Douluo's Destiny Modification System

I have written Dou Yi, and I have also written Dou Er. When can I write a Dou San fan? 😭 The best books in the Douluo fan fiction series. They have logical characters that are in line with the original settings, and I have added my own ideas without much modification.

In Douluo Dalu, if the conflicts are resolved, everyone will become a good person, but Yu Xiaogang will die

Let me tell you what I think about this novel, so that I can give future book friends a relatively fair review! How should I put it... The author of this novel is very flexible and has many well-intentioned ideas. It can be regarded as a rare and conscientious work of painstaking efforts! This novel has a lot of narration. Due to the idea, it is inevitable that the plot will be slow in pace, which is a common problem in novels. In vernacular, it is a little draggy, but it is not a big problem. You can read it again and again when you encounter an idea you like. On the contrary, it doesn't hurt to take a quick glance! Secondly! The author's perspective and point of view are quite good. He looks at the problem from a relatively fair point of view. He doesn't dislike or dislike all the characters, that is, ruthlessness (I think the greatest sentiment is ruthlessness. Having affection for everyone will hurt everyone in the end. Ruthlessness means having the same attitude towards everyone, but achieving an alternative sense of balance). Therefore, I will not be overly negative or fond of any character. Everything depends on the readers! The last point lies with me. The article contains a lot of long chapters and "dubbing" by me, which also brought some fun to the novel (especially Yue Guan's dubbing) and has been recognized by the author and many book friends. You may want to listen to it or read it Summary: This is a conscientious novel full of unique ideas, not too dark, and a relatively fair and reasonable perspective! A work that is very distinctive of the author's personal personality. However, the influence of the rhythm due to ideas is also a major flaw, but the advantages outweigh the disadvantages! Recommendation index four stars!                   ：""

Come on Shennong? There are a lot of things that are blowing up the screen in this book circle.

Now that I have read Chapter 10, I feel good about it. It is a novel idea. It is not completely an enemy of Tang San, but uses the education of Zheng San Guan to correct his thinking. Although this book has been finished, I suddenly had a bold idea, what if Tang San and his son turned against each other in the end? Taking Ah Yin as a guide, there is nothing wrong with Ah Yin as a soul beast. We cannot deprive a transformed soul beast of its right to pursue love, right? But what about Tang Hao himself? Could he not know that Ah Yin is a soul beast? Moreover, she also wandered around during Ah Yin's pregnancy, allowing people from Wuhun Palace to find out and hunt her down. This could be the reason why Tang San resented Tang Hao. After all, Tang Hao had completely ignored him since he was a child, at least until he was six years old. Instead, Tang San took good care of him as a nanny. Tang Hao also changed his attitude 180 degrees because he later learned that Tang San had awakened his twin martial spirits, so Tang San had every reason to disown his father. Of course, this is just my own opinion, and it remains to be judged whether it is right or wrong.

Personal thoughts after reading: The description of the main plot is insufficient Books about Douluo all have a core and fundamental problem: the lack of main plot. This will cause the whole book to look scattered and messy. If it is well written, it can look orderly, but after reading it and thinking about it, you will still feel empty. Previous authors and current low-end authors like to follow the main line of the original work. In this way, they do not need to establish the main line themselves, and can benefit from the popularity of the original work. The author saves worry and effort, but most readers will only think that they are SB. Nowadays, many authors choose to rely on the Master of Criticism, Tang San, or even Tang Hao, God Realm, etc. To advance the progress. There is no problem when reading this way, and it is even a bit refreshing. Readers will also resonate and comment. After all, the garbage above is really disgusting. But the book itself still has no main line, and readers have no impression of the book itself after reading it. They only remember that the garbage above was scolded again - the main line is still missing. It is clear that this book wants to be written and has already written the main plot. However, the description of the main plot is insufficient and unclear, and the protagonist is not practiced enough. In addition, it still relies on criticizing the original work to advance the progress, which leads to a feeling of missing the point. It makes people feel that there seems to be a main plot (such as overthrowing the rule of the divine world, establishing a new world order, opening up a new cultivation system, etc.), But there seems to be no main plot. Personally, don't blame the author, just take a look.

Internet pictures, good-looking, is the most important thing, isn't it?

Yes, it fits the worldview, values, and outlook on life of an ordinary person like me. Although it is said that the hang-up is powerful, the outrageous ones can be explained; for the unreasonable settings of the original work, the second setting is more reasonable; there are so many Douluo fanfics now, of all types, but most of the characters after time travel feel too inconsistent. This book handles it very well, and it does not speak of the Holy Mother; although the atmosphere of the whole book is subject to the status quo of the feudal society set in the original work, the protagonist has an upward thinking. The greater the ability, the greater the responsibility. Self-motivation, but it will not give people the feeling of overestimating their capabilities. So what the author said is that the outline is very complete, so it should be true, so you don't have to worry about entering the palace 😄 So I think it is very good 👍 I have said so much, it is not too much to pin the essence to the top (emmmm, it is okay not to pin it, the essence is fine)

"On how powerful an ordinary person from Earth would be if he came to Douluo World." Atong's blood boiled after seeing the replies from the great masters in the comment area.                ，，， Am I not invincible in the world? At this moment, a voice rang in Atong's ears, "I remember that you have helped many empty young people, so I will grant your wish." A black hole suddenly appeared in front of Atong, and his face was filled with joy. Just as he was about to step in, he was kicked in. At this time, a handsome man appeared at the place where someone from the previous class was standing, and said silently: "For the sake of you having satisfied my emptiness before, I, the Immortal Youya, will help you. But this The butt still feels exactly the same as before." After that, he disappeared here, and he muttered softly, "I really miss him!" And where is our Atong? After he came to the Douluo World, he found that he was truly invincible. He could shatter space with one punch, and shatter mountains thousands of miles away with a poke of an iron rod. He himself is in harmony with the great path of Douluo World, and has been immortal since then. After Atong became invincible in Douluo World, his ambition suddenly expanded. At this time, he discovered a character who did not belong to Douluo World - Xia Ling. So he changed his mind and secretly learned Xia Ling's magic. Relying on understanding the avenues of the Douluo world and having more resources than Xia Ling, although it does not have a destiny system, it still transcends to reach the Earthly Immortal World one step ahead of Xia Ling. Here, he met the Great Immortal Youya again and worshiped him as his teacher. He learned the method of dual cultivation with him and soon became the Golden Immortal. Furthermore, Great Immortal Youya was originally a strong man in the realm of Da Luo. After discussing the method of dual cultivation with Ah Chu, he successfully became a quasi-sage. In this era where saints are not born and quasi-sages are invincible, Ah Chu can really do whatever he wants. After a hundred Yuanhui, the invincible Atong became invincible on his own. He also became a powerful quasi-sage, on the same level as his master Youya Daxian, who often practiced double cultivation. Respected as Master Tong, he is the first quasi-sage in the day after tomorrow. In order to commemorate the Douluo World at the beginning of his rise, he refined the Douluo World into his personal inner world, and the Douluo World was upgraded because of him.

Have you read it? What did you think of this novel? I can't even see the comments posted by people below.

Regarding Bibi Dong, Qian Daoliu, and even some seemingly unreasonable behaviors of other characters, please don't rush to criticize me... Please continue reading, these are all for a reason. The outline of this book is very complete, and it will not inexplicably cause some people to do something that is completely unreasonable compared to the original work.

When it comes to traveling through Douluo, I want to travel back to the era of Tang Chen. The requirements for martial arts are not too high, just air, vacuum realm, etc., Compete with Tang Chen and Qiandaoliu, and establish my own power. By the time Tang San is born, he has already ascended to godhood, casually wandering around the Douluo universe, and using his own power to establish a time and space investigation team in the universe, mainly to catch some illegal travelers, such as a certain Tang who illegally traveled twice 😏

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If I want to travel through Douluo, I want to travel to the God Realm and be swept away. The martial soul will be swallowed. There is no chance to become a god in the world. I slowly become a demigod by devouring, but I don't become a god. In the end, I declare myself. Every once in a while, I come out to launch dark turmoil, swallow up the Douluo Continent, and finally become an evil god. But I still can't live forever. In the end, I swallowed the Douluo Continent, wandering in the universe looking for another Douluo Continent...

Let's collect everyone's opinions on Dai Mubai 1: Go to hell, you scumbag 2: You can still save it 3: It doesn't matter

Traveling through Douluo Continent, I want to travel to the time before Douluo Continent and Sun Moon Continent collide, and travel to the Hongchen family. At this time, Douluo Continent is extremely powerful. Facing the powerful Douluo Continent, Sun Moon Continent has internal and external troubles, so I decide to go to Shrek to steal lessons, and finally return to Sun Moon Continent, and fight Douluo with the Sun and Moon cavalry, a showdown!

As for traveling through Douluo, I want to travel back to the era of Wu Changkong and become a hundred-thousand-year-old plant soul beast in the eyes of Ice and Fire. This way, I have more resources. I can go to the Dragon Valley to fish for dragon bones, go to the abyss to fight the Demon King, join the War Temple, and when Tang San loses his baby, he has already reached the full level. Then go to the Spirit Transferring Pagoda to suck up the souls, become a god, and finally suck up the energy of the abyss during the decisive battle, and then run away directly to wander in the universe. Don't ask, you are just running away.

Zhu Zhuqing

Tang San: I love my daughter very much and will never let her be wronged Tang Wutong: Dad, why did you split me in two and put one half in a spirit beast? You knew that Huo Yuhao had a son but didn't tell me and let me fall in love with him? Tang San: Ahem. . . I will not plot against my relatives and friends during a battle. Tang Wulin: It seems that I was plotted by you since I was born. You even used my blood to break your seal, and finally sealed the memories of Na'er and me. Tang San: 눈_눈, at least I respect my elders and teachers very much, and regard my teachers as my biological father. Yu Xiaogang:. . . . . . You helped Tang Hao become a first-level god, and you were also the plane master of Douluo Continent. I ended up staying with Liu Erlong until I died of old age, but you were not able to take me to the God Realm. Tang San: Then at least I value love and justice, and I will repay everyone who has helped me. Ning Fengzhi: Uncle Jian and Uncle Gu died trying to save you. What did our Qibao Glazed Sect gain? Dugu Bo: I almost died several times to help you fight against Wuhun Palace. You pulled out all my fairy grass, and Yanyan got nothing. Xue Beng: Teacher, we, the Tiandou Empire, have given you all the national treasures, so that you can have the opportunity to inherit the throne of Poseidon. In the end, it will be fine if you don't help us fight against the Star Luo Empire, and we won't let your hidden weapons be spread. Tang San: At least everything I do is for the development of Douluo Continent. Everyone was silent: Destroying the Slaughter City caused the evil soul masters to wreak havoc, destroying the Wuhun Palace, interrupting the rise of civilians, strictly prohibiting the sale of hidden weapons, hindering the development of soul guidance technology in Douluo Continent, leading to the dark abyss, and almost destroying Douluo Continent. . . . . Forget it, we can't beat him

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I'm wondering if many people don't like reading Douluo novels with strong logic? I think this article is pretty good. I have stopped reading mindless and cool articles in recent years. I got tired of reading them in the past few years. Although I am not writing about Douluo, and I have only read Douluo 1 and 2, I think this one is pretty good. It's a bit cool, but not for the sake of being happy, and my IQ is normal. Personally, I hate intellectually provocative articles, as they simply doubt the reader's intelligence. (Blindly guessing that someone posted "If you have money, let's do it together" below, I'm used to it 🥱)

Does anyone have any recommendations for books with single heroine Qian Renxue?

The system of cultivating immortals is already very complete. Most people have basically read one or two novels about cultivating immortals. Their impression of the monks' power is that they can move mountains and fill seas with supreme longevity. It is like a stereotype. And if you read Douluo Fanren, this book is definitely not the same. This is the first book I have read. One cultivator can be regarded as a fantasy ceiling, and the other is a fantasy floor tile. You have to equate them and say they are the same. They really cannot be connected. It is too ridiculous. Even though this is your book, you say they are the same. Yes, he is the same. This is your setting, so to speak, but this kind of complete system of novels has a label, and everyone recognizes this label, so when you write it like this, it will be really confusing for readers. I think you have to set up a trick for the protagonist, and you don't have to apply the cultivation system to "Douluo Dalu". You can make up a practice system by yourself, just like the original Xuan Tian Gong.

It's good to read. Although the content of the last few chapters is just foreshadowing, everything that needs to be explained has been explained, and it also allowed me to see the direction of subsequent writing. Looking forward to the plot of launching a war against Xingluo, Dai Mubai should be beaten after being idle for so long. Support the author.

Ma Hongjun and Shui Binger get together, the author is great😁

Now that I have read Chapter 4, it is very good. It is superior to many Douluo fans. Just modifying Tang San's Three Views is very good. It is not like other Douluo fans, either kneeling or being hostile. Moreover, Su Yuntao was actually given a reward! I didn't expect it! In many novels, Su Yuntao is a comedian, Blind Douluo. In some novels, the protagonist bullies Su Yuntao just because of his talent. It's really quite speechless. One more thing, the author's illustrations are very good, he is already a mature author.

Does anyone know about that? I read a novel before, but I forgot the name. I remember collecting Xiaobai, the Demonic Soul King of Great White Sharks. Does anyone know?

Treasure! ! ! (☝ ՞ਊ ՞)☝

I am actually the first🤓🤓🤓