is law and the other is lawlessness. In fact, they are all two sides of the same dharma. If you don't follow the old dharma, you will follow the new dharma. And I feel that Yang Ni's appearance is too awkward. It is better to regard it as a ritual of Daoguo Ding, "Whose law is the law for?" After some twists and turns, he understands "I destroy the law and establish new laws for all living beings." After completing this ritual, the souls and souls will advance as one, instead of always hanging on to comparisons, which will make the protagonist more and more useless. Killing the emperor in the end was also the reason why the first world was quite happy. It was "breaking the lawlessness at the top", but in other worlds, everyone was fleeing and feeling aggrieved. ...... "Ritual" Speaking of which, this cauldron is really useless. It can be said that the protagonist's entire combat power is based on the existing old Dao Fruit. So this is where I feel frustrated. How can you defeat others in someone else's system? If you want to write the invincible method, you should build it on this tripod. Give this cauldron a mechanism, and the breakthrough of mind is a ritual. Once the ritual is completed, existing Tao fruits can be integrated and new Tao fruits can be created. Otherwise, just like now, if you collect a lot of Tao Fruits and leave them at home to eat ashes, they will be useless. They are not even as good as your brother Yang Jian and Ran Deng Lao Fo. Suitable Tao Fruits will be available at a moment's notice and they will be directly promoted. In fact, establishing martial arts means establishing new laws. But this martial arts feels so weak that no one can beat it. ...... Kui Xing kicks and fights (beheads), Yinghuo Shouxin (establishes new laws), Changhong Guanri (opens up the world of the dynasty, kills the emperor and kills the mother), Sparks of Fire (the people repay their kindness with incense and sacrifice their lives) *Follow the old method: in the early stage, the protagonist follows the dynasty's duties and passively continues to behead and enforce the law. * Legislate new laws. What impressed me the most was that the protagonist was in Chapter 138. The original chapter was written very clearly and clearly stated the difference between the protagonist's law enforcement and the dynasty officials' law enforcement. He should not be forced to kill decisively, but sit alone on a mountain of bones and watch the rain. If he is decisive in his heart, he should be regarded as a hero. What happens next? They fight for a long time and describe the villain's remarks, but they don't have any characteristics. They are either Sheda who is overpowering and reasonable, or the Riddler who gives up on himself. Just kill it like above. * Law Enforcement Sacrifice yourself for justice, and then rely on the tripod to repair your body without breaking or standing. It's a little too extreme, and the protagonist plays too conservatively. Yang Ni dared to refine the army of zombies and massacre the blood-refining sea. Yang Yu, who is also the Cumulus Mountain, should be cut off when he is there, and where the incarnation of the Book of Heaven becomes famous, he should be braver. * Against Fate Monkey is also the God of Justice, which is a good choice. The former represents going against the law, while the latter represents maintaining the old order. Moreover, the meaning of the inheritance of the God of Justice is to let the successors understand the true meaning of justice by themselves, but only accept this Tao Fruit and become a puppet. *Chuang Martial Arts After finishing the battle in the Dynasty World, let's go to the Transcendent World.

， But it feels really tiring. The protagonist has more than 700 chapters now, and he has not even finished the first world. Gouzi is now crazy about the settings. He feels that the entire setting must be laid out and explained clearly in the first world. As a result, the protagonist is stuck in the realm and the main plot is stuck. It couldn't be pushed forward, and there were more and more branch lines and pitfalls. As a result, Gouzi's own stall was too big and he was too busy. The plot was stuck to death. The book "Realms" repeatedly jumped on the edge of a complete collapse. I was really afraid that the book would be gone one day. Take the latest fifth volume as an example. Judging from the title of the volume, this should be the volume where the protagonist takes off. However, the protagonist is still stuck motionless with the Martial Saint. Instead, the villain lineup has Lu Chen and a bunch of ancient magical masters, which is a super double (compared to this, the old witch is a P). The more I watch it, the more I feel that the villain is really strong, the protagonist is really crappy, and I really can't get enough of it. In addition, I really want to ask Gouzi, if the difficulty of the first world is so high, how should the subsequent plot be written? From the current point of view, based on the standard of Martial Saint, the Black Mountain Old Demon and Fan Ruyi are at the same level, Zhang Xuanba is at the same level, the Old Witch is at the next level, Lu Chen is at the next level, and the magical power masters Lu Chen recruited have been struggling for so many years, and they are also at the level of the Black Mountain Old Demon. Looking at the protagonist's side, the protagonist and Daoren Lin are considered to be ordinary martial saints, but they can't beat Heishan. Later, Wang Mu's magical power is mainly calculated at the martial saint level, and other potentials are acceptable, but the development period of each one is ridiculously long (Stone Monkey Qitian has not yet been conceived/the princess has just received the power transfer/Qin Luan's ceremony has not been completed/Xiao Yangjian has just been born). This shows that the protagonist is extremely lacking in high-end combat power. How can the protagonist fight? Can't we just write hundreds more chapters on this first small world? Moreover, in the first small world, the protagonist must fight enemies who are at least three levels higher than himself. After this, the protagonist must not defeat the King Zunfo ten times, and destroy the Four Emperors in Jiu Yao. It is really recommended that you don't have to set up the Gouzi shop in such a hurry. One thing to say, for example, the protagonist's final boss at this stage is the old witch. When the protagonist has almost pacified the world and reached the level of the old witch in combat power, Lu Chen and his gang will be released, and this can be used as an opportunity to let the protagonist out of the small world. In this way, the protagonist is also under pressure, but it is not depressing. He can have fun even if he wants to, and the plot will not appear too bloated. Now that I see it, I feel that the biggest problem with "Worlds" is that the booth is too big, and the protagonist can't take off, and he can't feel happy. Finally, I still hope that Gouzi can be full of literary thoughts and write better and better. Don't follow the old path of "The Great Dao Ji" (I have to make a rant here, it's really a pity that a god-like work like "The Great Dao Ji" is unfinished).

More than 900 chapters are really long and smelly

I just re-read the introduction, "The vast world is rejuvenated, and the departed gods and demons are soon returning." I just realized that this "soon" is nearly 3 million words long, and I cried to death

The subject matter and setting of this novel are very good, but the author's writing skills are not good enough to control what could have become a masterpiece.

Did you watch a pirated version?

Author: If you have tinnitus, please go to the hospital immediately. If you have hearing loss, it is sudden deafness. The best time for treatment is within seven days. Do not think that you have not had a good rest. Remember this.

After reading a few chapters recently, I feel that the author's writing is still very powerful. The character image, especially the image of a master, is easy to establish. But while reading, it is easy to feel the jerky connection between the plots. Without any foreshadowing, I always felt like I was watching an animation with dropped frames. I often wonder about the author's outline. I hope the author can write more and more meticulously, combining hardness and softness.

There are eight buckets of luck in the world. The old man only has one stone, but the world owes him two buckets.

Now that I've read this book, I feel like it's a waste of money to skip reading it and read maybe 2 of the 10 chapters.

The book is a good book, compared to others, it is completely excellent, but it doesn't match the title. When I read the title of the book "The First Cause of All Realms", I thought it was going to be similar to "Gu Shaoshang", or similar to the protagonist in the book (Taibaishuijun), but it turned out not to be the case at all. , On the contrary, it is similar to the protagonist of (Go Away), But it is still a good book, not as embarrassing as those people criticized it Personally, I feel sorry for the title of "The First Cause of All Worlds", the imagination is not big enough.

A book that is written in the later stage (a chapter after 890) still needs explanation of the setting. I don't know what I think. In order to make it easy for later readers to understand, I spent time clarifying the setting (The world where the protagonist travels) Shanhaijie (the first world of the Ten Tribulations of the Yuan Dynasty, which in ancient times was the Tianhuang Realm) is one of the recent worlds of the "Tianhaijie". At the end of the ninth calamity of the Yuan Dynasty, when the spiritual energy dissipated, the peak of martial arts in this world was the Martial Saint, the way of immortals and Buddhas, and the ten capitals were the top. Tianhai Realm: the legendary place where gods and Buddhas live. It is collectively known as the world of all kinds, such as heaven, Buddha, and demons... (Immortals and demons go away, and the sky changes and revives) Longquan Realm: sects rule the world, and the only way to practice is The Way of Immortals and Buddhas. The spiritual tide has been surging for millions of years. The earlier the sky changes, the farther away from the world of heaven and sea. Therefore, even if the sky changes, the upper limit is low. The eight extremes are the highest. They are already quasi-emperors. Only nine great emperors have broken the limit to seven yuan. Can break through the Martial Saint): Cultivate True Gang, Qi and Blood Furnace, Hundreds of Scriptures and Casts (called Grandmaster), Qi can open all orifices (Grand Master) Martial Saint (the pinnacle of the mountain and sea world), Zhang Xuanba found out the Martial Saint (unity of soul and body, opened the Divine Hidden, and became a human immortal) Four Steps of Human Immortal (derivation of flesh and blood, size as desired, ever-changing, taking the best of all dharma into one, gathering the strength of all things to temper the divine body) ) After four steps, you can become a human immortal The conflict between Dao Fruit and Martial Arts. It is difficult to become a Martial Saint if you become a Martial Saint first. If you become a Martial Saint first, it is difficult to become a Martial Saint. If the Dao Fruit is dark, it is difficult to become a Ten Capitals For details on the Dao Fruit system setting, please refer to the chapter after 890 (explanation of Dao Fruit and ranks). Here is a brief explanation: Dao Fruit is the foundation of heaven and earth, and supernatural power is the authority of heaven and earth. (Abusing the power of controlling heaven and earth with a mortal body will cause you to lose yourself, but you can counteract it by observing the precepts) Tao ghosts are the remnant souls left by immortals and demons because of the special Tao fruit. Sleeping in the Tao fruit, they still retain part of the power of magical powers. Tao ghosts will seize the body of the master of magical powers The way of immortal Buddha: the four steps to become an immortal by swallowing Tao fruits (subdue them) Heart, perform rituals, light up the destiny map, refine the rank) after passing it, you can be promoted to the Ten Capitals (the pinnacle of the mountain and sea world), Jiuyao, Baji, Qiyuan, Sixth Division, Sixth Division, and the three paths above the Sixth Division: Five Elders, Four Imperials, Three Purities The detailed promotion path of the Immortal Buddha is as follows Shidu to Jiuyao: find the destiny map, receive the Taoist fruit, refine the great medicine, and refine the destiny. Diagram Ritual Jiuyao to Baji: Refining Rank Diagram Ritual (the more complex the rank diagram, the more difficult the ritual. The ritual of the Niranxin Monkey: Going up and down is the most difficult ritual) Baji to Qiyuan: Condensing the Dao Yuan. You need to swallow other rank diagrams to complete yourself Seven Yuan to Sixth Division: Hedao Immortal Dao level practitioners will eventually achieve enlightenment at the Sixth Division level. Those who have attained enlightenment take multi-level upholding as their path of cultivation. Above the Six Divisions: Those who combine the Great Dao are the Three Pure Ones, those who combine one's own way with all other ways are the Four Imperial Guards, and those who hold the ultimate one are the Five Elders PS: Attached is a map of the mountains and seas drawn by other book friends. If there are any other settings that need to be added, please comment me

After reading more than a hundred chapters, I felt that the rhythm was not right. I looked at the table of contents and found that one chapter of the Blood Exchange Realm is almost two million words long. (Background of the book, the first World Martial Saint Realm (the next realm of blood exchange) is considered to be on the stage (chess player)). This kind of training speed is really amazing. Although it is not frustrating to read, this is really not an invincible article. It is not to my taste, so I have withdrawn it.

Ma De, I still need to change the map. As soon as I change the map, this feeling comes. The last few pictures are really good.

Come on, author, well written.

Spend twenty points to see you pretending to be cool

Speculation analysis: Martial arts does not seem to be the path of immortals and Buddhas. As mentioned before, Yangyao's attainment of Dao is the transformation of martial arts levels into Dao fruits, but Yangyao took the initiative to destroy them. The author may mean that martial arts is no longer within the scope of Dao at this time. The reason for the reverse effect may be that the Dao does not exist when it returns to the beginning of chaos. At the same time, Yangtao's martial arts has reached the realm of the soul (to complain, human immortal martial arts has the three elements of essence, energy and spirit unified, the ultimate sublimation, what is the difference between the soul and it), this is a forced upgrade, forcing martial arts to be comparable to the path of immortals and Buddhas, (I talked about the enlightenment before Daoguang didn't cultivate magical powers, and only relied on martial arts to kill Qi Yuan. The martial arts level of Youtao was probably comparable to most of the peaks of the Immortal Buddha Avenue. It was estimated that he was at the level of six divisions or even four emperors and five elders. Of course, he couldn't beat Di Yin's Immortal Buddha Avenue with just martial arts, but ) Martial arts do not need to rely on the Dao. In the early stage, immortals need spiritual energy, just like the relationship between a key and a lock. Shenzang is a lock, and spiritual energy is a key. Shenzang needs spiritual energy to open it, but when it is opened, it is opened. Di Yin will not fall directly, but he may be severely injured (Although Di Yin said before that he is outside the Dao, Di Yin is only one step away from the He Dao later. He may not be able to complete the He Dao as an outsider, and the existence of the Dao will have a fatal impact on him). Then he faced Yangtao who had a martial arts cultivation level comparable to that of the top six divisions, or even the Four Imperial Guards, and the Five Elders (the description of spiritual martial arts in the last few chapters is quite exaggerated), and finally lost. , Personal opinion, don't comment if you don't like it Finally, this book is finished. I think the structure of this book is actually very good, the world view is also very grand, the character of the protagonist is good, and the grudges are clear, which gives me a feeling of being a real man. It is not good to use up all the heroes in all the calamities, it should be that the king does not see the king There is another thing I don't understand, what is the meaning of the boat to overcome the calamities? During the ten tribulations, the avenue naturally collapsed, rather than flourishing and declining, shrouded in calamity. The latter could wait for recovery, while the former was irreversible. At the end, it was said that Potato had won, but Tai Shang also said that the avenue had perished. What was the chance of the ten tribulations mentioned by the Three Saints?

Y.... xiong,,,,,

Now that you're convinced, write more, there's not enough to read every day. Even the donkeys in the production team dare not rest like this

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