The Immortal Wizard Is Observing

A lord in wizard skin. Neither magic nor wizard.

In Chapter 10, a girl suddenly appeared who barely offended the protagonist. According to the psychological description written by the protagonist before, not to mention ruthless, but she will never be a bad person before she can stand firm at the beginning. Just facing the girl who offended me, she immediately changed her appearance and turned into a bad guy. This made me very sick. First of all, I want to explain that the protagonist's current behavior is not that of a dog-licker. Of course, if it weren't for the current environment that hates dog-lickers, I believe that the protagonist is likely to develop into a dog-licker. But now this kind of behavior conflicts with the character and develops in the direction of dog-licking, which makes me feel disgusted. It used to be pretty good, but now I don't want to watch it.

Let me first state that I came here because of the title of the book. I originally thought this was an immortal wizard. Eternal Life, the Wizard. What I want to see is the calmness and indifference of the Eternal Life, the wisdom and rationality of the Wizard. The protagonist contributes to the world in the pursuit of knowledge and interprets the world as a spectator. But what about this book? At the current pace, I have a hunch that the time span within 500 chapters will not exceed 10 years. How can we talk about eternal life? Where is eternal life? With the addition of love, how can a partner live forever? Is it necessary to end with the theory of lifespan to open up an indifferent heart? Really, the title of the book doesn't suit you. This is a Western Fantasy Lord novel.

The more I look at it, the weirder it becomes. Immortality, wizards, and observation are not reflected 😅 You must have chosen the wrong name. There is no calmness of immortality, no mystery of wizards, no concealment of observation. The protagonist's time seems to be quite tight. From the capital to the territory to development, it seems too anxious. The protagonist's witchcraft is almost entirely based on the system, and it is simple and crude. There is no mystery like using simple witchcraft to turn decay into magic. It doesn't matter if the protagonist is a lord. He has huge influence. Without the concealment of the observer, it will be difficult to exit in the future. The more I look at it, the more I feel that this is the wrong name. This should be a name based on the Western Fantasy Lord novel.

Draw a circle to indicate the location of the protagonist's cold wind collar.

If you don't want the Holy Mother, and if you don't want to be a eunuch, just push it.

When the author wrote about commodity prices, he almost applied the level of medieval Europe, but he forgot that he was writing about a giant extraordinary empire with hundreds of millions of people. The weapon of an ordinary guard actually cost fifty gold coins, and buying a territory only cost two hundred gold coins. I couldn't stand the price. If the productivity of the extraordinary empire in your book is the same as that of medieval Europe, then what is the point of extraordinary?

Orthopedic plot, juvenile aesthetics, I think Shen Nong tasted all kinds of herbs for so many years, and finally died at your side, Don't explain it to me, the explanation is that you are right! There is something very wrong with juvenile aesthetics. There is also an orthopedic department...

The plot is really far-fetched. The dignified viscount family of an important trading city is simply tempted by the blood clan to kill the father and son. You said you tempted one and I reluctantly accepted it, but both of them were tempted to turn against each other. Are the rest of the family blind and brainless? How could the powerful nobles of the empire occupy such a large territory if they had no ability to counteract this alien species? The protagonist is also awesome. He originally went to the city to deal with goods and visit the viscount, but someone happened to be holding a banquet and inexplicably prevented the viscount from marrying his daughter. He knew beforehand that the mercenary was a vampire, right? After coming out, I used crows to follow the family and happened to find out that they wanted to overthrow the Viscount's family today. I went there and hacked a vampire to death. After the vampires finished killing the Viscount's family and rescued the Viscount's daughter, I sent troops directly into the castle and took control of a major trade city in the northern province. Let a remote little lord who enters the city for the first time take direct control. The other forces in the city are all trash and can't even say a word? It also makes the protagonist seem to be very good at operations. How dare you believe this? ? The protagonist, Goldfinger, is so good, why don't you just farm and grow stronger and then grab territory? You must engage in these coin-killing coincidences and disgusting operations.

You are really a complete novice, and you have stepped on all the poisonous minefields for Western fantasy readers.

He is a relative of the emperor, his uncle is the emperor, his father is also an earl, and the protagonist has a normal relationship with his family. However, when he goes to a remote territory thousands of miles away and has no one under his command, he needs to find dozens of civilians to train for several days to protect him, or is it similar to military training like a school? Are you sure this protects people? In addition, these noble lords are all the same as the two fools. For example, the noble who sold the territory to the protagonist has been passed down for hundreds of years. He has no military force, no confidants, no guards or servants, and no money. He only borrowed 200 gold coins from a loan shark and couldn't pay it back.

I don't recommend watching it, there are too many loopholes.

Let me tell you, I originally liked reading the development of the Immortal Wizard novel, but the development of this book feels so strange. The Immortal Wizard, despite being in the safe environment of the imperial capital, having the status of a county king (equivalent to ancient China), and still not having the right to inherit, actually traveled thousands of kilometers away, hunting monsters along the way. In such a dangerous external environment, they went out to develop territory in the Northeast from scratch. I can understand if you say you have lived for decades, acquired all the books and materials in the imperial capital, secretly gained territory outside, and have a trump card in your hands, even if you go out. But you don't have any foundation and you go out to wander. What's the use of your immortality?

Alice

Readers who think it's good, please be sure to read it. It's really important for new books.

This is another novel whose title, synopsis, and content are far from each other. I've been looking for a lot of them like this recently. Three elements of the book title, Immortality, Wizard, Observation Introduction elements, Immortality, Silent Observation, Territory Look at what is written in the first ten chapters, sixteen years has passed since the wizard level was only level one? What are you doing next, rushing to the territory, and planting the seeds of war halfway through? After reading the titles of subsequent chapters, there are also other contradictions. Do you think these contents are consistent with the title and introduction of your book? My first reaction after reading the title of the book was to study wizards. After reading the introduction, there is a territory for farming. I was already thinking that the protagonist would use wizards' things to quickly develop the territory for farming and then feed the protagonist himself to conduct wizard research. But you did this to me at the beginning, let's go.

Isa

It's too bad. Didn't you think about changing it? Is the author so tough?

I can't stand it anymore. A biological sister and a cousin are doing something so warm. Can't you just write it more normally?

I'm not going to tell you how good this novel is, but I just want to ask, how do you write about a wizard so that it feels like a wizard? Some people set their sights on the wizards in Harry Potter, some set their sights on the cruel wizards in dark western fantasy novels, and some regard the wizards in the DND setting as their benchmarks, so who is the orthodox one? I always read in fan fiction about wizards by profession that they are not wizards at all 😅