Coming as a God

It's the right time to enter the pit, and the amount is large (*¯¯*)

Ahem, it's already 53 chapters, and I just want to talk about a "small" problem I discovered while reading This is the title of the book. It's funny to say, when I saw the title of the book, I clicked, and quickly flipped through it. I didn't read it again until more than 40 chapters in. Now that I think about it, why didn't I jump right in? The main thing is that the title of the book doesn't attract me at all, so a good title is really important. In the words of those great masters, a good book title determines a person's first impression of the book, including the main content of the book. You know, although the introduction of the book can summarize most of the content of the book, who has the time to read the introduction one by one? But the author's title, how should I put it, is indeed a bit unattractive. Of course, I am also a novice reader, and everything is just subjective. Whether the title is good or not, and whether to change it, all depends on the author.

Don't like players, a bunch of scourges, intruders. In fact, it is better to change it to a real game, with 1 life, and you will really die if you die, so that later players cannot make any trouble and are suppressed, and billions of players at the world's upper limit level will not harm the universe.

After reading more than 600 chapters, I finally decided to give up. When I first read it, I liked the creation sandbox flow and the behind-the-scenes mafia flow. Although there are plots mixed with reality in the front, at least the main body is still in the prehistoric world. It has not broken away from the setting of the sand table flow and the mafia flow. But when I saw the collapse of the prehistoric universe, I realized that something was wrong. The subsequent plots gradually became unbearable, and I felt that they were completely different from the plot at the beginning. I didn't want to watch the universe and StarCraft style, so goodbye.

This painter is so amazing, it fits my imagination

I'm also very confused. The author's writing is so good, why is it not popular?

After reading the introduction, I know that this novel is very good. Wearing a spacesuit can make the protagonist look like a god or a devil. Where did you see it? It's not as cool as having a bare butt.

Now I'm tired of reading the prehistoric stories you wrote. Any creation flow must be related to the prehistoric world. Are you using the same template? Is there no other route except the prehistoric world? After reading what you wrote, I can guess the plot later. What's the point? You can't create your own world. The pattern is too small, look at other novels, use dark energy, evolution, dark matter, evolution, and open up other dimensions in Galaxy Emperor, otherwise the energy problem cannot be explained.

What's so great about players? The most annoying thing is that the protagonist can't beat him, but he can survive after recruiting players to develop in the past. Moreover, if the player doesn't die, the other party won't do research, and the other party can also create players.

To be honest, the author's ideas and settings are quite good, but the plot and writing are a bit lacking, otherwise the results would be better.

I discovered something that is not rigorous. Why do humans believe that all cruel practitioners are caused by human nature? Why are they so sure that the Prehistoric Game will not manipulate practitioners? Your genes have been directly changed by the Prehistoric Game.

The picture feels good, it has a bit of flavor

After reading Chapter 36, I felt that the time aspect was too buggy. I don't know if I was too quick to see how the player's consciousness enters the animal's body, and why it feeds back to the player. I don't know yet. Also, I don't understand the time aspect at all. It's clear that the protagonist just circles the land, so it's weird why animals can't detect the change of time even though they have human souls.

，！                                                                                                       The novel cleverly excerpts mythological stories from ancient times to the present, and reconstructs it based on the author's system of the Holy Way - the Nine Cauldrons of China since ancient times have become the Jiuding of the Holy Way that created the world, the Seven Heroes of the Spring and Autumn States and the Warring States Period have become the various cosmic kingdoms and the seven major cosmic empires, Zhuang Zhou is the sage Zhuang - the genetic system, and Lu Ban is the sage class - the mechanical system. Zou Yan is the Yansheng, and the theory of the Five Virtues is the world of the Five Virtues... The author's alternative approach is really to my liking. He has a big head and inherits the past and the present. However, the later plot is a bit too boring, the description is a bit difficult, and the hidden line is a bit deep. The protagonist Zhao Ming's appearance and writing are a bit less, which is not refreshing enough, or the conspiracy and conspiracy of competing for beauty in the world of the Five Virtues is not exciting enough... I look forward to the author's next novel being more exciting, imaginative, and with a reasonable plot.

The author must also write new ideas Taoist Hongjun is also called Patriarch Hongjun. He is called Taoist Hongjun in the novel "Feng Shen Yan Yi" and is the master of Taishang Laojun, Yuanshi Tianzun, and Tongtian Cult Master. But please remember the key point of the "novel" "Fengshen Yanyi" Pangu is the creation god in Chinese mythology and legend. There is a legend in Tongbai area that he was born from a dragon egg and was raised by Yinglong. Pangu is not the oldest god in Chinese mythology. His emergence has not been recorded in classics for a long time. It was not recorded in books until the Three Kingdoms period in the "San Wu Li Ji" created by Xu Zheng. He was the only one among the many creation gods in Chinese mythology to die due to creation. He did not kill the three thousand demon gods, nor did he divide into gods such as Sanqing and Taiyi. Don't look at Sanqing, Taiyi, Xihuangmu, Dijun, Haotian, etc. Written like this in Honghuangliu novels, but in traditional mythology, these are either Tao or Heaven, or the top gods, or the supreme gods. Because to be honest, I really don't like Pangu Kaitian (and I've watched too much of it), because he is the only creator god in our country who died because of creating the world.

I have just read over 100 chapters and nearly 200 chapters. It is really imaginative, but it is also really poisonous.

I really hope there won't be a female protagonist, there shouldn't be a female protagonist in the Genesis stream

The routine is too old, a few supporting characters must be killed, it must be at the last moment, the villain must say harsh words, and then the situation must be reversed just in time, slap in the face, everyone is shocked. This book is indeed an old book from three or four years ago, and there are indeed many poisonous points. The most vicious thing is that the author obviously doesn't know how to write sensationalism, but in order to write sensationalism, he deliberately writes out a few supporting characters every time. Readers usually have an impression of these supporting characters. Isn't this just a sick and disgusting reader?

There are too many supporting characters, and less than one-tenth of the space is devoted to the protagonist.

From the beginning to the end, it feels like an era has ended. The author is coming soon to open a new book

The biggest failure is that after the protagonist ascends to Daojun, he writes the holy way! The main character in The Holy Way after Daojun is too petty! I can only cower and follow others to make small moves! So I think it's best to end it when I write about Daojun.

Unexpectedly, I can imagine that Pangu opened the sky and the prehistoric era became the only great rift world. This is the final result. That's it, awesome.

Winning first place for the first time🙂🙂

Why do I feel that Director Gai's appearance looks a bit like Elden's enchanted ring? Like, very similar!

I feel that the recent plots are a bit about creating villains for the sake of creating villains. If you write about the universe country being so bad, you might as well write about the failure of the universe country's resistance and return to ruins. The protagonist relies on his own people who enter other universe countries to pick up talents and secretly develop resources. If the Universe Kingdom is such a villain, then why did they pursue Ban in the first place? Zhuang was just a Holy Lord or a Holy Uncle. Not even a Holy King unless the Emperor personally took action. Even if he didn't know that the ruins were in the cauldron at the time, it was also the carrier of Tao. He sent a weak chicken without fear of being intercepted. So there must be good people, or good cosmic countries, the kind that are in line with the moral values ​​of humans on earth. There are more than one, and they secretly prevent the pursuit of high-level powerful men sent by other cosmic countries.

The author is happy to miss Shu and has not yet published a new book.

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