Qingyang Xiuxian Road

The protagonist on the 9th level of the golden elixir cannot defeat the golden pig-headed man on the 3rd level. . .

The background of the world is very big, but the author has written it in a small way. It only writes about trivial matters and all kinds of internal fighting. It doesn't look like the human race is about to be exterminated!

See, people don't seek immortality. I don't want to complain. Goodbye.

You set the background of the world too big, and then the protagonist is just a small foundation-building family. Knowing so much, you don't think it's inconsistent.

Thank you all for your support during this time! The new author is not very good at controlling the plot of the characters, and the writing style also has a big problem with the sense of substitution. However, Xiaohei will not give up. He will continue to improve his writing skills and write works that satisfy everyone. I hope everyone will understand me more. After all, Xiao Hei is not a genius and can only go on step by step. Now that I have this content, I'm too embarrassed to ask everyone for votes, so I won't do it anymore.

Forget it, I didn't want to read it. I thought it was a family story. I didn't expect it to be written so fast. Moreover, there are always some modern nouns and vocabulary that are really thick and thick. And then, that turtle is hundreds of years old. Why is it like a mentally retarded child?

Brother, there is confusion in the spiritual vein upgrade section.

I don't know what the author is thinking. I've seen more than 50 pictures of this kind of human race. It's useless for you to save them. There are so many enemies. Why don't you just take your own tribe to save some of the low-level people and find a new area? Isn't it good for the development of this kind of human race?

The writing is so beautiful, the author must work harder and update it, and be sure to write it to chapter 1600! ! ! ! The writing is very good. There are too few chapters now. I will read it after I have fattened it up. I have to have at least 600 chapters to read it. I am very much looking forward to the following plot! ! ! !

After reading about ten or twenty chapters, I feel that the writing is a bit messy, and some modern terms always appear, such as government, husband, etc. This is an embarrassing group. Hey, you are writing about a fairy. Damn it, don't bring modern things.

Mo Qiu Xian Yuan is really good-looking. This year's Xian Xia is the best.

There was some kind of Heaven and Earth Pavilion without saying anything, and some kind of extraterritorial battlefield came up, it was all a mess. People who are over a thousand years old speak like a teenager who is in the middle school, and many people are written so that they are in the middle school. After finishing writing, the author never reads it.

Recommended family cultivation stream: Cultivation of Immortality with Resources

The investment income has arrived, and I will give you a reward of 100 points. I hope the author will not be too little! 🤓🤓

After reading Chapter 61, I really can't stand it anymore. Completely without purpose. 1. Goldfinger's writing is vague and useless. 2. The combat power is not very clear. 3. As a way of cultivating spiritual plants for time travellers, there is no direction for improvement. . 4. The writing is so confusing that nothing can be written clearly. The protagonist has no purpose and has no idea what the protagonist wants to do. I feel like I'm just waiting to die. It doesn't reflect the spiritual aspect at all.

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What the hell are you writing? It's totally wrong and I can't understand it.