Immortal Creature Hunter

The subject matter and the writing are okay, but the pig's feet look like a virgin's and the lines are very painful! For example: Does the village chief deserve death? ? ? Do pig's feet represent the moral high ground? Let's look at what kind of world and what era it is. If you break through your own heart, you deserve to die? ? ? If this happens, you should call the police. After all, the pig's feet themselves can't represent anything.

The previous chapter was okay, but I feel like writing about the heroine and getting slapped in the face because the heroine starts pretending to be sexy is not as good as writing about killing monsters and upgrading.

After reading the first volume, Heishan Village was good at the beginning, but then it was terrible.

It's boring. Can't the protagonist save the file? Looks so stupid,

It starts off well, but then the tempo suddenly becomes grindy. The text is wrong. Chapter 20 Abandoned Book

It's already good. The author should add some ordinary fighting skills to the pig's feet. Just like the police who don't learn how to fight, how can we call it an official department if they fight without rules? There is no need to limit your skills too much. Frost can make ice. Ice was quite expensive in ancient times. Heart language can communicate with animals. It's not bad to have a dog. If you develop more on your own, it doesn't make sense that time travelers still have the ability to make more money.

Overall, it's okay, but the writing style is flawed.

There's nothing bad about it, but the plot and writing... Since you've been given the ability to save and load files, make good use of it. You write the plot, not you follow it, so what's the rush?

You can refer to this Resurrection Empire

The writing is okay and the imagination is rich. But it's a pity to rely on the system to drive the plot.

Doesn't the Yishi Yamen where the protagonist lives have great power? Why would an ordinary family dare to block the door? And send someone to protect you? Or is there some hidden power in this family that the author didn't write about?

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