Prison Break: I Am Ren Woxing

You are the best licking dog in the world. How did you come up with the idea of ​​licking through the steel plate?

The writing is quite interesting, but the pace is a bit slow and there is a bit too much content about crazy mental activities.

It's understandable that I went crazy after two years of darkness, but then I immediately started to live the life of a charlatan who saved this and that. Today I save a beggar, and tomorrow I save a woman. I'm really convinced.

The whole story is just a conjecture in Ren Woxing's mind after he was imprisoned and went crazy. He did not create any martial arts, nor did he escape. Tong Baixiong, Dongfang Bubai, Four Friends of the South of the Yangtze River, the Sound of the Qin, etc., All do not exist. Once Dongfang Bubai puts him in prison, no one will look at him anymore, and the rest is all conjecture.

Well. What are you doing after you break out of jail? Just like a normal person. Two years of darkness. I see now in one breath. I thought about it after the depression. There will be a wave of release. Also tnd is depressing. Then what else should I watch? Frustrated.

It is said that three golden chapters or a good beginning can attract readers. What the hell is written in the first ten chapters of this book? The protagonist is always shouting, panicking, eating and waiting for death, and is as fearless and as mentally retarded as possible. Such a protagonist's character is completely different from his domineering personality. Even though I had my own way in the dungeon, I never thought of giving up. The protagonist has a lot of shit.

Jailbreak, jailbreak, what people want to see is just the jailbreak process. Whether it's the American drama Prison Break or the movie The Shawshank Redemption, what audiences like to watch is the protagonist's perseverance in the process of escaping. In the end, the protagonist successfully escapes from prison, the story ends, and everyone is happy. It can be seen that the author has conducted in-depth research on the prison escape, but the author's energy and energy seemed to be exhausted after the prison escape was successful. Therefore, people can't help but think that it is best to end the book with the successful escape chapter. After the prison escape, the story of Let Me Go Heroic and righteous has lost the aura of the previous chapters in the prison camp, and has a sense of continuation. Just some humble opinions, benevolence sees benevolence and wisdom sees wisdom

The idea of ​​"Ren Wo Xing" who is locked up in time travel is good, but the setting of martial arts in the book is completely random, which makes people wonder whether the author has read Jin Yong's novels in detail. For example, all martial arts require taking medicine, and there are such outrageous settings. Another example is the Beiming Magic Power, which requires you to eat red clams before you can absorb the power. You are going crazy. The Manggu Clam can obviously poison all living things while it is alive. After voluntarily entering Duan Yu's body, Duan Yu can ward off all kinds of poisons, which is closely related to the Beiming Magic.

The story about being imprisoned is good, but it won't work after being released. The protagonist's 300-year-old energy will be deflated every time something happens. It's okay to be deflated. After all, the protagonist is a modern ordinary person. It's understandable that he doesn't understand some twists and turns, but something happens every time. I don't know if it's difficult to write. It's uncomfortable, but it's really uncomfortable to watch, and after being locked up in a dark room for so long, the protagonist's character seems to have not changed at all. I don't want to describe a neurotic person like Batman and the Joker, but at least there can be some changes. The result is still submissive and indecisive.

I should have posted this review earlier, but it was not until I finished reading this book that I belatedly made a summary. Qidian has copied thousands of books and imitated countless routines. But the author obviously isn't. He is a person who writes books carefully! There is a lot of psychological description of the protagonist in the early stage, but it is just right. I feel the pain, despair, and madness of the imprisoned people. The later descriptions of martial arts, power, and rivers and lakes were also refreshing to me. What comes after writing an online novel is all about ideas and the overall situation. No matter whether your thinking is clear or not, or whether your story is fascinating, at least the author's care is definitely sufficient. This is an excellent article that only experienced readers will like. In an era when novels are also monopolized, this is a wonderful world that people can remember. People will last forever if ideas are spread, and stories will be immortal only if they are deeply impressed! I hope to see the author's new works in the future.