Food Explosion

The only uncomfortable thing is that the world has only been mutated for more than half a month, and there is an organization like the Food Club, and there are still big bosses in it. So, the author, you might as well write that the world has been mutated for a few years, which is still acceptable. The main reason is that the world has just changed. The biggest power of each country must be the government because they have the latest intelligence and the most resources. How can you, a non-governmental organization, develop in such a short period of time compared to the government? In addition, when we were working on Acorn🐷, we said that the average level was only two or three, and suddenly a 35-level boss suddenly appeared. How did they increase their level? How else did they write that the world had mutated for several years? After the initial turmoil, it finally stabilized, so these monsters and monsters gradually emerged. When you start writing mutation, you must write about the aura of the protagonist. As the leader of the new era, just like those doomsday novels, everyone is on the same level, but the protagonist develops faster. Author, you are writing that just after the mutation started, a group of forces that can crush the protagonist are entrenched in the world. That gives me the feeling that the villain can already crush the protagonist in the same amount of time, so how can the protagonist catch up in the future? The gap will only get wider and wider, causing discomfort. (I think this point needs to be improved. Other themes that are good are also great)

The setting should be a prisoner of delicious food, right?

Do you think there are any areas in the book that need improvement? Plot, dialogue, writing? New writer, please help me! Thank you!

Chapter 1: What does it mean to be an eunuch?

The author can take a look at the anime "The Prisoner of Food", which is about the human world. It should be helpful.

It feels a bit abrupt about the Cult of God of Cookery. It might be better if there was some foreshadowing in the front. It only took half a month from the time the world mutated to the protagonist's awakening. Adding in other time, that vice-president is over 30 levels? No matter what, the author can write according to his own ideas, so I will make a suggestion.

If you have any imaginative ingredients, please be sure to tell me in the comments.

I'm from station B. I won't comment on the content for now because I haven't read it yet, but I still have to say cheers.

I will explain any questions readers have about the plot under the corresponding chapter. (Sometimes I want to enhance the sense of immersion so I don't write a book from God's perspective, so what readers don't know is what the protagonist needs to find to find the answer.) If it is indeed my mistake, I will correct it as soon as possible. Thank you for the reminder, hehe.

I would like to know where readers learned about this book? Search for food, post bar, or fantasy new star list, reward list? What about my QQ reading friends?

Pretty good. But there is a man following me all the time. The more I look at it, the more uncomfortable I feel. I can't think about it.

Big data is so scary. I just watched some videos of prisoners of delicious food. I saw a novel with a very similar setting. It was quite interesting.

No need to say, there are really few such themes, support, support, support

Update a chapter? ? ? ? ? ?

I found that everyone really doesn't like to watch various plots about the human world...

It's been a bit watery these past two days, just like the juice in that peach~ Is it caffeinated?