Don't Call Me a Zongzi

You keep cutting things out every day, author, is yours really that big? Is it impossible to cut them all?

It's really speechless to see someone from the vampire clan being cut up again...

Write carefully. I really liked the previous vampire story. You can write slowly and write more.

It seems that writing slice-of-life vampire stories has exhausted the author's talent.

I'm back again. This one is alright, though the writing logic seems a bit disjointed. It's probably related to my mindset; I shouldn't have rushed things in the beginning. Fantasy novels shouldn't be rushed; as long as the beginning is clear, that's fine. The grave-digging scene wasn't very good. A Taoist priest suddenly appears, and he's just giving away cultivation techniques for nothing.

Bro, I think you're pretty good at writing Harry Potter. Your "Dancing with Dragons" was quite good. How about rewriting that book? Don't rush the plot, develop the characters more fully, and don't rush into other storylines. It seems like you have a lot of potential.

@Reader_author Will you start a new book? Or will you come back and finish writing the book?

After reading 13 chapters, all I can say is amazing; they got things going in just a few chapters.

Bro, why is there no news about Hogwarts and the Dance of Dragons? I really enjoy watching it!

ψ(`∇´)ψ The author has secretly started a new book!