The Lucky Star Spends Big in the Survival Game

Author, what's wrong with the logic? The female lead encountered the male lead three times in different instances and still thought he was an NPC?!

It makes no sense. The female lead just got the rat-repelling bead, but after the rats came, she didn't remember anything about it, only some snake medicine. And it's all in the same chapter! Is her memory that short-lived?

I'll accept your plagiarism of foreign movie plots as fanfiction and won't say anything more! ... But let's talk about the characters you wrote—they're riddled with plot holes! The game settings are illogical! The developments are nonsensical! It's not a satisfying read, and the romance is weak... Quite disappointing! What a waste of the material!

I skimmed through some parts, and there were too many illogical plot points, poor story logic, numerous loopholes, and childish writing style. The author is better suited to writing sweet romance stories; it's really not something everyone can write well in the infinite flow genre. Infinite flow requires a lot of knowledge from the author, and you really can't write it well without some life experience.

Does the author only release half of each chapter? Sometimes it feels like it ends before I've even finished reading.

Keep it up! The article is great.