Naruto: Starting from the Root

Can you stop thinking about going home every day? Go home, go home, go home? After more than ten years of experience, it's time for your heart to grow cold, and it's time to learn to mature, right? If you encounter this dark world just a few days after arriving, forget it and want to go home to find your mother This ruthless world is unbearable for you. Now that you have enough strength, you can do it in any world? Why do you have to go back? As a reader, I can accept that the protagonist travels to other worlds in pursuit of higher power. But it is impossible to accept a weak soul.

The author finds it interesting for any clone to gain self-awareness, but readers have already seen it. This is a poisonous point.

What kind of strength does the protagonist have? The data panel looks very strong, but in the end he can't beat a shadow-level powerhouse. What is a shadow-level powerhouse?

There are dust escape, ice escape, flying thunder god, illusion, and mental control. There are so many things that it turns out that it is difficult to beat anyone. He is already an elite Jonin with Ice Release. If he adds Dust Release, wouldn't it make him super Kage level? You also have the Flying Thunder God and illusion skills, which are all kinds of unpleasant.

Good guy, the protagonist was considered to have "white teeth" on his first mission. Author, what do you think White Teeth is, a Chinese cabbage? To be honest, the protagonist's first mission is completely ordinary in the root organization! It's just the most basic qualities a Root Organization ninja should have, no big deal. If you want to write a novel about Jiang Zhi Long Aotian, just say so. Don't write a novel about Long Aotian on one side and realistic style on the other. It will make you feel awkward and angry.

I really like dark and cold novels like Anbu. The writing is also good. It has the feel of modern special forces. It would be better if the protagonist is more cold-blooded, not the Virgin.

Rubbish, the protagonist is nothing. His strength came too easily. Before he did anything, he went to the sand ninja to steal the forbidden book alone. If you have this ability, you can tell anyone in Konoha. The sand ninja knows nothing about the sand ninja. It is very difficult to go in the desert. To steal the forbidden book that has not been invented yet, Brother Yu injured Chiyo. Haha, facing the sand ninja in the desert, the protagonist cannot fly, and there is no chance of death.

The main plot of this book stagnated after more than 80 chapters, and then the author rambled on and wrote some nonsense plots aimlessly.

Do you feel more than self-pleasure or self-pleasure? ? ? ?

The author's plot fails to grasp the key points, and he doesn't know what readers want to see. Sooner or later, he will be disappointed.