The Talisman of Immortal Path to Heaven

It looks good. Come on, author, update soon!

This is the first book I bought money to read at Qidian. Except for the part about traveling together for 5 qi training periods, which is a bit incomprehensible, the rest is very exciting, but the updates are a bit slow. It would be better if there were 3 updates a day. Great support for the author.

Although the beginning is unremarkable, fortunately, the author's writing is smooth. After the first few chapters on the family, the subsequent plot is compact and interlocking. The heroine is beautiful alone and has no cp. It is a very good article about cultivating immortals. I really love it! ! Come on, madam! ! ! !

In the extra chapter, we can only see Ji Qiao

It's nice to have family and relatives, but I hate the routine where one person can win by relying on the halo of the heroine. There is nothing to gain without experience. I have seen a certain immortal order where family members who have struggled to build foundations are piled up until the Nascent Soul transforms into gods. The process is just like a joke.

Although there is no cp, the heroine is a weirdo carrying a cauldron, carrying her brother and father's two cauldrons, she is a donkey among donkeys. My brother is not talented? Then I'll make my aura into a talisman to upgrade him. Isn't the combat effectiveness good? Then give enough care to your brother Fu Lu (when drunk, the clan sister and her father will give the heroine pills, but the heroine's brother will shamelessly accept it, and then worry about the heroine when she gets injured from fighting monsters.) Then the heroine's father has a physical problem, and the heroine practices hard. When the baby is born, the only thing she wants to do is to cure her father, but she doesn't know how much it will cost to cure her father.

I really like the author's writing. I haven't seen such high-quality writing about cultivating immortals for a long time. It's very good, but there are too few of it. Dear fairies and goddesses passing by, do you have any writing about cultivating immortality that you can recommend? It needs to be of high quality and not written by a noob with a female protagonist. There is a shortage of books...～

Thunderbolt 1: The heroine's mother, Mo Sanniang, forgave her cousin who killed her father, and also helped her cousin's mortal daughter to settle down and live in the world, which wasted two years in cultivating immortality. It seems that foundation building is not as important to her mother as her family members who have spent so much effort to save spiritual stones and find connections to get a foundation building pill. (Especially the two children who helped her find connections and find out information.) Things 2: The supporting character Wang Zhen's personality is broken. She blames her teammates anytime and anywhere in the Five Elements Secret Realm, and also steals the trophies of other teammates. Her cousin Captain Wang only knows how to say good things to wipe his ass, but there are still two regular teammates teaming up with them. It is illogical. Unless the supporting character encounters the automatic demotion halo setting of the protagonist, it can explain why he did not act like a monster before but continues to act like a monster now. Three highlights: In order to force the heroine to join the family mission team of the outer sect, the man whose name he forgot teamed up with Dou Bipengci to teach the heroine a lesson, and then the heroine successfully counterattacked. The heroine went alone to the team that had not yet found out the purpose to inquire about information. All she knew was unilaterally said by the clan sister who was with them, and then the heroine just let go of the matter. My dear mother! How do you know whether what this clan sister said is true or false, one-sided or the whole truth? Later, Dou Bi was also written as a kind person. Faint. . Thunder point 4: The heroine and her brother came home during the Qi refining period, and they were actually together with the clan sister and Dou Bi! ! On the road, they met a family who committed murder and robbed them of goods. They successfully counterattacked and let go the girl who had killed her own father and brother who promised to take revenge if she died. It was the indigenous heroine who begged for mercy. Dou Bi did not approve of the murder. Only one clan sister wanted to kill him, so he gave up the extermination after everyone objected! Later, I added a sentence to the heroine: She knew in her heart that she should be killed, but she couldn't get over this hurdle. Holy shit! The heroine has received 20 years of modern education and 10 years of education in the world of immortality. But when the time comes, she can't accept someone else killing someone. . It was strange. Her family sent female cultivators to serve as cauldrons for powerful people. There was so much internal fighting within the family, competition for resources was ever-present, and murders and treasure seizures occurred from time to time. She was even captured to snatch the spiritual tree. If not for a coincidence, she would have died long ago. Her father was also injured by foreign enemies and his pubic area was shattered. Her mother appeared to explain how the family hatred continued. In the end, the native brother and the 30-year-old female protagonist interceded for their enemy and let her go. . . Do you dare to say that she will not grow up by chance? It doesn't matter if you lose your life or your Dantian. Do you know how much potential and luck this person has? They say they are clear-headed and understand everything, but the problem is that they dare not do anything! How can you cultivate immortality and seek immortality? So stupid.

Seeing that the Ji family gave away their girls to be used as furnaces, they were not a good family, and their impression of the Ji family was extremely bad. However, the protagonist of this article is inseparable from the family. Alas, it is a test of endurance.

The author is very open to sword cultivation, the next book. Li Bai Yiying's lines in "Glory of Kings" are so easy to expand into a sword repair novel, wow. The great road is like the blue sky. If the great road is clear, evil will not appear. Daohui, the divine sword will come out My name is Yingying. I am not talented with this sword, but I have defeated thousands of armies with this sword. The three-foot long sword cuts through the endless entanglement of lovesickness Wherever the sword goes, where the heart goes. Go against the sky and break through the blue-falling underworld.

I don't understand why the strength of the golden elixir comes with a bunch of refining qi. Either the strength of the golden elixir crushes the escort, or she is implicated in various ways. Although the heroine's own strength is the best in the same period, but in the overall environment, her strength is no better than that of others. With a bunch of refining qi holding her back, she can't protect people, so why bother! I'm really annoyed by that princess Liang Yu. The more people say it's business, the more they want to go. It's really disgusting to see her holding Ah Hei's flesh and blood for the heroine to save. The heroine is no less sad than she is. She was the one who insisted on following her.

That's it.😰 The ending is not too rushed, and it doesn't have to be about fairyland and horses, but I feel like I can still write it. In fact, when I read the second half, I felt that it developed a bit too fast, but when I think about it after reading it, I can't remember anything. It feels quite complete😅 How about starting a new book and continuing to write? After Ji·The Goddess of Luck·the boss ascended, he came out of the Immortal Pond, just in time to catch up with the battle between the two real bosses in the fairy world. He was thrown out of the fairy world by the aftermath of the battle. Whether he was reborn or traveled through time, he became a baby again. How could he grow up again? 😄 "I Paste Talisman Papers on Zombies" This is an apocalyptic text, "On the Application of Mechas in Talisman and Seal Script", "Insect Disaster of Talismans", "Ghost Drawing Talisman in the Starry Sky" This is an interstellar text, "Escape from Famine: I Draw a Talisman First" Farming Text 😠😡😄😄😄

None of the articles on immortality I've read recently are of a good quality, and it's rare to see this article. The whole article is actually very good, but the writing of skills and spells is unclear, and the writing of fighting needs to be strengthened. These are actually not bad, but the heroine's character is not interesting to watch. I read the author's two articles and it was like this. Everything is obviously reasonable, but I feel a little unmotivated. The last book was about a vicious female supporting character that dragged on for many chapters. This book just left the soft part there for me to write a book review. I just feel that why the heroine and her brother and sister think about an outsider with evil intentions instead of thinking about their own family. Sympathy for the enemy is cruelty to one's own family. It is not easy to protect yourself and the people around you on the road to immortality. I don't have any objection to the author's writing. The author can naturally write different results. I have also seen this kind of plot, but after reading it, I didn't think it was a big deal, because the protagonist who did this is very powerful. If this kind of enemy is defeated by him, he will only be able to watch his back in the future. He has the strength and confidence to do this, and he also has the courage to do this. I just think he's cool and charming. But as the heroine of this book, I only think she is weak. Only one of the female characters traveling with her thinks that the woman should be killed, and the others advocate letting her go. If I were the female supporting character, I wouldn't think that the female protagonist would be able to lead teammates like this. Kill him directly to avoid future trouble. The heroine doesn't want to kill anyone, which shows that she doesn't have this consciousness in her heart, and she doesn't have the confidence to take on the trouble. She is passive, does not want to stand out, and does not want to disagree with the people around her. This was the case with the two people who were abducted before, and it is still the case now. If such a weak-minded person does not change his mind, it will be difficult to continue in the world of immortality. After all, cultivating immortality is not a treat for dinner, and you cannot be soft-hearted if you touch someone.

Support, I like novels without a male protagonist, and the female protagonist focuses on developing her own

Ji Qingling has been acting like a nanny lately, taking a few Qi practitioners with her wherever she goes.

The pace is a little slow in the early stages. The characters only started to appear after more than 30 chapters. Then can you not write the scene where the tiger returns to the mountain? It is very poisonous. If the heroine is in danger later because of this, I will not be surprised at all. The other parts are still good.

It feels so fake that cultivating immortality is something that only one person can do. It feels like forming a team, which is boring.

It's good to read. After reading so many novels about cultivating immortals, I still find this novel very fresh. You don't fall into the cliche, you can give it a try

It's a very good book. Although the ending is a little rushed, the plot and characters are quite interesting. It's a good first book for a novice. It's a pity that Shen Ru and Ji Qiao, especially Ji Qiao, are so miserable. Seeing him die there, I still wonder if he might still be alive😭

The dialogue, writing, and plot of this book are all okay, but it is a pity that the real elements of cultivating immortals, including skills, spells, and fighting, are completely missing. The heroine's foundation-building spells use golden elixirs. I can't explain why the heroine is so strong. It is comparable to physical cultivation. I just say that the combat power is strong. I can't explain why the combat power is strong. Except for the saplings that provide endurance, it is understandable. The author is a newbie. Immortals are not easy to write. They need strong creativity. Keep up the encouragement

Can the author Ah Hei be resurrected? Let him be resurrected.

It's not bad, it's pretty good-looking, and many friends are cultivating immortality together.

It's a good article on cultivating immortality, which is very satisfying to my appetite.

There are too few well-written books without male protagonists cultivating immortals. I love the author!

It's very well written, I couldn't stop reading it 👍

So beautiful! Just not enough to see...

It's good-looking, no CP, cultivating immortality, and still good-looking, it's really rare. The only thing is that I'm too thin. Just over 200 chapters. I finished watching it over the weekend. . .

It looks good, but there is no male protagonist, which feels a bit regretful

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It's a very good novel. I stayed up late to read it. Now I have updated it a lot with the author. I hope the author doesn't cheat. It's very interesting.