Devouring Begins with Spirit Cage

The protagonist has always been described as being very strong, but in reality he can't be beaten by anyone. He bullies weaklings and is very cowardly. After being beaten and kidnapped by Bai Yuekui, I really couldn't stand it anymore. The plot progress is slow and deliberate. Secondly, the protagonist cannot stand up, and the image is as thin as a piece of paper, let alone the supporting characters, which makes it difficult for readers to have a sense of involvement. Then there's the plot. It's not about poison, it's about routines, and it's not that the routines are bad. After all, with the development of online writing over the years, all the routines that can be written have been written. It just depends on each person's writing style. It can be seen that the author wants to set up a foreshadowing. There are definitely hidden plots or side plots in the protagonist's shelter, but readers can basically guess the follow-up of the plot at once. The same is true for the main plot now. When everyone writes the same routine and your plot design is ordinary (the author's writing is not very good, but it is definitely not bad), such a plot only has length, but no width and depth. To put it harshly, it is a noob. Of course, at least among Lingcage fandoms, the author's writing is already very exciting, with no obvious advantages or very bad shortcomings. It's just that today's novice essays are usually combined with cool essays. Some people now look down on cool essays, but cool essays are also very exciting when they are well written. It's just that there are too many mindless cool essays now. To a certain extent, cool writing can cover up the weakness of the plot. I remember a Zhutianliu novel in which the protagonist's first plane is the Dragon Clan, which is similar to the author's book. He cuts everything with a knife and can be read as a Dragon Clan fan. This book does not have a profound spiritual core, it is just cool. The author writes it well. , Readers enjoy reading it, but they are clueless. The protagonist keeps getting stronger and cheating. This kind of routine exists in many novels, but the results of this novel are very good. The author does not want to cover everything, but uses the writing, description, and full power to work in one direction, and the results will naturally be good. I don't mean to criticize anyone here, I just want to say that when your novel is in a novice state, you have to add some elements of abuse of the protagonist. Even if the female protagonist abuses the male protagonist, you can understand that the author wants to enhance the relationship through conflicts, but... Generating electricity for love and making money can sometimes coexist, but sometimes they cannot. Coexistence, commercialization and literature can coexist in online articles, but judging from the author's overall plot now, it is unlikely. I am a little curious about the author's outline. Is it just a trunk, with branches and leaves added by myself, or is the trunk and branches complete, just add green leaves...  Of course, there is no denying the excellence of this novel, but it could be even better.

It's pretty good and I have the motivation to keep pursuing it.

Two recommendation votes, old book fans, beautiful Yan Lingji in the world!!

The boss is awesome

It's best to have the awareness to make updates

Even if the update is stopped, I can still recommend it.

It's well written, but it's just not decisive enough to kill. In the previous chapter, the light bearer will definitely die, but in the next chapter, it will be 🐴, and the sperm will go to the brain and let go.

If you really want to give up the pen, just say something about it. Don't pretend to be dead, at least you spent a few bucks.

There are comics for the spirit cage, which have introduced in detail the ecology of Mana, the source of essence, Bai Yuekui's experience, the reasons for the destruction of Jiuchuan City, etc. The author should go read it and write it again while the number of words is not too many. (I saw that it is not easy to write about the spiritual cage. I hope the author can write wonderfully and I will only make suggestions if the writing is good-looking)

The Light Bearer has been killed, so why did you keep Charles? If you don't accept him as your younger brother and just keep him for any reason, then why are you going to the lighthouse? Does it show how kind Ran Bing is? I felt disgusted. The lighthouse was so nice, why not stay at the lighthouse and go down with Mark? Why don't you just ignore what you wrote, since Mark won't die anyway? So what is the significance of going to the lighthouse in your description?