Seeking Immortality Starting from Qimen Dunjia

I thought you wanted to be the emperor, then you went to practice immortality, and then you killed the boss bat mage. I thought you were going to go out and pursue opportunities. I didn't expect you to come back and be Kangxi's dog 66666666. It's so inspiring. It's so inspiring. A poor boy, an orphan. After a lot of hard work, he successfully defeated the big boss. It's okay to return to Dragonfly and be a dog. This script is good. I'm afraid you'll be too proud. I'll give you zero points out of ten.

Taoist, practice Taoism! The most fearful thing about this type of time-travel novel is that the style and power system are confusing. When you are interested, you can fight a vampire for a while, a "Wang Chao" (referring to martial arts) for a while, a hodgepodge of fantasy and Western fantasy, Taoist warriors, wizards, and magic. When you are tired, you still need to fight a Japanese to boost your spirits? ! Practice as a Taoist, instead of becoming a Qi practitioner or an Earth Immortal, and a martial arts master waving a magic wand inlaid with the spirit of the Earth Spirit to send out a fireball (cannot tell the difference between magic and magic)... My personal suggestion is that there are very few novels that can be read now. I just hope there will be a serious novel. 🤝

When I first saw this title, I was very surprised. The setting of starting from Qimen Dunjia was very good. But when I looked at the content, the author's writing style was really hard to describe. There are too many unnecessary words that appear suddenly and it is very embarrassing, the description of the characters is also very rough, and the dialogue is more like a primary school student writing a composition.

It's okay, just don't write anything like Dou Po, Douluo, etc. In the future. I'm tired of writing too much.

A loose immortal cannot detoxify the poison. If he becomes an immortal, he will be treated like a dog.

I won't go into details about the protagonist's low IQ. I've already said it. Secondly, is there something wrong with the author's writing style? Author, are you writing a novel or an essay? It's just like a running account, it feels like you are just talking with this mouth open, and there is no sense of involvement at all.

Nowadays, anyone can really write a book, and people can read even this random thing. People are so stupid nowadays. They piece together several movie plots and just change the name of the protagonist. There is no plot of their own at all. Some people even say that the writing is good. I'm afraid they haven't even seen the movie.

It's hard to say anything. After entering the palace pretending to be a prince, he retreated when he saw the princess.

I want to ask if there is a rebellion? Or lick it clean🐶?

Fortunately, I didn't read it. Fortunately, I will read the comments first. Thank you Shennong.

The author has no main treatment in the whole article. It is just a running account and a poisonous one. I really can't stand it anymore.

It was okay at the beginning, but then it became more and more climactic. In the end, it became an invincible novel. It was too smooth. There was no plot to watch. I just followed the plot. There was no clue. I was tired from reading it.

Hahaha, my heart is too big, and I can't write well, it's a mess

Originally, the first story could have been about being an emperor, and it could have been about one world after another. However, it ended up being messed up by you and it didn't look good.

What can I say? It's a bit confusing. You have the Chaos Orb. It would be great to change the world. If you don't have to write it down, the timeline is very messy.