Game Pilgrim of the Heavens

How can I put it, the writing was pretty good before, but since I entered Old Man Scroll Five, I obviously felt a little unsatisfied. After thinking about it, firstly, the protagonist's emotions are a bit unrealistic. Everyone who is in love knows that at that moment, I wish I could stick together forever, and the protagonist, emmm. Another point is that the protagonist's feelings for Cynthia are slightly inexplicable. Although the God's perspective can know why, once it is introduced into the novel, it will be very awkward. Because Lao Gun is trying to make up for it, it is difficult for me to have particularly strong feelings for the protagonist. The second is that I personally feel that after Lao Guan, the content of various worlds is not as well mixed as before. There is less content in other games, and it is not as harmonious as before.

I finished reading it in an hour. Overall, the quality of the book is pretty good. The progress of time travel is relatively not fast, and the protagonist's strength improvement speed is also quite appropriate, at least slower than the progress of other travels through darkness. Some people say that the emotional scenes are more abrupt, but I think it is reasonable, but I hope there are not too many female protagonists...

This book has a good idea, and the plot arrangement is okay. There's nothing sinister about it, it's a work you can look forward to!

Good, very good, very good, no poison,

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. By the way, what about the supreme breathing method? Author, you forgot

Today is January 30th, and the author has been gone for 28 days. In order to keep a memorial, a grave is set up here for future book friends to burn incense.

I highly recommend this book. The plot is not ridiculous and there are no poisonous points. It is a good book.

It's very interesting, I hope you can stick with it, come on 0

Wow, it actually came back to life. I really liked this book at the time. I kept looking for similar people to write about these games but I didn't find anything I liked.

There is no need for everyone to ask. It is obvious that I am entering the palace. I am busy and I have no time to post a single chapter explanation. I will not post this. It is obvious that I will not write it, or someone is in trouble.

If I remember correctly, many authors used to take time off during National Day and New Year's Day, and then their works were lost. The books on my bookshelves are the most ready during these two holidays.

Pin it to the top, fix it all, and reward more, you understand? Update soon! ! !

After job change. Suddenly pulled across, there is no significant surge in combat effectiveness. On the contrary, the protagonist's combat power seems to be stretched very quickly. It doesn't matter if you want to reflect the protagonist's wisdom. The key is that you shouldn't show it at this plot point. Generally speaking. This part is the climax or the exciting point. At least find some other plots to overdo it, good guy. You can just have a plot similar to "The world is invincible. Then there are people coming from the sky." Who can stand this? Dozens of people comment and like it. I'm not the only one who feels this way. It's really like a replacement. The style of writing changes. . There is no one left for you, I thought. Most people should be like me. You are all looking forward to your performance after changing jobs. . But you. . . . . . . . It's so annoying. It's so annoying

It feels like you are in a land of girls. The companions you interact with are all female characters. Even the latest Dragonborn is a female. Except for the uncle who got a box lunch in Dark Souls in a few chapters, there are not many male characters. It feels like a cookie cutter.

I have never played the Dark Souls series. I don't know much about it, so looking at the settings in this book, I feel like Gwen and the others have chosen the wrong path. It turns out that the big stone tree can absorb energy from the outside world, so the whole world can always exist. And although Chuhuo seems to be quite awesome at first, he can only get fuel from others and cannot get it himself. So the tree behind him was burned. The fire is getting weaker and weaker, which means that the stone trees were actually the original appearance of this world in the beginning. The first fire is equivalent to burning the original world and turning it into a new world. Then after the original world is burned, the first fire is extinguished. To change the general meaning, it means that it is equivalent to an ordinary big tree, with some bark-eating bugs, cicadas or small animals such as birds living on it. One day, it suddenly caught fire. These small animals were burned to death, but some that lived on the flame environment came out of the fire. Fire creatures with a body temperature of several hundred degrees will not be able to survive if the flames extinguish the fire after the tree is burned.

I just upgraded and made the equipment. I was suppressed and beaten. I was speechless. Besides, the essence of Diablo is not to fight monsters and explode equipment. Why do you have to have an internal fight? Where did there come from so many betrayers in the novice area? It's boring. I suggest you skip it.

Oh my god, the update has resumed. That's great. Keep it up, author, and keep up the good work!

The author's writing is very good, with the dual development of magic and technology, and it is very balanced. Those who say that individuals are extraordinary should not pay too much attention to the fact that this is a science fiction novel, not a novel about cultivating immortals. Don't write it until it turns into a novel about cultivating immortals. This routine is a bit disgusting. Come on, author. The author gives a fine 😁😁😁

What age are you still writing this shitty content? I had an affair with a female protagonist for dozens of chapters, but in the end I found out that it was because I looked like her younger brother. I immediately vomited blood when I saw this.

Congratulations to the Admiral on your promotion to Admiral of the West Factory

This book is really a pity, I feel like I could become a little god

How to say it? It feels like the protagonist has gone through so many cores and is still the otaku dick before time travel!

Some of the skill creative ideas are really good. Three votes are given.

Come on, author! Personally I think it's very well written! Be sure to keep at it.

I've been keeping it for several days, but I can't see enough. It disappeared all of a sudden. Please update it 🥺

I'm still reading books, I hope I don't die, I can read them for a long time when I come to see them next time 🙂🙂🙂🙂

A large section of the comment I wrote disappeared. Although it may have been nonsense, complaints, or dissatisfaction, I didn't have any extreme or forbidden words, and it just so happened that my comment collapsed when I discovered it. I don't know why it disappeared, but I was greatly shocked.

10,000 Reward, please update soon

I thought it was a comeback, but I didn't expect it to be stable for several days. I hope it can be completed well in the future.