Sword Left in the World

The sauce suddenly bubbled up, and I came with a set of hot pancakes and fruit, tofu curd, fried dough sticks, soy milk and fried dumplings. I looked at the big book and gave the author a big call. I asked for a mutual visit by the way, ^_^

It feels quite boring. There is no description of facial expressions. The literary talent is good. There is no description of emotions and psychology. Everyone's psychological problems are also included. This should be an introduction. How much magic power do they have and how advanced are they? I'm confused. They just introduced "Legend of Sword and Fairy III" and they knew it. Many people have written my novel.

It's a bit messy, but the writing is very good. I've also read your last book, but it's so tiring to read. I saw in the comments that it said something about adding a system. Actually, I don't think it matters, but the main line needs to be clear, and I think the dialogue between the characters is a bit strange.

I'm a little confused by what I saw. I suggest adding something like a system to straighten out the main plot and goals, like the child of murderous luck, dying or something like that. Judging from the beginning, it is very confusing to think that an immortal who has been demoted to the mortal world is carrying some treasures and allowing others to "cooperate" without being robbed.