Glory to Slytherin

It feels like he wants to show off, but he can't do it. Some plots are inexplicable? I don't know why he wrote them? There is no reason, purely to show off and promote the plot. For example, why go to the section of the alley? Why go there? Went and why? Not at all, anyway, the author just wants him to go there and get the so-called plot clues... But the writing is good, a bit like a mage, but it feels too delicate, but that's okay! Only a plot issue, nothing else. The first chapter is really well written, and after reading it, I felt that it had that flavor. I wonder if the author has an outline? You can sort out the plot! Some of them may be known by the author but are not expressed, which makes them seem stiff and inexplicable. It's okay to watch it

I support the heroine Furong, she is so sweet even before she appears.

Let me tell you a little point of view: Maybe the author needs a temporary "villain" to provoke the protagonist to achieve the climax, for example, where is Fleur's suitor in the latest chapter, but as readers, we felt very uncomfortable when we read it. I hope that the author will not let such small villains come out to disturb the mood in the future. Of course, the author's writing style is very good, and he may come around to it later in his writing.

I glanced at it and almost thought it was glory to Stalin.

I don't understand why so many people in the book review section are obsessed with the female protagonist issue? As long as the author's plot is reasonable and the protagonist is not Long Aotian, no matter it is single/multiple/no heroine, I will support it to the end! Also, I hope the author will never enter the palace!

If Lockhart's book is approved as a teaching material, there must be something useful, and wizards are not stupid. Why do so many authors treat his books as garbage? I feel IQ is not enough

The protagonist is a child of the French Lestrange family. He transferred to Hogwarts from Beauxbatons and is one grade higher than the Harry trio. The main plot begins in the year of the "Slytherin Chamber of Secrets", which is the year of the Basilisk. Slytherin route. Not with Harry. Voldemort is not the final boss either. The protagonist is decisive in killing, never the Virgin Single female protagonist, but Hermione or Fleur is undecided.

Is there a female protagonist? Don't be Hermione 😭😭😭

Isn't it why so many people don't want Hermione to be the heroine? Why is it that I am Hermione and not the heroine? Most people can't watch it And I believe most people watch movies. I don't believe there are people who don't like Hermione when watching movies There is a story about a slightly better writing style. The heroine Hermione's results are okay, such as the blood wizard And you said that there are too many heroines in Hermione. How come I have read so few? The new books are so annoying that no one writes about Hermione.

After reading the first two chapters, my impression was not very good. The character is obviously a noble son with a lot of family wealth, but he doesn't even have an owl? Coming to the UK alone and not even having a pet? Then you are so stingy about buying a book? ? This persona is too conflicting with reality. Also, since you have parents, can you introduce your background? Can't you tell me about your past life? ? So much white space. . . Please let me know what happens next. If it's still about the same, I won't read it.

Let's talk to everyone This book has almost 3k collections, but the number of follow-up reads is only 2-300 And follow-up reading is a hard indicator for ranking recommendations. Follow-up reading is also called follow-up reading. It means that the reader reads the latest chapter from the first chapter (more than 30 seconds). Editors use this as a reference to judge whether a book is qualified to be provided as a website resource and whether it has commercial value. So, I'm not asking for votes, I'm just asking for reading 😁 Then, let's talk about the problems with this book. Everyone who writes fan fiction has a big difficulty: how to reasonably participate in and influence the plot. Ninety percent of the plot in the original novel revolves around a trio, and it could easily be written as a nanny novel or a dog-licking novel. Therefore, I added a hostile organization to the protagonist to change the plot. I don't know if everyone can accept this setting. Anyway, it has been written. Finally, I saw many people in the comment area discussing the female protagonist issue... I am leaning towards no cp/single female protagonist. Friends who want to read harem stories may be disappointed. As for the single heroine, there are only two choices: Fleur and Hermione, and Hermione is too young, and Fleur is in Beauxbatons, so there is no intersection in the early stage. If there is really a romantic scene, it will have to wait for the protagonist for a few years Finally, please read it 😢 I don't want to fall into the second recommendation 😢😢😢

This seems too gentle Let's find something more suitable in the future.

Which one with good looks can tell me that he is not face-blind?

Every time the protagonist fights, either because of carelessness, overconfidence, or being attacked by a sneak attack, he will always be defeated once or twice. This happens every time he fights. Even if he wins in the end, the reader will still feel unhappy after watching it.

How should I put it, I originally wanted to see a single female lead, but it turned out. . Let's not talk about the various minor issues. It's okay to start off as if you have no experience. Later, every time the protagonist fights, you have to hit someone else's move first before starting to fight. After you hit the move, you have to sigh that you happened to have something to defend yourself, otherwise you will be dead, and then you have to express that you are very angry and want to take it seriously. I really can't handle this confusing battle. I wonder if it's not fun for an ordinary wizard like Accardo to give out first blood every time he comes up. As for the confusing plot at the end, Gabrielle was forced to run away and be abducted, and the protagonist had to lead a team to fight with people to save people. A lot of people died after going back and forth, and the protagonist still acted like nothing happened. I tolerated it for now. As a result, Furong's whole psychological activity was told that if the protagonist has dirty deals like those people, she will be hostile to the protagonist. I wonder what kind of person can have such thoughts towards a person who just sacrificed a group of wizards under his command to save your sister. I really endured all kinds of confusing plots to watch the heroine, but this is the result. 😅 My evaluation is that the protagonist is like a 🤡

Please, stop writing emotional dramas. If you can't write them, don't write them.

There are very few novels about the Snake Yard. I have read it two or three times, but I just can't get into it. The writing is bad to a certain extent, and the Chinese-style dialogue is unacceptable. You are just afraid that I will have a sense of empathy.

It's not good to write a fanfic properly. I have to add the background of some secret organization. I'm speechless.

Come on, author ✊ I like the character of the protagonist very much. I hope there is no heroine and I can barely accept Furong.

I got the data of human experiments from the dark wizard, and then I felt that it was evil and burned it... What's wrong with your brain, I suggest you burn your own black magic books, many of them are also the results of human experiments The method is evil, but it does not affect the data is still precious In addition, I can't understand burning the victims to death. Even if they want to die, it is not a reason for you to decide without permission. How do you know that no one in this world can save them?

Great author, although I don't know why you don't update, please don't be influenced by the outside world. I really like the Harry series of books and have read a lot of fanfics, but I was really attracted to this one of yours. It didn't completely break away from the original work, nor did it draw and support it. Instead, it built a new world of magic system. The character of Ulysses was created very well. After experiencing a lot of things, he can continue to explore magic. Dumbledore's sense of mystery is also very good. I won't go into details, but I still hope that the author can continue to write it. This work is really good 😆😆😆

Why is this book so popular... Don't want it!