All People Become Gods Game

To be honest, the writing is indeed very good. Don't be sorry for this good book, author, orz (referring to the unfinished eunuch or something like that)

Originally, the game settings were particularly great, because it had been a long time since there had been a great game-oriented book. But for some problems faced by the author, I would like to make some suggestions for readers. First, you are not good at turning events into copies, which wastes such a good story core. Second, the map (scene) transition is too rigid and difficult to immerse in. There is no connection between the previous and the last, and there is no coherence. You can try to divide the event into nodes, and then review and summarize when each node is in-depth. It can be clearly felt that you want to achieve it, but the plot is pushed too fast and there are too many settings. Because the things thrown out are too dense, the sense of substitution is very awkward. Third, you obviously have a detailed outline. Why did you abandon your outline due to external influence? Don't sacrifice the basics and focus on the setting instead of telling the story. Finally, it is obvious that your ability to describe words is online, but when you see the good results, you become a little anxious. Write slowly. Super God Mechanic updates it every day. Isn't it also a god? Be confident, you can do it.

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Early Main Line 1. Looking for a way to reach Enavia other than the two gods - the Gaia consciousness of the earth can no longer tolerate the existence of humans, and there is no hope for humans to break through the solar system. For the continuation of the race, a new living space must be found. The two gods each pulled one end of the rope and set up a soul passage to Enavia. However, the two gods are selfish, short-sighted and greedy. Humans and the two gods do not know which day they will break. Humans must find their own way to Enavia and take their destiny into their own hands. 2. Fight for human independence from the two racial gods - the two racial gods need faith, but are short-sighted and selfish. They are vampires and stumbling blocks lying on the race. For the sake of the continuation of the race, you can give in to the hypocrisy, but you must strive for independence and have a chance to resist when those two deceive people in the future. 3. Establish a foothold in Enavia - Before finding other ways, Nord is the only place where humans can enter Enavia, so even if the two gods try to trick them, they must hold Nord and then expand to open up space for the arrival of more humans. 4. Master stronger mysterious power - you need to be strong to make iron. If you are caught and killed, there will be nothing, so you must become stronger as soon as possible and master enough power to resist before being discovered by the two gods or other forces. Possible main lines in the future 1. Killing the Gods - When human survival no longer faces threats, it is time to liquidate, and the decayed gods must be swept into the trash can. 2. Creation of Gods - Facing the various forces and crises in the IXin Yuan Hai, only with sufficient power can human life safety be guaranteed. 3. The Great Liberation and the spread of certain ideas - The arrival of humans will inevitably break the original balance, and expansion and war will inevitably occur. The war is about productivity, in order to develop greater productivity. At the same time, Nords are basically a certain class naturally, and farmers and a certain class in other countries account for the vast majority. In addition, humans have rich knowledge and even accumulated experience. After there is an equivalent high-end combat power, expansion guided by certain ideas and in the name of liberation will be unstoppable. 4. The Age of Great Exploration and the Great Universe - When human beings develop to a certain stage and explore the current world to a certain extent, exploration outside the world will inevitably occur. Then, whether it is the thirst for resources and knowledge or the invasion from the outside world, mankind will enter the era of the big universe. Through wars, trade, exchanges, alliances, conquests and unification, human beings will become the target of public criticism and a mudslide in the IXin Yuan Sea. New ideas will change the pattern of the entire IXin Yuan Sea, providing new solutions and new services to all races in the IXin Yuan Sea that want to be independent. The above is all my own imagination and is not certified by any author Please correct me if there are any mistakes.

By the way, let me complain, there are definitely people who betrayed humans and took refuge with the alien gods. Are there not many weird things in history? Were there still few traitors during the Anti-Japanese War? In today's society, among the elite elements, are there still some things that are lacking?

After thinking about it and hesitating for a long time, I decided to invest 10,000. Come on, author.

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Thank you all for your continued support. I received the signing information this morning.

This book has the largest number of words I have posted so far. For other books, I have posted zero words. The worldview of this book is broad enough, and the author's writing is strong enough to describe his inner story. It's just that my thinking may have been a little confusing some time ago, but the flaws are not concealed. This is a post dedicated to encouraging authors, but I don't know if it is useful. The current rhythm is very comfortable, and the description of the players is particularly appropriate. Regarding other people's roles, there is enough recognition. Since it relies on the players' strategic articles, the description of the protagonist is weakened. This is not an invincible hero, but an unparalleled resourcefulness. Come on, author.

It's okay, the world view is relatively large, and the plot is relatively coherent. The heroine at the beginning is a bit uncomfortable as the plot progresses, but the plot progresses fairly smoothly. However, the character portrayal is average, and the small details are not good. For example, after being reborn for a hundred thousand years, working hard to climb to a high position, and then being surprised, with emotions and anger, and working hard for a hundred thousand years to attack the "Time Watcher", the level has risen. In the end, the progression of the plot at the beginning still depends on the heroine. It is not impossible, but it is very strange. The pattern is here - leading humans & becoming gods, and the ending If the driving force in the early stage of the plot is actually the heroine, the situation will suddenly become smaller. This does not mean that the heroine cannot drive the plot, but the strong character has been established. The heroine is considered a small love. It is obvious that she is following the career line rather than the love line. It is better to let the heroine out in the second half. The heroine drives the plot in the early stage and can be promoted in the middle stage, and at the same time establish the character. The heroine doesn't appear much in the early stages of the plot, so it doesn't affect reading, so it's okay. The small details of the protagonist's character still need to be polished. Come on, author.

How can I put it, after reading the introduction, I was a little worried about the author. To be honest, one hundred thousand years is not a small number. Even if there is inertia in thinking, if you maintain a short-lived life attitude, if you have not been crazy for 100,000 years, you can really use it to describe it as a god or immortal. This is not the immortal who cultivates immortality in the underworld. It is very difficult for the author to write a more reasonable person who has lived for 100,000 years and can be recognized by ordinary people. If he uses skips such as deep sleep, it would be better to change it to be honest. Or follow Otto's example and write directly towards metamorphosis. After all, after living for 100,000 years, metamorphosis is not a problem at all.

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It's countless times better than those books that hit the charts, and the author will become a great master sooner or later.

This book must be posted in Sanjiang as proof!

Today is the first time I read this book. I feel that it is okay. I gave it 100 points just because I wanted to post this sentence quickly. Not to mention the writing is good and so on. The author really made me feel comfortable with the changes. I have read many other books and there are typos or reading errors. The author's opinion is still the same after being reminded by the reader, but the author of this book (at least the part I have read so far) really changed it, not only the words, but also some small sentences. To be honest, I feel a little flattered. People are really stupid.

I feel like this book is as good as the Welcome Back to the World game.

In the previous chapters, the long settings and translation accents are very discouraging. I would like to give you some suggestions. Use more Mandarin and less translation accents. Do not mention settings except for non-essential parts. For example, the section about Dream Man and Prophet can be completely omitted. The first few chapters are very important. If you can trick people into it, you can trick them into it. After reading dozens of chapters, you won't give up easily. It is recommended to stop updating for a few days or save the manuscript to sort out the previous parts.

It feels good to me, and I am very optimistic about the author. It would be nice if the writing rhythm could be better. Many important plots feel too little written, and a lot of less important plots are written, so it gives some people a feeling of being confused But the overall foreshadowing is quite good, and the outline looks normal and will not go astray The book list has been recommended, come on