Become a Superman and Start by Burying People in Konoha for Ten Years

The third generation is dead... The Uchiha is still alive - wonderful!

The author may think he is humorous, but this self-deprecating way of writing is really poisonous.

You are so self-conscious and nervous, find a job in a factory as soon as possible

In the first three golden chapters, the characters, backgrounds, time and locations are all in a mess, leaving you confused. The only thing I know is that in the opening chapter, three generations died in battle, and the protagonist traveled through The Burial Man. Nothing else is known. What is golden finger? Why does the protagonist travel through time? Did the protagonist's two friends also travel through time? What strength does the protagonist have? Nothing! It was all just jokes that we thought were funny, but we were completely confused when we read them! Is this shi?

After reading 10 chapters, I was already poisoned and died. I recommend that newcomers not to open it.

It's okay if the protagonist Dihua uses memes. It's too outrageous for everyone in the world to use memes. The author is seriously self-indulgent. Although the writing style is still good, it seems quite engaging, but a sudden self-advertising meme pulled me out. I couldn't get into it even if I wanted to. It doesn't matter once or twice. It's always like this. It's very tiring to watch. Also, there are too many secondary settings, and there are some hidden events that many people don't know about, but for the sake of fun, those who should know about it are supposed to know it. Isn't it too outrageous? How can I put it this way, there are so many people who like books like this, especially fan fiction, the circle is even smaller.

Black leather Tachibana? {"TopicId":"645522716581167104","TopicName":"Nakazawa Tachibana"}

There is a saying: I don't know what I'm writing. The plot is very confusing in the middle. What are you doing? Honestly speaking, with your writing style, there should be a future for writing pornographic articles. The premise is that you don't get caught! 😃

What a mess, go home and find a factory, you are not suitable for writing novels

Good guy! I'm a good guy!

Drowsily. I feel like the author wanted to write the protagonist to be humorous, but it felt awkward if the humor didn't work.

Silly children, run quickly, epic poison

After reading five chapters, I was confused. Goodbye, never see you again!

It's a pity that this is an unreasonable preface. The author is pleased with himself.

The character dialogue does not need to be vividly written, but at least it should be written with the character's own personality characteristics. . . It's really hard to watch those characters spouting out a bunch of random lines.

Damn it, it's actually recommended 😢

Are there any Uchiha left if the three generations are dead?

Is this book poisonous?

Wasn't the Uchiha clan exterminated?

After reading the first chapter, I almost didn't realize who the protagonist was.

After reading the first chapter, I gave up the trap decisively and was so quick.

I thought you were writing about the beginning of traveling through Konoha and becoming a nemesis. People can become stronger by basking in the sun. But they just came and were afraid of being known. So, you hid in Konoha and buried corpses for 10 years. In these 10 years, you buried many people in Konoha and experienced many things. In fact, you are already invincible, but you don't know it 🤫🤫

How to branch? Forced to increase the number of pages, right? But that can't hide the fact that you only have so many words.

How to write a good running essay? You should keep a diary!

If ten people criticize you, you should think about your own problems