The Undying Monster Hunter

The subject matter and writing style are alright, but the protagonist's overly sanctimonious dialogue is really annoying! For example: "The village chief deserves to die?"??? Does the protagonist represent the highest moral standard? Look at the world and the era! Is going against one's own conscience a capital offense???? If that's the case, you should call the police, since the protagonist doesn't represent anything.

The beginning was alright, but I felt that writing about the female lead and how she started to show off and get slapped in the face was less effective than writing about killing monsters and leveling up.

After reading the first volume, the beginning about Black Mountain Village was well-written, but it got terrible afterward.

This is boring. Doesn't the main character have the ability to save their progress? It looks so stupid.

The beginning was good, but the pacing suddenly became sluggish afterwards. The text didn't match the description. I'm dropping the book after chapter 20.

You can refer to this resurrected empire

There aren't any major flaws, but the plot and writing style... Since you've given us the save/load ability, use it properly. You're the one writing the plot, not rushing it. What's the hurry?

Overall it's okay, but the writing style is a major flaw.

It's already pretty good. The author should give the protagonist some basic fighting skills. It's like police officers not learning combat skills; how can an official department fight without any strategy? Skills don't need to be too restrictive. Frost can be used to make ice, and ice was quite expensive in ancient times.

The writing is decent, and the imagination is rich. However, it's a bit of a shame that the plot is driven by a system.