Steve's Wizarding Journey

(Motorcycle) Reader: Dude, how much does one chapter of your book cost? Author: Two cents per chapter. Reader: Are your characters made of gold or are your punctuation marks made of gold? Author: Look at how many good books there are nowadays. I wrote them all myself. If you think they are expensive, I still think they are expensive. Reader: Pick one for me Author: OK! (pulls out a book and tries to comfort it) Author: How about this one? Reader: Is your book updated frequently? Author: As soon as I write a book, can I give you the eunuch book to read? Reader: Let me ask you, is this book updated a lot? (Music, alert, head up) Author: Are you deliberately looking for trouble? Don't you see it? Reader: If your book is updated enough, I will definitely read it, but what if it is not enough for me to read? Author: If it's not enough, I'll update it overnight. Are you satisfied? (Playing with the saved manuscript) Author: Chapter 15, three yuan. Reader: You don't have enough chapters for fifteen chapters. There's something wrong with your word count! Author: Are you deliberately looking for trouble? Don't you see it? Don't you see it? (Compress a large part of the plot here) (Pfft) Two other authors who are also on the street: Sarilang! Sarilang! (motorcycle) (looking back and smiling)

Block loading is the most NB, replacing the rules of reality with the rules of your own world. Isn't this the consumption-free version of the kingdom of God on earth, the cave of immortals in the sky, and the kingdom of Buddha in the palm of your hand? Find ways to expand the scope of the block to cover the entire universe. The protagonist is the creator (authority dog) as soon as the creative mode is opened.

Well, as an MC player, I have seen Chapter 16 and still have some problems. Of course, the author has only written some early content. First of all, I think the author's writing pace is still too slow. Let me give you an example. For example, in Chapter 10 of Apple, he writes that eating an apple will fill the whole page. Why? Because there is a lot to explain about the MC, and at the same time, the plot writer is also slow to grasp it. I think this is some problem with the combination of MC and wizard themes. For players who have not played MC, it is necessary to explain the settings. For players who have played MC, it seems tedious. But when I originally clicked in to read it, most of the people who saw the title were people who had played MC. If they hadn't played it, they should have some understanding of it, so there was no need to write so much. In addition, let's take a look at the title of the book. Steve is an element of MC, and the other is a wizard. However, in order to take care of readers who do not understand the MC setting, the author uses a desert island trial to shake out the MC setting. It is understandable, because MC itself is a natural world, but how related is this to the wizard? Why do wizards use such a test? Shouldn't those who come out of the trial be rangers or hunters? Even if the author mentions that the purpose of the trial is to learn observation, it is difficult to have anything to do with wizards, unless what you write about later is a natural wizard, or a fake wizard wearing a druid skin, or the map that a wizard can open is related to the natural environment, then I didn't say that. (What's even more frightening is that we were looking forward to it after reading the introduction. Maybe the Goldfinger setting will be explained in the Golden Chapter 3, and the concept of combining red stone and golem will appear in the Golden Chapter 10, but we are very disappointed. Up to now, we are still like savages and have not written the wizard's character.) If this is the case, then we might as well just write about time-traveling into a dead wizard apprentice, mainly write about the wizard, and go directly to experiments and the like, and carry out a series of innovations, instead of staying here. At the same time, there are also some problems in the author's settings. It's about the basic common sense of MC. The author also made mistakes. For example, the difference between swords and axes is not only in attack speed and attack power, but also in sweeping and breaking shields. Gold items are easy to enchant and mine quickly. The author did not mention it. And Steve is not two meters tall and one meter wide. In addition, there is another mistake that I cannot accept, that is, the author believes that MC's combat elements are very rare. From the introduction, he may be a red stone returner, so he does not pay much attention to this aspect, so that the sword and shield functions are omitted, which is barely reasonable. But in fact, MC is a game with a lot of freedom. I think your view is obviously wrong. To be precise, everyone should not draw a very arbitrary conclusion. For example, for players of Sky War, combat elements can be very abundant. At the same time, regarding the plot where the heroine abandons the protagonist at the beginning, this makes me uncomfortable. This is not a question about the specific logic of this paragraph. I think it is very logical and is human nature. What's more, the girl was taken away by the nobles to win over her, and the protagonist is a commoner, so I probably already know the plot behind it. Moreover, it would not be good for Steve to find Goldfinger and be seen by others. But even so, I still feel inexplicably that it is a bit hard to accept and a bit ridiculous. Maybe the girl will have a series of feelings for the male protagonist later on, such as guilt and so on... And then the emotional line will be spread out? Maybe the author will write very well in the later part of the story, but when I saw the previous paragraph, I really had a series of shadows about the routine of the old book ten years ago. Questions about settings. The author gave some meaningless settings, such as Steve's hands hurting when he picks up a tree. What is the use of this setting in the later stage? Does it have anything to do with wizards? At the same time, Steve was unable to collect items by hand, which made it very difficult for him in the early stage. But what is the use of this setting? When he collects materials, he also needs to provide such an obstacle. Can't he write about a fierce beast attacking to make the situation more difficult? Maybe you can write a setting where the body is digitalized, or it would be much more interesting to adopt a setting like Fanmura. Of course, it is very difficult to use MC as a cheat, and the integration of such settings is also difficult to grasp. Finally, regarding the author's writing style, almost all the author uses is a series of descriptions of the current situation. For example, in a shallow river, you can catch fish with your bare hands, but you can't catch larger fish in the sea, or you can say that you can't catch ferocious beasts, but you can catch small ones. This kind of basic common sense seems to be very logical and very accurate. When everyone thinks about it carefully, they can all think of it and there is no need to write it down. This kind of dry writing style with almost no rhetoric, combined with the long and smelly plot mentioned above, makes it even more unbearable. Other book friends also said. The current progress of the desert island copy seems not to be over yet. To summarize, because the theme of this book is to mix MC games and settings with Western fantasy wizard themes, this bold attempt is very challenging. If it is written well, it should be very interesting, but the author is not sure. At the same time, because of the integration problems of this series of settings and the author's lack of writing power, the plot develops very slowly, the writing is not particularly ideal, and some routines also feel inappropriate. But I have only written the early content. I don't know what the author will write in the future, and I am not sure. Maybe it will come back to perfection later, or even be seamless, but it cannot let me turn a blind eye to a series of problems in the early stage.

I feel like the protagonist can learn from the battle scenes in Annoying Villagers, which is really cool. Block blocking, terrain shaping, equipment switching in seconds, end pearl displacement 😍

There are too many explanations. People who don't play MC won't understand this subject matter. If you play MC, it would be too inconvenient for you to explain it in detail.

I hope that no matter what type of book the author writes, at least the three views must be correct. You can go and see how many of the famous three views on the list are incorrect. It is impossible for that kind of dark literature to become mainstream. After all, those who write dark literature have poor skills and are just practicing their skills. After all, those who come to read novels are students. There are not many people who come to novels to vent their troubles in life. Most of them come to read novels to relax. If you have a wrong outlook on life, most people will leave after just one glance. There are not that many people who will waste your time and comment in your comment area, or say this or that. After all, they are in the minority. The more extreme comments will definitely not want to read your book seriously. They are just looking for a sense of existence. Most people come to read the book. I'm not looking for a sense of presence in your book. Go read those popular dark novels in the past. They were very popular in the early period, but if you look at the later period, if you look at the middle period, no one has read them at all. The most people who read such books are just for freshness.

By the way, does the author plan to add a MOD? Draw a sword, Marvel MOD or something 🙂 I feel that the native version without mods always has some disadvantages

I don't know what route the wizard's journey takes, but if you cooperate with MC, you can directly convert mud into stone, and then the alchemy route is equivalent to adding an equivalent exchange module. Netherite can also be related to hell. I don't know if the author had this idea.

You can build a blast furnace (real version). When the soil is about 2,000 degrees Celsius, it melts into magma and then transforms into blocks. It will not burn out. Use water to create a stone brushing machine.

So, why build a house without digging a hole?