I Became the Murloc Lord

Picture source: Pages 189, 190, and 191 of dnd's 5e monster rule book Kou Tao Fishman The picture is for reference only. Please make up your own mind for the specific appearance of the protagonist. Please refer to your brain for the actual appearance. Murloc High Priest Mloc Lasher

How should I put it, the more I look at it, the more something is wrong. A standard DND novel about hegemony in another world. The writing, plot, and characters are all above the passing mark. It is like a roadside restaurant. It is edible, but not very delicious. The main problem is that it is too homogenized with other hegemony novels. The little fish-man in the article looks too much like a human in fish-man skin. Replacing all the murlocs with ignorant humans does not actually change anything, but there are so many DND novels in the starting point. If it were just a simple different world wearing fish-man skin. It's impossible to stand out. I would like to give some suggestions to the author. When describing daily life, you can definitely write about the unique culture and actions of fish people. Differentiate fish from humans. For example, sacrifices do not necessarily follow human standards. Be more imaginative and hold a sacrifice in the sea. The special sacrificial dance of the fishmen and the like With so many articles about fighting for hegemony in another world, writing your own characteristics is the key. Since the fishmen are written in the title of the article. You can write this part as the finishing touch. If the author thinks it makes sense, please add more details. 🙂

It fits the image of Dasha very well😍

Here is a complete picture of the handsome protagonist

Post a picture of a fishman or a map. These are the most basic. You can at least give readers an idea. After all, your book itself belongs to a niche taste. If you don't explain it clearly, it will easily lose readers.

How can I put it, it is still too human-like. It does not depict the ecological environment of the murloc tribe. It is more like a human village. The protagonist was a human in his previous life and has the habit of having people in this life. Why are other murlocs so similar to humans? It seems that there is no sense of violation when replacing them with ignorant humans. It does not depict the flavor of murlocs.

I hope the protagonist is a fish-man, not a person wearing fish skin! The butt determines the head, the person asking you to sacrifice is a fish-man, not a human! And the humans in this other world have nothing to do with your compatriots on Earth? Skin color, language, culture, everything is different! Where does the compassion come from? The people on earth hate most people who kill humans! The same is true now!

I hope I don't turn into a human again in the end. It's good for the fish-men to be fish-men, just like those people who hate the transformation when reading novels about alien beasts. Anyway, I read this kind of alien novels because of the aliens. Don't make it to the end where you transform into humans and change human forms. It would be too disgusting.

The book is finished, why does it appear in the new book category 😰

Can you write it faster? These two chapters are not enough to read for ten minutes. I can't invest in it.

Triton

A few suggestions for the author 1 I hope the author can carefully check the characteristics of the fish people to design spells (what the hell is the holy fire spell and the compatibility of the fish people is not at all compatible) 2 The fish people can take the farming route (raising fish) to grow algae and hydrophilic crops. 3 Murlocs are highly adaptable and can be strengthened by the blood of powerful monsters. 4 Murlocs can better protect themselves in water battles (it is recommended to find a large lake to grow). 5 Don't be ambiguous, think about what a fishman looks like (he is not a tidal sea spirit)? Please don't offend readers. 6Finally, if the author really can't think of a sacrificial spell, he can interact with the readers. Water arrows (bombs), Tide Calling (summons water to attack the opponent, the more mana used, the stronger the power, creating a water environment conducive to fishmen), Tide Impact (summons waves to attack the opponent, and can receive environmental bonuses), Water Beast Taming (can tame aquatic monsters not exceeding its own level), (Water) Healing (treating with gentle water currents), Ocean Inspiration (blessing: agility, defense, enhanced effect when in the water). I think about it later

Guantao Fishman😅

How about this

"World of Warcraft: Murloc City Guide" also writes about murlocs, it has a million words, you can check it out if you are interested.

I've seen this cover of yours on several books, and they've all been sold out.

It's about fishmen, but the author just wants to make fishmen into human beings

How about this?

Serious nonsense, the fastest growing is annexation and invasion. Murloc men and women are warriors, enslaving other intelligent races to serve the murlocs. The murlocs specialized in fighting, and then divided the enslaved intelligent races into different levels so that they could not join forces to fight against the murlocs, and then expanded according to this model.

What should I do if the author is really sick?

After two days of raising it, I actually finished the book.

Crazy, what's going on? Suddenly the book is finished.

Say something! Are you still writing?

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

When the fishman observed the diary, he realized that something was wrong. Forget about the previous conversations on the Internet.

Reminds me of bad memories. I read a movie about territory battle N years ago. The first person summoned was the Priestess of the Moon from Warcraft. It turned out that her name was Mengmeng and her mount was a little tiger called Jiujiu. I was poisoned on the spot. Damn it, she was still a tsundere girl.

I feel like I wrote it very well, can you continue it?

I wanted to submit it, but after looking at the table of contents, it ended like this!

Isn't fishman synonymous with ugliness? ? Can you still live like this?