One Piece: the Legend of the Fishman

Finally, there is a One Piece fanfic that writes about the origin of fishmen. I have been looking for it before, but there is none. I feel that it would be exciting to write about such a strong race as fishmen, and there are many plots in Fishman Island, so there is room for development. I am looking forward to this article.

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The author seriously underestimated the strength of the Yonko. When the Yonko was not disturbed by illness, he could crush the general. Look at the Mom Pirates. Big Mom's twenty-fifth son Genus can be regarded as the emperor's deputy. Luffy can beat him with the strength of the general, but he can only run away when he encounters Big Mom. If he can escape, he will win And Whitebeard , dragging a seriously ill body on top, and was stabbed in the back. In this situation, he beat Akainu, Kizaru and Aokiji, back and forth. When the battle dragged on for too long and his physical strength was exhausted, the explosive force directly beat Akainu to shit. He had no choice but to escape. Blackbeard stopped Whitebeard from behind, and Akainu saved his life

Come on, author, the writing is really good. I feel like it's the best One Piece book I've ever read.

I suggest the author change the setting of the protagonist. The mosasaurs are too outrageous. Does the mosasaurus have anything to do with fish? I saw this blue whale man before. I thought that was outrageous enough, but yours is even more outrageous. . . . . Don't be deceived by marketing accounts and movies, thinking that Mosasaurus is invincible in the sea. Although Mosasaurus is also an apex predator, it is far from invincible. Megalodon and whale whales are the overlords of the ocean. In particular, megalodon is called the strongest creature in the history of the earth by many paleontologists.

At first, I thought how strong the protagonist was, but after playing a dozen games, I realized that he was a paper tiger. I can't say he was just a tiger. But when Lagao was beaten to death by Akaigu, he was bleeding, and he was holding a knife made of seastone. He couldn't control it. He was killed by them all.

Isn't a mosasaur a kind of lizard? A marine reptile? Why would the author be classified as a fish? Moreover, the mosasaur had no gills and could not stay in the deep sea for a long time. . . .

The protagonist is alternately weak and strong, so why would it be so troublesome to kill a fishless man who doesn't even know how to be domineering? ! You can't do this with the character "water" either. Do you think this is Xiaozhi?

If you describe the legendary pirate as a funny lsp, wouldn't that conflict with your character? Now I feel that the protagonist is not worthy of the body, identity, and strength that his predecessor has.

Fifty thousand meters under the sea. Damn, how much pressure is there? Damn, if he can withstand it, he can tear Kaido apart with his bare hands.

I feel very awkward and my strength is severely damaged. First of all, in the world of One Piece. The generals and emperors are of the same level. This is what Oda said at the symposium and the title page of Chapter 931 of the original manga mentioned that the four emperors' abilities. Red-haired non-fruit ability people can be evenly matched with admirals, and the bounty may also be the highest. The first thing to understand is that the bounty position in the pirate group refers to the two points of threat and strength to the world government. Just like when Robin was a child, Robin placed a bounty on the devil's son. This was decided by Oda himself. Also, many people say that the theater version has a broken combat power. The reason is that the One Piece anime and the One Piece movie were created by Uda Kounosuke. Oda once commented on Uda Konosuke's magic transformation. Oda's original words were to the effect that "he is just a cartoonist and cannot make cartoons. All he can do is to add original stories to cartoons that are not included in the original works or to help with character settings when making movies." This means that Oda is just a cartoonist. I know how to draw the Hammer One Piece plot, but I didn't expect that it would develop to the point where everyone has a different understanding of One Piece, and even Oda's definition of the original work itself is not recognized. But when I refute it, I will say that Oda is just a manga artist. What does he know about One Piece? They are all at the top of the world's combat power. No one can defeat two combat powers of the same level. The protagonist also defeated Akainu. Let's put it this way. Akainu is the only one in One Piece who has defeated the same level of combat power head-on. Akainu was remarkable in the original War of the Top. Against Whitebeard's original and The anime is completely different. In the original work, Akainu seems to be more relaxed, with his hands in his pockets and his feet on the cloud cover, and he killed half of Whitebeard's head in a head-on confrontation. After killing Ace, Whitebeard's painful burst drove Akainu into the ground. Akainu also recovered and continued to pursue Luffy of the Whitebeard Pirates. Many people don't like Akainu, but in fact, the biggest Akainu is Oda. Akainu is Oda's idol Sugawara Bunta. Oda is called the world's number one man. The life card record is armed with knowledge and the most destructive rockberry fruit. Can the protagonist defeat an siege led by two general-level experts and other lieutenant-general levels? Is this the union of the reincarnation of One Piece and the rebirth of Whitebeard? Many people brag about the overlord's color entanglement, but in fact, only the former Marshal Buddha's Warring States Period in the Navy has the overlord's color domineering. Overlord's color domineering is a kind of spirit. Knowing the overlord's color entanglement is probably on par with the top swordsman's swordsmanship. The will of D is the most mysterious. Wait, Japanese hot-blooded anime, what is better than blood? A fishman is a fishman. No matter how strong he is, he will still remain in the White Tower without a set bloodline.

In a serious pirate novel, everyone is 50-50 hit. There is no doubt that the author did it😁

The legendary pirate of the old era was described by the author as a perverted figure who was willing to help others and was obsessed with the empress. I was really convinced. Originally it was for character design, but it ended up being described like this 😅

Chapter 1 has too many poisonous points. Apart from the cheats and the long-dead corpses, the biggest poisonous point is that the author knows little about One Piece. The so-called Grand Line has only four ways to travel to the four seas, which does not exist in One Piece. Not to mention Garp and Red Hair who often return to the East China Sea from the Grand Line. Judging from the agreement between the Music Pirates and Rab, not to mention that if you complete the Grand Line, you can return to the four seas and sail around the world for a week. Where did the East China Sea pirates Admiral and Jin who appeared in the early days of One Piece come from to cause trouble in the sea restaurant?

The starting point is high, although it is to quickly integrate into the world, unfold the storyline, and get to the core of the story. However, what follows is that the sense of generation is not strong and the plot is a bit cliché (pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger). The author has a lot of room for improvement. Everyone has their own opinion. Just my personal opinion. If you like to have fun, you can check it out.

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I would like to make a suggestion, the author, you have already written about the protagonist's height of 8 meters, and then the whole interactive battle is just like normal people. Is it reasonable? There is a water polo as big as a basketball, eight meters? Big basketball? I have a lot of black question marks on my head, and there are many more that you readers will know by yourself. It's so unreasonable. I hope it can be corrected.

It's rare to finally see a pirate fanfic where the protagonist is a fishman, but the author must be a newcomer. I feel that there are too many human fish scenes before the protagonist arrives at the Shampoo Islands. Not many readers care about the intrigues and fights between them. What readers want to see is how they tremble in front of the protagonist and are threatened to obey, and more can be written about them even though they are forced by the master. He obeyed the horn's force, but he still had the thought "Why should we humans obey mere fishmen" in his heart (anyway, there are many such idiots in the OP's original work), and the writing of the fights is a bit rough. You can only continue to practice your writing skills for this. And this timeline is really too late. The fishmen can no longer provide the protagonist with many strong men, unless the author creates his own fishman characters. I think the timeline when Tiger founded the Sun Pirates is better. What the protagonist can do includes but is not limited to: he can save Tiger. The Sun Pirates don't need to split up. Jinbe and Aaron are not as paranoid as they are now (in the current timeline of these two, one has become a Madonna and the other has become a ZZist). The thinking of the kids in the New Fishman Pirates has not yet matured, and the protagonist can teach them to change. Come on, Jack was still a child at that time, and the protagonist also hoped to receive him into his own camp before Kaido Also, in the main story, Xia Qi is 64 years old, and she was conservatively 30 years old when she was in the Rocks Pirates. Author, are you really good at writing the protagonist and her as a father-daughter relationship~ But if you set the protagonist's lifespan to be longer than humans and ordinary fishmen, it will be fine.

Now this version of the fishmen is really fierce and revengeful, directly giving poison and increasing blood, which makes up for the shortcomings of low blood volume of the group and is invincible.

It was fine before, and it is understandable that the protagonist becomes different after soul synchronization. The confusing timelines of Hachi and Kemi, as well as Akainu's memories, are abrupt but still manageable if you stick to them, and the funny ending in the later stages is also pretty good. But the story about Fishman Island that was copied purely for the sake of copying the original work really made me feel embarrassed and irritated. It was like buying a piece of fried chicken without any seasoning. It tasted okay but tasted completely tasteless.

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When will the author's heroine appear?

It hasn't been put on the shelves yet, but you are so good at it 🤫

Is it possible to use surgery fruits to fix bugs? Blackbeard can eat three devil fruits because he has multiple personalities. So, can I make an artificial overweight personality? Brooke should also be able to eat multiple devil fruits. The underworld fruit takes effect after death.

Good guy, I'll be honest, I just updated a chapter and lost most of it, introducing the deep sea prison.

Chapter 125 is gone. Sure enough, the car was going too fast and was harmonized. Fortunately, I watched it 🙂

I don't know why the pirate style is combined with Chinese elements of mythical beasts (there are three fantasy beast species in this author's article, namely, White Tiger, Blue Dragon, and Suzaku). I haven't read it for a while. I just finished a few chapters recently, and I forgot if there are Xuanwu Devil Fruit owners. It feels weird. One is more funny, and the relaxed style adds a mythical and serious element. It's quite strange. I don't know why.

The author Rocks should be a vampire fruit, right? Why did it turn into a dark fruit?

The one on top of the sarcophagus is Mo Ang. What is inside the sarcophagus? What being is buried here? I've read it several times. Your foreshadowing is okay.

No, I don't like pirates when I see Erica