This Is Really Not Fencing

The writing is quite good, the subject matter is good, and the writing style is not bad, but there are still two problems. One is a shortcoming that I feel, and the other is purely a personal feeling. First of all, let me talk about the shortcomings of this book. It can be seen that the author has considerable knowledge about combat, but I think the battle scenes in this book are still a bit stiff. From the previous sparring to the battle between the protagonist and the red armor, it is not attractive. After reading it, I have no impression. There are only a few move names floating in the sky. I don't know much about "soldier attack", but I summarized all the films and novels about weapon warfare that I have watched, and I found that there are two things that attract me the most: one is the unconstrained weapon skills (moves), and the carbine (this move is shown in one movie) It's really amazing), Yan Hui, etc. (Including the movie version of Rurouni Kenshin); the second is combat wisdom. The wisdom of making full use of the environment, props, psychology and other factors to achieve victory in life and death battles is also one of the core charms of combat. You can even see traces of the art of war in the battle. The author did not show us the above two points. The protagonist just blindly uses system skills to win, and cannot see the game between skills and combat wisdom at all (especially when facing an opponent with equal skills but no wisdom, combat wisdom is best shown). He can only praise him for being calm and calm, and then praise the system for being awesome🍺. After seeing this point in the plot, the most satisfying battle scene for me was the "hand-off knife" when I was sparring with Xia Fang for the first time. It was spiritual, full of combat wisdom and imagination. As for the second point, it is purely a personal opinion, the lifespan setting is too depressing. I thought that the life span problem would be solved through golden fingers, but I didn't see it. So far, it seems that it still has to be solved through surgery, so what I saw was that "the protagonist only has one year to live, but in the dream, the battle to the death is just around the corner. If you want to live, you can You have to spend your life. After a lot of effort, you won a life-and-death battle, but the result is only to further introduce the world view, and the life span problem is still unresolved. You can only rely on illusory surgeries, which cost money, and you have to win the championship to make money, so you can only continue to spend your lives to improve your strength." I feel very immersive when I read books. This gives me the feeling that I am stepping into the abyss step by step. If I don't live in Krypton, there is no hope. If I live in Krypton, I may not be able to survive. On the contrary, I will be closer to death, a vicious circle. This feeling is too depressing, and it is also the main reason why I don't like reading Krypton life novels. Of course, this is just my personal opinion. Maybe I am too pessimistic, and many readers may not care. Instead, they will like this feeling of repeatedly jumping between life and death. I am just talking about my own feelings. Finally, if you don't agree with my point of view, you can refute it, but please discuss it rationally and do not escalate to personal attacks. I am really scared by some book friends who are in love with books. I wrote a book review seriously, but some people read a few sentences and felt that they had different ideas. Then they thought I was a scumbag and a troll, and started to troll me, which was quite speechless.

To be honest, the content is quite sparse and has too many elements. Old bookworms may find it awkward, but it's different when you're an insider. It's really hard for people in the industry to hold back when they see all kinds of familiar names appearing in books in this way, especially fighting battles and acting martial arts (you don't understand Miao Dao power chain. JPG)... I laughed so much that I rolled on the bed in the middle of the night. All in all, this book is very effective for people watching the show. In addition, I sincerely thank the author for his contribution to the promotion of the military circle.

A very interesting book. Unique ideas. Reading it in one sitting was not enough. I'm very curious if there will be things like sword intent and sword intent later on. Also, daggers are probably relatively widely used cold weapons, so I don't know if they will be involved (I have read a few books on daggers, and I think they are weapons that can surprise people when played well, and I personally like them). However, dagger solo should also limit the upper limit of the opponent's length. Generally, daggers are twenty or thirty centimeters. It is probably impossible to play with opponents over one meter. It depends on physical fitness and skills. There are always some people who are so awesome that they kill indiscriminately.

The National League video from the year before last is shared with everyone. 🙂

May the first military novel on the Internet become a hit, create a new genre, and be seen by all macho men! May the author be inspired and have his thoughts well up, perfectly showing the confrontation between steel and will. It depicts a picture of dancing on the tip of the knife, deciding the outcome of life and death in a matter of millimeters, dragging the knife in the middle of the night, killing all the demons and demons, and shocking the whole world. I also wish the author finds his own romance!

"Bingshit" in the broad sense means "fighting with (cold) weapons", and generally refers to any form of cold weapon fighting and techniques from ancient times to the present throughout the world; "soldiers" in the narrow sense specifically refers to today's popular combat with complete protective gear, Cold weapon fighting sports with safe equipment and reasonable rules can be roughly divided into two major systems, namely armored fencing and unarmored fencing (note that although it is named "swordsmanship", the weapons used are far more than "swords").

This subject matter is really new and interesting. The author's writing style is great, and the introduction is also great! Watching it really makes people excited~ "Why don't men bring Wu hooks and collect the fifty states of Guanshan" Although it seems to be a military attack competition at first glance, it is obvious that the world view is gradually being revealed. With poems quoted in the introduction, there are also speculations on recent updates. Blindly guessing about military attacks is just an introduction. After that, there should be heroic writing about the family and country, and the pattern should be bigger. Anyway, it's very exciting~~ I wish Dada's new book a hit~~~

The author's setting is not good. In the book, fighting is the most popular sport, but the result is that it behaves like a grassroots team. Do you know what involution is? If there is such a popular sport, at least you must have selection and youth training, rather than just playing it. Any amateur player can compete in the game after practicing for a few months. Like football, every major football country has millions of registered players. In the five major leagues, every player who can play is drawn from the thousands of players who have practiced football since childhood. The author, you still regard military football as a ticket sport.

Let me mention a few points for the author's reference. If you don't like it, you can delete it, 🙂 It feels like there are some logical flaws... The first is the problem of Beijing University's team configuration. This is so unreasonable. According to the author, this project is so popular all over the world. There are world competitions, college leagues, countries, and schools that have been vigorously promoting it for a long time, and the rewards are quite high. That is to say, the development of this project is not bad, and even the country has issued regulations and laws specifically for this sport. As a result, as one of the country's leading universities and a team that has performed very well for several consecutive years, it failed to recruit anyone even though more than half of its main players graduated and left the school? Then a few amateurs were added. If there is no protagonist, do you think this is the configuration of a team at the top of the pyramid? Under normal circumstances, this kind of team shouldn't attract talent too easily. Even if you can't attract top-notch people, it's too easy to attract first-rate and second-rate people. As a result, you'll end up recruiting some low-level people. To put it simply, the team hierarchy and social popularity are too mismatched. Compared to teams like the NCAA, isn't this very similar? The second thing is that according to what the author said, the training of these people in China are compiled by domestic ancient martial arts masters, so it will be even more difficult. Many of the weapons the author describes now are foreign weapons. Fighting swords, British swords, German swords, this is very unreasonable. Domestic weapons training and fighting methods should be different from those abroad. The weapons are different in shape, length, center of gravity, etc., And the feeling of inconsistency is overwhelming. Just wondering, can a machete and a long sword be the same? I learned Qingfeng Sword and ended up using sword skills to fight. This... I hope the author will get better and better... I am very interested in this subject, but there is an inexplicable awkward feeling lingering in my head...😒😒 Okay, I went to sleep...

After reading the title of the new book, I thought it was interesting and a bit title-worthy, but it seemed okay. The title of the book is easier to remember than the book about weapons in the world or whatever... Bingfeng is the abbreviation of "historical weapon combat sport", which is not far from fencing, but it is not exactly the same thing. The point is that the author's writing style is very Mature and fluent, the work is very enjoyable to read. Although this subject is a bit niche, other subjects are mostly poorly written. There may not be a market for novel themes and interesting stories. In short, I wish the author a great success in his new book and become a god soon!

The first dozen chapters of this book can still be read, but the following is a routine that has been written by Qidian for many years. What does the author think is igniting, explosive, climax, foreshadowing, onlookers commenting, desperate situation, etc. The author thinks it is good, but everyone's reaction is mediocre, and they are often not on the same line. Nowadays, if a book wants to achieve good results, simple writing is not enough. .

I've read Chapter 100. To be honest, the subject matter and the writing style in the early stage made me feel very good. In the later stage, I started to let myself go from the moment my identity was discovered. There are a few uncomfortable places. First, the Olympics matter is not about gaining popularity, but Japan comes to communicate and directly talk about it. It's awkward to defeat everyone except the protagonist, and then the protagonist turns the tide. It doesn't feel any better... The second thing is the competition. It's not that you didn't think about ranking methods and targeting methods, but it's very embarrassing. It's too obvious that you want the protagonist to turn the tide. After all, they were also a former championship team. After all the passion and then losing, it was uncomfortable to be the protagonist. Finally, the collapse of the combat power is amazing. I know the author wants to say that anything can happen in the game, and fighting Liu Heng is for the protagonist to find opportunities. But, if you make your teammates lose to other teams in the early stage, it is because other teams abuse the protagonist's team. It is better to put this setting in front and let the team score better. The protagonist will not feel better if he does this. All I can say is that I hope the author gets better and better.

Since the awakening ceremony, the whole book has changed. While forcibly increasing the difficulty and shaping the enemies, the protagonist has also been added to the story to deliberately create an atmosphere, and then a real-life pursuit. Does that mean that the protagonist will either be unable to leave the base in the future, or will be protected by a master?

I think since the names of the real-life military attack groups have been used, it would be better to incorporate the grudges and grudges between the real-life military attack groups into the main plot line. Let people who don't understand this movement know what it means to be a little demon in the temple, the wind is strong, and the water is shallow and there are many bastards.

The reviews in the comment area are very high, and the work is really good after reading it. However, I still have a small point of criticism, which is why the protagonist does not tell the coach and teammates about his illness. It is boring to hide his illness from his teammates and cause misunderstandings, but other aspects of the writing are really good 😁😁

I'm dying again🤔🤔🤔

I have read all the books I found yesterday and have read them today. It can be seen that I was inspired by "Above the Dome". However, the author's writing style on emotional aspects such as feelings of family and country is not very good. Many places are forced to render it very strange and need to be strengthened.

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The subject matter is very good and the writing is good, but the updates are too slow, and it even feels like a eunuch. I understand that the author didn't pay attention to it because of his lack of academic performance, but as a senior book fan, I really feel that this book has the potential to become a hit. It's a pity.

I was very passive in the first four minutes, but got better after I relaxed a little bit 🙂

It's really hard for people in the industry to hold back when they see all kinds of familiar names appearing in books in this way, especially when it comes to battles and martial arts... I laughed so hard that I rolled on the bed in the middle of the night. All in all, this book is very effective for people watching the show.

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Good book. The last time I saw such a good book with a similar genre was a book called The Sword of Seizing the Commander-in-Chief. The writing style is good and the writing is very passionate. But if the results were not good, the author could only cut him in half and become a eunuch. This book is also very good. I like the character and character of the protagonist very much. He is afraid of death, but not afraid of death. He is willing to undergo surgery to survive, but he is also prepared to die in the ring. The protagonist of this book is probably the character who impressed me the most in the past six months. I really like it. I also hope the author can keep writing, it's really beautiful.

The book is really good. The setting is very interesting. What's more embarrassing is that I originally came here for the event, but got stuck because of the plot. Come on, author.

The development is very novel, and military attack is indeed a very niche "sport"? It's interesting to watch. I hope the author can continue writing. Now it seems that the protagonist should be a more rational or sensible person? Or can it be said that he is a more mature person who has been polished by reality? Or are there people who are in need of strict self-discipline? Otherwise, he would have become enthusiastic and used this disease to become a genius in some field. So now it depends on how to develop and conform to the setting. First to survive? Or do you risk your life and have a good time? Or is it fun to fight without having to die?

It's a good book for a niche audience What a pity

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