I Traveled Through Time and Became the Empress' Villain Master

Judging from the chapters (1-4) I have read so far, I think it's okay in terms of poison (I personally have a very high poison resistance, and I can accept it except for those who send girls with green texts). The main point of poison lies in the system. Let me talk about the conclusion first: This system seems to be extremely toxic from the perspective of male channels, but I have watched a lot of female channels in the past, and I think it is okay. The following is my current impression. It can be seen that the author wants to write a villain novel that is somewhat similar to an anti-routine, but a tiger cannot be an anti-dog. The system can be said to be the biggest and most poisonous failure, as far as male porn stories are concerned. But from the perspective of a female video writer, the system can be a bit more disgusting. What this system does is not as much as the revenge buff stacked by the female video heroine at the beginning, and it is not half as disgusting as the house fighting plot. The main exciting point of this book or the genre of reborn villain novels is the difference that the protagonist's reborn villain makes against "fate", which is the plot. From this point of view, the author has achieved it. The protagonist has actually changed the plot to a certain extent, although it is extremely poisonous in the eyes of male readers. In addition, the character of the protagonist is actually a poisonous point. No one with a clear mind will like a protagonist who often swears, especially when the subsequent plot makes us feel uncomfortable. It depends on whether the character of the protagonist has grown up later. Otherwise, although I can withstand the poisonous resistance, I will feel bored and stop watching.

A bit poisonous, a slave to the system, very aggrieved

In my opinion, this book has a good plot and emotions, and the setting of the single female protagonist also touched my heart. I remember looking for this book in the school information technology class to read it. Although the details of the plot of the book are not complete, I still felt deeply in some places, but the ending was indeed rushed. To be honest, I have been reading novels for 5 years. Even though I have read many good works, the author is still one of the few people who can write about my heart. I would like to thank the author for giving the book an ending. At the same time, if the author can see this comment, I want to tell you that I support you - from a reader of this book who has been in the third year of high school.

To be honest, brothers, don't be misled by the comments. This is not the kind of hard-working novel where the protagonist is restricted. I originally thought so too, but ended up not watching it. Now after reading Shuhuang, I found that the abuser mentioned in the comments is simply not right.

The one at the beginning who was in danger by the system, really, after watching too much, I felt persuaded to quit, died, and then resurrected, and then the system asked you to do whatever you had to do, and then you would die if you didn't do it. So why not just resist directly? It would be better to resist the system, and then the system cannot detect it because the protagonist has a bug and there is no punishment. This may be better to watch. This is only my personal opinion, my personal opinion! ! ! If it offends me, I will delete it! ! !

Reviews of the book say that the first few pictures are very toxic. But I want to say, this is it? That's it? That's it? I'm afraid you haven't read the real poisonous article. I think this is passable, not considered poisonous.

Now that the protagonist has lost his memory, he is slowly starting to have opportunities to express himself (not necessarily). There are dozens of chapters in the past. It's so frustrating. If you can't get out of the illusion, you have to rely on characters like your junior sister to escape. After you escape, you have to be beaten in various ways. If you are not strong enough, you have to challenge the strong ones. Only when the system takes over the protagonist's body can you see the unprecedented strength. When you laugh, you feel that the system is the protagonist. I have a suggestion, can you let the protagonist be more relaxed and not let him get involved in the confrontation between various forces? The protagonist is completely inappropriate. To be honest, if you put the protagonist and the heroine together, there will be a scene where the hero is still trembling while being protected behind the heroine. I resisted the system in the early stage, but it got better later. I didn't expect that it didn't take long, but you ended up writing the protagonist so uncomfortable. I can only say that the novel is okay, and the author, you are really an angel. Bai Yao replaced the cold-faced empress. I think people who can persist in reading must now think that you are an angel. The smiling face is replaced by the cold face, the world is replaced by the underworld, they are all the same body, but the smiling face is replaced, angel, archangel. (One of the few longer comments)

I have read three books during the limited period for newcomers. This is one of them and has been collected. I recently bought a romance book and am reading it because I haven't finished it yet. As I gain weight, I will continue to pursue the original version of this book. The following book review contains some spoilers. Actually, many people say it is poisonous, but I feel it is not. Someone wrote a book about Shen Qingqiu and Luo Binghe and later turned it into an anime. The beginning of the book is like a self-help manual for scumbags. This is actually one of the reasons for me to pursue it. And although it starts out very similar to that book, it takes a completely different direction after a few pictures. Finally, I saw that both the male protagonist and the supporting characters have online IQs. I have long heard that Qidian has a lot of fun articles, but in fact it is really not necessary to have fun all the way. I don't think so if you say this is a system slave. The little artistic conception created by the author is very good and very touching. The heroine is carried on her back in the snow, but she makes a wish from behind. There is a touch of sadness in the paintings of Qiangu Hua and Bai Zihua. Although the writing throughout is not amazing, it is still pretty good. Here I want to talk about the plot and the character of Yu Hui. In fact, after watching half of it, I could probably guess that Yu was one of the people who made this game. I thought that the system's constant desire to get rid of her meant that she was in control of the world. There are only two possibilities, one is the time traveler who escaped the control of the system and the system said otherwise, the other is the game producer himself, who is also an author who hates the game. But with this character, I still think she is sick and mentally ill. Let's talk about the plot first. If you clear the level, everything will stop because there is no plot, which makes some sense. But the system is just a law of heaven. Now that it has become a world... But Yu, a person who sneers and jokes, is a bit cynical. It seems like she makes sense when dealing with the system. But this person is impersonal, yes, not like a human being. Heaven and earth are unkind and regard all things as stupid dogs. Since she is one of the game producers, I think it makes sense to kill the Ten Saints because they betrayed the heroine, but it is unreasonable. Because not all saints are white jade, the great demon just wants to be free. As for her, she was like a mistress who had conspired to gain power, amusing herself and living in her own world as the queen. But why are thousands of people to blame? Nanjiang saves people and kills people at the same time. According to the diary, her master fell in love with her but later found out that she was fake and regretted it. Every time the author described her cynical smile playing with the handbell, I wanted to vomit. This person feels like a sick person even if he lives in the 21st century. Create your own game. Why not fire someone else and fire her? Just because you have the ability? I think it's unintentional. That Queen Dayan should be her. If I guess correctly, she is still in the game world. But the reason why she can be so arrogant in the game is just because she is a game developer. When she returns to reality, she can only be an ant. I don't know how the author will arrange this character, but I think it's best to get her out of this world as soon as possible... Wouldn't it be nice to have a world with only male and female protagonists? Or she may also lose her memory and be arranged to have a relationship, but thinking about it, she may be the queen of Dayan is really disgusting. Except for this role, which is very confusing and a little bit toxic, she is otherwise okay.

I just finished reading it. The system in the front is indeed a bit poisonous, but I can also see that there is a foreshadowing. After it is finished, it is drawn out a little bit like a needle and thread. The relationship between the systems is constantly explained, and more threads are drawn out, which can be regarded as adding to the highlights. From the current point of view, Bai Yi (Su Li) and Hong Yi (it) are old enemies (I guess they have different ideas), and it should be Hong Yi's. Some method caused Tiandao's fear (although I think Tiandao is also afraid of Baiyi), so it kept pulling out the timeline to try to eliminate Hongyi. Combined with the fact that the main line of the system has always been to train the heroine to become the empress, or to let the heroine's original personality be swallowed up by Su Li (Whiteyi), but judging from the fact that the system has been pouring chicken soup with her in recent chapters, the system It should be that the heroine's personality should compete with Su Li (in white) and influence Su Li (in white). When it comes to this, I actually think that the system is like a certain program or guideline, but self-awareness is born. In the previous article, as long as the protagonist violates the villain regulations, points will be deducted, but since killing Red once, I feel that the system has seen some hope. Therefore, the points will be reduced to the greatest extent for the protagonist, and the plot of cultivating the heroine will be developed later. So this is a chess game for the four parties. Generally speaking, although the routines are similar, whether it is good or not depends on how to reasonably bury the front lines, and how to lead and fill them in the back. It is a test of writing skills. Take your time, at least the front lines are not bad.

There have been a lot of scoldings recently, so I will reply here. It is my fault for giving you a bad reading experience. I apologize to everyone. No matter how harshly you scold me, I will not delete the comments. I take what I write seriously, so I will accept it whether I like it or dislike it. Thank you, but now that I have signed a contract for this book, I will finish it well. Finally, thank you for your willingness to read the works of me, a veteran, and thank you for reading. I wish you good health and immortality!

I saw it in the guide during the day, and I didn't expect to see the update in one breath. As an old bookworm who has watched it since I was a freshman in junior high school and has been working for three years after graduation, I will give you my opinion. First of all, the idea of ​​the book strap system should have existed before, and it is understandable for the author to learn from it. After all, it depends on the plot. Let's talk about the poisonous points first. The poisonous points of this book are mainly concentrated in the first chapters. The author's golden three chapters are obviously a bit awkward. I almost persuaded him to quit the first few chapters. First, the writing style is a little immature and the logic is not even very self-consistent. Second, the system has too strong a sense of existence and is too unreasonable. Later we will know that this is a powerful method. Then, the front part can actually be a little more mechanical. For example, the protagonist has to take the villain route otherwise he will encounter a forced world line closure, and then let the protagonist get stuck with it; thirdly, the protagonist is not calm enough at first, and some of his words and deeds are inconsistent with the identity of the article. Especially the swearing and sassy parts are childish and disgusting to many readers. So since it is such a small article, why can I continue to read it? Let's talk about the advantages. First of all, the author's story-telling ability is still good. It can be said that readers who persist until reading the chapter of the second senior brother and his wife can continue reading this book. The subsequent chapters of the third senior sister and the trip to Kunlun chapter are also very good. Generally speaking, the plot is well-pretended, the conflicts are reasonable, the plot is advanced, and there are wonderful twists. Secondly, the author's writing style has obviously improved. Compared with before and after, the author can judge the difference, and the daily writing is good. As a sweet article, it can still be sweet, and when you think about the torture and knives in the back, many people really like it. Once again, the worldview structure and various settings are really good. Many of the foreshadowings may be used later. As the protagonist is the "pot shadow", he will definitely earn a lot of favor by revealing the truth in the future. Finally, the character creation is quite good. It can be said that many of the supporting characters are written with flesh and blood and not showing facial expressions. The old sect leader and the Kunlun sect are also at fault. The protagonist of such an environment gradually changes from being just for profit and just wanting to save his life to being able to integrate into everyone reasonably. Moreover, the character of the protagonist is relatively likable. First of all, he has three correct views. A hypocrite in the eyes of others might as well become a true gentleman for once. Secondly, it has a slightly tragic tone, which is very feminine. She bears, sacrifices, and is injured for the heroine. In addition, she has good strength and good looks. The "beautiful, strong and miserable" is very attractive. The sadomasochism in which I treat you as my daughter and your filial piety deteriorates is also worth looking forward to. The biggest advantage is that you don't flirt with girls casually. Other novels can easily change your taste. The senior and junior sisters will definitely be impressed by the protagonist and start surrounding him. This book is very good. Regardless of whether the protagonist is likable or not, senior sisters should protect their shortcomings, junior sisters should care about them, and other female characters too. I didn't become a nymphomaniac. In the bosom friend part, I thought the protagonist would forcefully intervene, but instead he escorted her all the way. I thought the master Qin would be an enemy character, but I didn't expect him to be a character in another love triangle. This kind of world does not revolve around the protagonist, which is better than many white novels. The current plot can be said to be getting better, the villain is gradually revealed, the protagonist's character is expected to be saved, and the relationship between master and apprentice is developing sweetly. Readers who see the latest chapter will probably have the desire to follow more. I also raise some concerns here and hope the author can avoid them. First, the clues about the other time traveler and the system are confusing. Be careful not to overwhelm the writing. Especially now that the opponent lineup is too strong. The protagonist is not to mention showing off or even being aggrieved. Then we must cut off a wave of opponents and strengthen our side. After all, as the first Immortal Sect F4's Discipline Elder Card, we still have to have cards. You can't just jump out of someone and abuse him. The previous plot opponents of the Demon Sect were enough, and almost caused smallpox. Ban Zongmen's pillars are wiped out in waves. I hope that the plot progress will be arranged reasonably, the secrets will be revealed bit by bit, and the big monsters will appear one by one. Interspersed with reasonable plots to promote the apprentices, let the master show off, and cultivate a wave of feelings, such as the sect competition two years later, will be very good. The story is not considered a crisis. After all, super-sized enemies cannot always appear and destroy the family. The main line of the story is this, so there need to be enough branches to allow the characters to grow while alleviating the sense of urgency. Second, we know that there will definitely be abuse in the master-disciple relationship, but we hope that the knife will not be too harsh and the misunderstanding will not last too long, especially if there is no other bad plot where other male characters take advantage of the situation and the heroine is deceived. When the heroine questions the master or even tortures the master, the young master must wake her up in time, so as to fast forward to the jockey Mian Zu, allowing the master to experience a filial piety gone bad instead of a real backstab. This is what is loved to see. Even when the heroine's other personality enters the scene, from the temporary pleasure of abusing her father to the crematorium of chasing her husband is also worth writing. The above is a bit of complaint from an old bookworm. I hope that the longer the book is written, the better the results will be. (Being scolded now is indeed a poisonous point in the early stage. You can modify it as appropriate. After all, it is better to be controversial than to have no one care about it. The author should not be discouraged but should be frightened, and he will know better when it comes to criticism.)

This is my first time writing a comment to curse someone. The life of your disciple is life, but the life of other disciples is not life? You still feel guilty about your disciples, so why did you go there so early? You were indifferent to Li, which led to Li's rebellion, and you still asked for mercy. Do you think you are noble? Your junior sister has always supported you, but in the end, her disciples died the most, and she couldn't even take revenge. Is this how you treat your junior sister? A disciple rebelled and invited foreign enemies to invade, causing heavy casualties to the sect. As a result, this disciple was only deactivated, and he was even able to re-cultivate, and even got married on the spot, just because he is your disciple? Your sect is finished. Your rebellion has skyrocketed successfully. Even if you failed, you are still alive. Everyone will learn from this in the future. I like protagonists who are kind and willing to help the weak, but are you the protagonist? You, the protagonist, are an extremely hypocritical and selfish person. Li bullied the heroine, but you turned a blind eye. You favored the heroine in practice and completely ignored the cultivation of the eldest disciple Li, which led to Li defecting from the school and causing a large number of casualties among the disciples. Then you were the first to jump out to intercede for Li and use the lives of other disciples to fulfill your reputation of being kind and caring for your disciples. High, really high. Other villains and protagonists are openly bad, and I can accept that. Compared with you, the protagonist, Yue Buqun is a true gentleman. I was so angry that I couldn't even take a nap. I was so disgusted. It was so fucking disgusting.

There are many poisonous points in this book. First of all, the protagonist is always swearing. Moreover, I feel that the protagonist is mentally retarded, and the system setting is really poisonous. It cannot change the plot or the outcome. The protagonist of the original book cannot die and is kept alive. There is nothing new in this book. It feels like the whole book is copying the villain's self-rescue system. And the writing is not as good as that book.

In the first chapter, I was persuaded to quit because killing innocent people bound me. If I don't do bad things, I will die. It is inhumane. No matter how I explain it, the future cannot be explained clearly. Some people may say that it is the ex's fault and it has nothing to do with the protagonist's time travel. But what I want to say is that it is the protagonist who takes the knife, which is meaningless.

It's worthy of being a daily guide. It's awesome. This one really breaks the defense

Don't you understand yet? This is actually a female channel book. The world revolves around the female protagonist, and the system even talks about it. Main character? An anti-camera one. Why are you not allowed to change the plot? You have assumed the role of the protagonist and feel it is poisonous, while the author has assumed the role of the heroine. Will the author engage in self-killing operations? To put it bluntly, the author just wants to achieve the final ending of sadomasochism between the protagonist and the heroine. Various settings based on this ending. You think it's strange because you have read too many men's books. Men's books don't talk about everything. A large part of the outline is about what you want to do. You analyze and think based on the premise of the protagonist, and it is logical. At the core, it's still about being in love. Of course, that doesn't matter. There are many light novels written by male fans about love at heart, but this love has a bit of an ordained feeling. The whole story was about resisting fate, but the author tried every means to bring the male and female protagonists together. The male romance novels are based on the overall love theme, but at the core they are about resisting fate or explaining a certain theme.

This is so true that it makes me sick. After more than 130 pictures, the disciple of the protagonist made such a big mistake and killed so many people. Not only was he not imprisoned, but he was let go and found a wife for him. I don't know what kind of three views this is. It was the first time that I gave up the book because I was disgusted.

With this system, you will be persuaded to quit in the first chapter. This system does not allow the plot to be changed, nor does it allow the protagonist to manipulate it at will. If you don't understand it, it will be erased. Therefore, the protagonist is the fun of the system. It is not interesting to invite, it is not interesting, and it abuses the main text. It's just a walk~

Suddenly I felt that maybe I had read too much dark literature, or too many strange things. I always thought that killing the father, killing the mother, etc. or something like that He didn't know As long as you raised him crookedly from childhood he would take it seriously and it wouldn't happen

As soon as I saw the title of this book, I knew it was a dog-licking novel. I traveled to the villain, and then started to lick the heroine in order to survive, and started a life of dog-licking

Really, I would rather read a wisdom-advocating novel than read this book. It is too poisonous. It was one of the few books that could break my defense at the beginning.

If you don't know how to write a plot, then add a system. There's nothing wrong with that. It's crude and classic. However, I think you added a system as a promoter and your writing is still bad. Or, what on earth do you need the system for? Let me tell you from the bottom of my heart, since you have signed a contract to write a book, you should write it well. Otherwise, readers will spend real money to read your book, not just because you write it like this. Can you let the system rest? Don't always let it do all the hard work with dirty words, and explain all the instructions. It's best to be more natural in how to promote the plot. Don't always simply push one cause to an effect. One-on-one connection can only make your character a tool that meets your plot settings. There is no way to write characters and plots with a little bit of spirituality. Even if you are not poisonous in any way, I can't see it.

This is the first time I have encountered this, and I don't want to change the plot. Later in the plot, the main character must die and the co-author is just waiting to die. It's really refreshing and refined.

What is the use of this broken system besides threatening the protagonist?

Boss, I've read Chapter 6 and I really can't bear it anymore. The male protagonist is just a systematic puppet, and there is no spirit in the male protagonist. As long as the male protagonist is eliminated, he will be cowardly. Life is precious, but it cannot be like this. He is completely greedy for life and afraid of death. As mentioned earlier, if you want to take care of that girl, would anyone be able to get used to such abuse? The male protagonist still lost his bottom line because he was afraid of death, and then said that the system forced him because he was afraid of death.

After reading Chapter 201, I feel that the author is getting more and more anxious as he writes, and it feels like he wants to finish it hastily. Many logics are not straightened out. As he writes, he starts to want to reveal the world view, but the characters are not well described. Moreover, starting from the last 50 chapters, the heroine's role is getting less and less, and she is not half as good as the junior sister. Most of the time she is just playing soy sauce. The setting of the article is quite good. If the wording and structure are carefully polished, it should be a good book.

Apart from the gender of the heroine, isn't the introduction just a plagiarism? Forget it, it's okay to copy it, you can read it.

Although the author wrote faster in the later period, his character was still guaranteed after filling most of the pitfalls. To be honest, I was quite attracted by the humorous and filial piety gone bad when I first read it. After reading the comments in the book review section, I didn't really care, but the result seemed to make the author autistic. . It's a pity, because it shows that writing a book requires a strong psychological quality.

Something felt wrong when the protagonist's eldest disciple rebelled. The protagonist was both serious and upright, and something was even more wrong with Nanmen Ruoxuan in the back. How many people had she killed for one dead person? He even tortured and killed his first wife. Regardless of whether the dead man was good or bad, what does it mean for such a person to wake up and blame himself and commit suicide in the end? Whitewash? Moreover, compared to how many brothers and sisters the protagonist's apprentice led a wolf into and indirectly tortured and killed, the protagonist abolished his cultivation and then married him and made him a high-ranking member of the Blood God Cult. He was also a heinous person. The one above blamed himself to death, but his apprentice lived a happy life. This comparison is really poisonous.          ，，，？ Don't you have some quirks? Everyone who has done the most heinous crimes will have to go to the back to clear their name?          ，，，，，？ What bullshit logic, why didn't you mention that the protagonist fought life and death several times for the Tianjian Sect? Doesn't this count as a contribution? Is this not a favor? Moreover, if it has anything to do with the protagonist, it is not the protagonist's initiative to travel through time. If he is treated like a dog by the system, he will have to be kidnapped by his morals, right?          ，，，？ I vomited, why didn't she think about Bai Yao needing strength without her? Without her, Bai Yao's life would not be better than it is now? She is also one of the authors of this world. Is this a world like this? System,,, forget it, the protagonist's dog leash is useless, I'm too lazy to scold it.        :，，，，，？ I didn't finish it because I couldn't stand it any longer. I felt disgusted. Even if it's a novel, I couldn't stand this way of whitewashing a murderer.

Skip to the end and read it. The relationship between the protagonist and the heroine breaks through after the protagonist loses his memory. After the heroine merges with Jun Tan's consciousness, he gets a double buff (~_~;) He can even get a double supreme mixed poison at the end. Come on, the author who is so desperate, I will remember you and I will block your book when I see it in the future.