Stop Practicing. Even If You Practice, It's Still Mine.

Maybe because I was in the second grade of junior high school, the beginning was a bit exaggerated, so now I am thinking about how to write it to make the plot continue to be exciting 🤓

Hey, I feel that the writing style in the latter part has become more mature. The first part is a little greener, but it is also very distinctive. The rhythm is quite refreshing and not laggy at all. Anyway, it is worth reading 😍

Emmm is generally good, but the pace is a bit fast in my opinion, and the main character is not introduced in detail. . .

The author can improve his writing style. I personally think your sense of artistic conception is still very good, but the language modification is not that perfect. In short, keep working hard and don't give up!

Good-looking, good-looking, the protagonist upgrades so quickly! 😁😌😰😆😆🤭😊🙂🙂

Good looking😍😍

Good-looking, good-looking😍😍😍😍😍

The latest chapter is so good!😭😭