Grocery Store Super God

I've only seen 40 pictures in this book. At first I was confused as to whether the writing was okay. Although he is a sea king. Not quite to my taste. But judging from the writing style, it's really good, but I don't know why it hasn't been published yet after 500,000 words. Then I saw 40 pictures here. Found an obvious shortcoming. It is obvious that the world view of this book is similar to One Punch Man. But the main character and Saitama are very different. Saitama met a strange person. Will kill people quickly. Even if you just stand aside and watch the weirdos fight against the plot characters. When characters in the plot are tortured in various ways, they will be saved by Saitama when they are most ready to die. As for the author, you are very depressed. I only saw 40 pictures. It is known that the protagonist's strength exceeds that of SS. Then various human heroes died in front of the protagonist. . , Such as this subsidence situation. Obviously the protagonist can save people. He also acted directly in front of female characters. The insects that just appeared in the front are everywhere. Alas, I am really speechless. All I can say is that I don't recommend you to continue writing like this. It was really frustrating to watch. Note that the above are all personal opinions. After all, I have been a bookworm for 8 years. Something is wrong. You can still feel it roughly, please note. I know that the author will definitely say something about the protagonist's frozen heart and so on. . Don't you think this setting is very retro?

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What's the use of having a 100% favorable impression after seeing it? ? Don't take any of them? ?

Very pretty. Personally, I feel that the world setting is quite similar to One Punch Man. Humans (heroes) versus monsters in one punch. In this book, humans (guardians) fight against bad guys. How should I put it? Personally, I feel that there is basically no poison. This book cannot be affected by its achievements. Read it slowly, I believe you will like it.

Interesting! Come on! 👍

Nuannuan, good book, invested

Generally speaking, the protagonist's character in a novel is more prominent. In this novel, even the characters of the supporting characters are written so delicately. I like it.

One thing that irritated me was that the main characters written by the author are all united and friendly and work together. There is no such thing as conflict but intrigue. It is a novel worth reading again and again.

It's so hard to come across a well-written novel! I originally planned to read it casually, but I didn't expect that I got into it after just reading it. It was interesting and enjoyable. The author grasped the characters in the novel very well. Everyone is very three-dimensional, with their own personality and thoughts. The plot is also well-characterized and closely linked. I can't help but admire it. From my personal point of view, the author's writing style is very mature. When a story can be told well, half the battle is won.

Each character is well set up. For the setting of the male protagonist and other supporting characters, the author uses frontal descriptions and some side descriptions, so that readers can easily understand the characters that the author wants to show them.

The author's choice of words in the article is very good, precise and appropriate, and he does not deliberately pile up rhetoric, which is really a great advantage in writing.

This book is really good and interesting to read.

More than 200 chapters are not available? How could you persist here? .

The author, I would like to suggest that you can think a little more bizarrely, which may lead to better results and be more creative!

This is the first time I have seen a novel of this style

Why is this novel's comment section so deserted? It's well written!

Sure enough, this is like a story. Well written.

Ah, please don't vote, I'm just finishing this book, you don't need to vote for me! 😘😘😘

I like this book. It feels very warm and enjoyable. I must recommend it!

Recently, One Punch Man is said to be able to blast Boros when he comes out with explosives?

Who did you mess with? So miserable

Very worth pursuing, recommendation index five stars

The author is really miserable, nearly 700,000 words have not been published yet