Hong Kong Comprehensive New Celestial Master

Author, your book is in the wrong category. Your book should be submitted to the science fiction time travel category. Most Hong Kong TV dramas are submitted to the science fiction category. And I think there are only three or five Hong Kong comprehensive books that are better than yours. The big reason why those books can get good results is because the science fiction category has a lot of traffic. If you submit it to the science fiction category, you should be able to get it.

Author, you can't write the feeling of horror. The protagonist is traveling on Yin Yang Road and can't see any fear at all. The Holy Mother is not at all human. In fact, horror movies are good because most of them are about the struggle between human beings to find a way to survive. The horror of people's hearts. While others are struggling for survival, you are opening Wushuang to pick up girls. You write the horror story as an urban brainless and refreshing article. Why is this not a hit on the street? Why is the mysterious recovery so popular? Because the weirdness in it is really terrifying, not to mention that the protagonist, even a human, can finish the game at any time. If Yang Jian is like the protagonist in your book, he can't survive even three chapters. The protagonist of a worldview like a horror movie should be decisive and ruthless. He doesn't know whether he can survive. He has no time to care about others to maximize their interests and become stronger. He only asks you to protect him and doesn't ask you to be a nanny to protect him for the rest of his life.

Is it possible that there are too many books of this kind and no one has read them now?

Brothers, I sent out the contract yesterday. You must leave your monthly tickets to me from Monday to Monday.

I think the protagonist is kind-hearted, but I hope it's not too much, like someone who insists on helping others when they are criticizing you. You can be kind, but you don't want to be hot-faced and cold-butt 🐷

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Thank you all for your concern and love. I will update the five chapters of Biyu Zhuang as the Boss. Please allow me to stabilize and finish it as soon as possible.

No wonder it's so bad. There's something wrong with Goldfinger. He's like a clown.

Either I'm catching ghosts or I'm on the way to catch ghosts. Write some daily life, otherwise I'll be too tired.

The only dissatisfaction with this book is that she is called Li Hong and Sister Li. This is really unbearable. You can call her Ah Hong or Xiao Hong. Why call her sister? It's too dramatic.

After keeping it for a while, I came back to see why it stopped? Have you entered the palace? If not, I will resume updating as soon as possible, and I will notify you when I enter the palace~

It gave me a headache, the first one. I can't stand it anymore, I feel dizzy

Now I have started writing two novels together. For the time being, this novel has three chapters per day, and the other two chapters from Hong Kong TV series Street Fighter are two chapters per day. Then I will see which novel has more promise. Thank you everyone. I may not even be able to eat if I work full-time, but I still want to give it a try. (Starting from the Hong Kong variety Street Fighter) It talks about gaining the power of the Street Fighter characters from Dicky Cheung's movies, and then fighting to become stronger one by one in the world. At the same time, it will also include various Hong Kong movies in a reasonable and logical way.

A eunuch? No update for over a month.

I have been reading for many years, but it is not easy to find a novel that suits my taste.

I suddenly found out that I have opened a new book, please give me your support The author, your book actually has more of the "flavor" of the Hong Kong fantasy films than many books about Hong Kong ghosts. Many Hong Kong ghost films are prop-based. The various "singing, chanting, and fighting" when exorcising ghosts are very interesting, and the magic performance is more prominent in the "weird and unpredictable" rather than the boring "energy bombardment" of modern fairy tales. I hope this flavor can be maintained well. There is no big problem in the plot design. The first incident and the gambler's game are also well designed. After all, many Hong Kong fantasy films do not follow the path of using force to defeat cleverness. It is more interesting to design this kind of plot conflict. It's just that some plots are too rushed and more details can be drawn. For example, the supporting characters can have more descriptions Then there is the setting of the magic realm. Your setting is a bit old-fashioned, but it is still watchable. Most of the Taoist settings in Hong Kong's fantasy films actually come from the southern folk teachings, Liu Ren Jiao, Hua Guang, Maoshan (not Maoshan Qingqing, Ye Maoshan) and Jin Ying can learn about the rich settings. If it is not possible, I personally suggest that you can look for folk spell setting collections such as "Lu Ban Shu" , "The Return of Ten Thousand Methods", and "" to make do with it. The spell settings in it are much more interesting than pure energy and golden light shooting. Then there are the shortcomings. Your writing is really crappy, and it looks like it was inputted by voice. Although it is a little better than the running account in the previous book, the problem of missing punctuation is still very serious (I read fifty or sixty chapters of the previous book and I really couldn't bear to abandon it). There is even the problem of inconsistent names of characters. Readers have to polish it in their own minds when reading, which will drive away many readers. My personal suggestion is to read it after writing it, or find a proofreader to make the writing smooth first. In short, this book is better than the previous one. The protagonist's combat power in the previous one was as fast as that of a flying monkey, and the realm he set was basically useless. The fantasy film has become too cliche (basically, the appearance of a supporting character indicates what kind of film it is → the supporting character panics and chooses a way → meets the protagonist or main character The character's apprentice → the protagonist pretends to solve it → it's over, most of the movie content can only last seven or eight chapters, and they are forced to open a new map), and some early stages focus on describing the character as a complete passer-by. It feels like a rush to show new content, but the old content that stretches the crotch is also lost, and the meaning of rushing is very obvious. I hope the author can learn from the lessons of the previous book. You are one of the few who can write a fantasy film. If you write it well, the results will be great! I wish you better and better results😊

Thanks to the author. Being a full-time writer is tiring. I read part of it but didn't finish it, but I would like to make some small suggestions. I saw the protagonist learn the power of water. So if the protagonist is in the later stage, will he be able to control the water element in the outside world? If the water element in the outside world can be controlled, then can the protagonist also control the water in the human body or animals? Then if you directly extract all the water from the enemy's body, wouldn't the enemy on the opposite side directly turn into a mummy? Unless the enemy is an abnormal creature (such as a zombie), then the ordinary enemy should not be an enemy in one go. Even if the opponent is really a zombie monster, he should have a fragile and breakable physique without water in his body. Hope you can refer to it.